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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,Yc6mQ_re#? x
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,
L1W^9\px 結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
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唔錯唔錯~你的筆法可以出書~應該可以成為世界10大暢銷書之一

biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....i2O\vA!Is!O7_
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:$qZ:]Wh1WbPX-J`
好抵死....
G0`)P#~c4i 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]eU(h @FFr0Sz'@ E
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得.../s"o8V0d A*}0fh)k
個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

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移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
9F@j8uI;I 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]
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3aq F)?Io 個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D;W+Hq%mB~5|O L`'i
好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(CpC TwA)[

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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素 O7[]u!vG-G
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!! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp
MCxlg f s(n} 佢講野好有point..
Q9m[(]Abye 而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁6P{5p?:R/T.D N

(S!`Rbd 甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長! X.L+O(G2gZ3N
假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:
5f@/c:hf&? ^U 我比較支持篤篤xp
j+m*D4]3X l;A\;a$PX/H 佢講野好有point..... [/quote]
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(i.?8O%h"a@ 甲狀腺正d:lol:)WP.\:C J
支持你向呢方面發展)T*N2}3\)A(Kp
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:iK]L4B4])v
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甲狀腺正d:lol:
6K#LAG T$r |0t 支持你向呢方面發展0dM2O/K0\#a/x)t q
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote](\,YYR4b'|@3hah0J

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希望你計族KEEP住呢個偉大既精神.
?~4I'Eja3Z 笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!)Q/c%fx`*N0\
支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持5lxz'h;S(S,ro+e0qK!oG
我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂
j?aZ$yk{ 我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦
x,s*O8US(p(K [ 當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!!{[S.bBx1oh9y7^
在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
'B,?x f^P"y-YT 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]-k`(I#~6|o#VC}[
...你果單..太小兒科...
7xV i{PdE)` 其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍... S"pV~|*g
就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...{Vn"G u_2z
好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...'gIh8Q] N&E2r-c&o
石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...
[S |*kB5x 由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...q l.V0I,lOX

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本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:)G w#Em*F/T6W1E [M _

-X;?D$`&a ...你果單..太小兒科...$Fo{1Ki
其實呢你... [/quote]0W7gb'UE3B&u r G@
not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?E,We({7i4b;}(l n#er
this method very good wor.
C7QcOE0dD and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:,FP+E@!Pj9f
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this method very good wor. XhL A4G EGI
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]
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你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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