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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,#K$U8?%po
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,
3F(r7i+O7Q$] 結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:ObW:j8d{F0~
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
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biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....
b$m1`H g z} 移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:jWh.Lm*O#Q5N
好抵死....PU.tC cb0V"b
移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]^/q*k^j-Y*G St
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
a W(I EQs&N 個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:"LO mQ O4U7^zg
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移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
){7_Pv`| 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]ht5c}oG4[ gi
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個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D
7P7@pul7P 好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(R R4ySfg
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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素 E j9B `1M1xo,X
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!! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp
d]F!e9x 佢講野好有point..#c2q"Ov+E'lid5A
而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁
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8U;f8gLY/\DT/zO 甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!
/h|B@R'o 假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:H5Ht\Y;K k
我比較支持篤篤xp+s9`4N~T_
佢講野好有point..... [/quote]-[mP7A5@/V v2`
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甲狀腺正d:lol:
;yu)qZqYh%a!G@ 支持你向呢方面發展 pH8eZ{OeB
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:v4h_ { \s
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甲狀腺正d:lol:
Y4lO-E(fT8f9Cw 支持你向呢方面發展%~cjG)H e
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]
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笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!
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Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持
,Bg(iK3D1xR)e:a 我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂y t VA"d A#E[
我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦
W{pg%G%Sy,cZH 當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
Oa `A_/t s2^ 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
cYjEJ5v0J5p o.M2t 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
.g%L(fu0l ...你果單..太小兒科...
#A y2H_lq 其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...
;XT*?SE1v"z(t 就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...Idx9OLbbfAw/L+a1d
好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...7L"X)a Bp[
石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...
0G5yD F h 由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
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(?M9q;pG nX 有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:'B;fK+^Uaf2m

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本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:
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...你果單..太小兒科...
T[L k8q"bU 其實呢你... [/quote]
QNV?h{ t.I not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?![Y#v$D;k%|'g5E
this method very good wor.
h0pGx0b Q(M and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:&?n,yo+R
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not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?
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你點可以當係笑話咁睇呢件事? ohoh 可惜
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你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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