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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,
dg)t)YI7uV 所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,
.l2X%rWz nG3sB!`#I 結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM::@)a*NCI
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote][@2k6^4p$J;f;P

)a:Jwe3D 唔錯唔錯~你的筆法可以出書~應該可以成為世界10大暢銷書之一

biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....:dO3}&n:~0q/oL%m
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:(R C/S'eD4Q)rC\
好抵死....
8EfJ4B*j J(tn]N)D 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]*~-OZv1k}8s:v/F `
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...7_b2M$m,b`[email protected]^
個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:sSFWy0r+M'Y
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移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
/?1B1^e#F@4A/\9A5|V 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]
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個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D
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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素
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4@A:}xN7j 靈異
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r!sq2]/P$j3Z 喜劇
7qfG1Y{ E !! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp,m._ If}e ]
佢講野好有point..
X mDy\A"^2z 而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁B v.k$T?_g
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甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!
qt8k7Y1X p D 假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:
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甲狀腺正d:lol:L8D @3K XD(GG
支持你向呢方面發展y$P N x?5Q&D
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:?4Xsd$B JI
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-bO-ywmCA[ 甲狀腺正d:lol:
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成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]
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${){^~ZT%Z,b 笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!
D(]ktc*_Z p 支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持C,pf)yj:B%Y3N
我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂
)~+vg(wux$vA 我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦
C9y ult"W9}aY(a-q 當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
-J4{@:[$w EC} 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
BMbh8m9t \(_y 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
@? HoZeSYK ...你果單..太小兒科... Z8O`L#_/wd}7s
其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...
|'O)QCu%h1r t6v5w 就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...
_4mpA:t,L ` 好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...&d6E;~e.|
石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...9iz3qsKHn7S
由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
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%Jty:k2rm 有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:
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本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM: xbOUpv| l]

Ox:| i d2HJje4u ...你果單..太小兒科...
.EQ(iuw hf7j 其實呢你... [/quote]
:MFf5MEvPX Y not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?'vH'WR'DWL
this method very good wor.jr:L8N[
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:
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this method very good wor.
1|nM#Q$yVn and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]4o#P} YSS6f
oh, 太可借了, 我唔係想令人發笑的...
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PA+\aL+f'Zj? 你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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