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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,uL`-nR5mD8ef'n
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,X_/wY.q
結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
!B&L*?m,sXT 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]2?G9VHBRpR
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biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....
0P xv1b3Zm 移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:|7Uc PK*T
好抵死....
(n/s1BhzB 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]
FFl{G,n 移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
\+{;O6n in X 個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:J$L)I HbC

[FZ7G d1C 移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
:Ob3y T`:Z 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]
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個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:Dg/~J S0j)Pb&V
好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(
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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素 2[&i.S!RO\
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!! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp*brgy9bja)Q#O
佢講野好有point..
o0qx$aI#Z$[+v 而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁:M,~t-~G)Y)W
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甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!9ZV'fH frH
假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:
/Ot&dVbe |F N8t 我比較支持篤篤xpD ~|Zh G
佢講野好有point..... [/quote]
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甲狀腺正d:lol:S4~2@ _X1o
支持你向呢方面發展 ot4|Ct|Oj
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:'V6X)ITtP-s$FPO
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b.r {)|$^3v{(Ri 甲狀腺正d:lol:r N,H,}8m|W
支持你向呢方面發展
6X$tns!vz 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]
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甲狀腺  釘橋你為我地EF帶黎無窮無盡既歡笑.
+Y*hMr }V;] 希望你計族KEEP住呢個偉大既精神.o#d5q+['M5@Y
笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!{OxO.D;LG#f*wn
支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持
w4Q,U:v@UX*G 我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂{?B:nq+c.b9uF2yC
我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦
J$Ni+w0}5eC4{IX 當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!&m|RW Iy U
在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:(m8H3q!D Cu!d*k5Y~
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]_g~)G:J
...你果單..太小兒科...
Z5e zD9fxd0YH7\+HY 其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...
S8lq4FaI 就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...
g9h!V C*F 好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...
a3D ]n(W{-k@i 石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...xN-v6fsG
由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
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有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:
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[[i] Last edited by JCer on 2005-6-12 at 02:03 AM [/i]]

本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:6R6v A u/c
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...你果單..太小兒科...*N M9E-dWw
其實呢你... [/quote]
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this method very good wor.
$qF8}DV and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:l I \3D5\
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not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?6\tT(`|5x
this method very good wor.`2e/P5Ew]k(K
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]
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你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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