中二程度既世史功課，想大家俾下意見

155220

題目：Imagine you were the Pope in the late Medieval Times, you are going to write a letter to your friend to show your discontent to the changing ideas and beliefs in the society.
2 l/ x( u5 |) X0 _. k
3 u$ p, t7 U9 v6 g% DThe content of the letter should include:8 H3 Y# u: t! F5 |7 t( |
1.What are your feeling about the changing ideas and beliefs in the society?0 V( x& `8 u* z1 B! Y
2.Explain the changing beliefs and their effect with reference to the Sources.. ^' z) [4 y3 Y. J, j) {
3.What would you plan to stop this unwelcome change?
! L/ h7 o. r, P, M
3 j% }# C) ?* F4 ISourse 講既係望遠鏡既發明，一幅血液循環圖同埋莎士比亞寫既一些關於社會上的不公平的故事。& ]$ h# w( y8 k; |
% d$ c4 ]9 D0 e! g% c" y; ~$ v3 e" B
[ Last edited by 155220 on 2006-11-18 at 09:18 PM ]

155220

如果我要答，最好循邊幾個方向去答？* x0 v' l$ ~4 K; z
希望大家除左答我以上既問題之外，仲可以幫我睇睇我之前寫左果篇，Thx) o" L- L& O5 N5 b$ o9 S8 h  n

$ g* W2 V1 u, g我之前寫左一次：
: c2 [% B# j' ?. J
* p  o& B7 ?& ]9 S( C0 xDear Charlie,( s8 E. b' Q* t6 M: K- H
( G, z" l6 T0 H$ w
    I think that you should know that the changing ideas and beliefs in the society,that's not good for us and the church!
* t( \' W4 W3 K: n" @/ n/ E2 _+ ~( i
' z1 q  A' r/ ~; `/ ]/ Z' l    Now,many people don't believe the church anymore,so they try to question the church,it means that they don't esteen the church,like a scientist called Copercinus,he said that  the sun is the centre of the universe,but the church told the people the centre of the universe is the earth,so Copercinus's discover is challenging the church!Unluckily,many people believe him,so I am afraid that the influence of the church will be declined." Y  @0 \9 C- Y8 m3 t; O3 k

: |. ^1 |* ]- \5 J    Noy only the scientist,the writers also want to fight the church!A writer called Shakespeare wrote some poets,many of them are shown the injustice in the society,so I am afraid that the people think that the injustice are caused by the church,then thay will not esteen the church,therefore the society will become disorderly.
/ Y% L. ?0 o6 I5 u0 d" Q2 B* k4 C$ ~( W2 e$ q/ Y% i
    Finally,after the church allowed the people to cut the dead bodies,the people start to find out the cause of illness,but the illness should be caused by the sins,we had told them
% L& B4 v$ i8 T& s1 A! x5 Vbut they still try to find the reason,it means the people don't believe the church!So I feel so! C. n  k& g0 N" M- l1 L  ~) u
resentment of the changing ideas and beliefs in the society!* K( c: Q4 [% w' l  \
# T/ h5 e, x8 D: D% f* M
    To stop this unwelcome change,I thnik a proverb of Chinese is useful,"To execute one as a warning to a hundred."So I think we should punish the people who are fighting to the church,maybe punish them by capital punishment,such as burn them at the stake.After that,the other people don't want to die,so the won't fight to the church anymore.$ H. q& I6 C6 r  X/ B+ a

: q) S, }" s/ |    What do you think about that?If you have any syggestion,please reply me very soon,thank you.7 g# M& h% ]. t( i' `" e" ]% r

% ?% }2 }4 y' d9 W1 e" b                                                                                    Best wishes,% J- m7 R( \! R9 X! o5 K6 m. S
                                                                                    Calvin Bush
9 O; U0 @* q" k" T2 e
( J' r/ _- U+ r1 g7 W0 e2 P1 |[ Last edited by 155220 on 2006-11-18 at 08:06 PM ]

sk

Here are my suggestions on your approach:
/ H! I! W) O- X+ W7 c5 F4 M1.        Your letter portraits a Pope with negative attitude towards changes. Is that fair to the Pope of that time? What did he really do?
2 K% s/ @2 K0 `9 _) B2.        Science advance, and social injustice are facts. But are they really related to church? Or people just blamed everything to church like HK people blame everything to HK gov’t?7 D+ j0 {" c, `" I. m2 p+ [
3.        Could he modify the church belief to fit in the changing world- like Mr. Tang of China in the ’80?

155220

Originally posted by sk at 2006-11-19 03:38:
, h$ ^+ u  ?' a( MHere are my suggestions on your app...

) g* A4 ?% Q4 g$ x* L* Z
2.        Science advance, and social injustice are facts. But are they really related to church? Or people just blamed everything to church like HK people blame everything to HK gov’t?
- R+ I. `5 I$ s7 qBut I think that because the church told something before such as the earth i the centre of the universe,but the scientist said that not the earth,should be the sun!tTherefore the people believed that and they will think that the church had cheated them before,then the influence of church will be declined.That's what the Pope don't want to see,so I think
/ ?% U( g* e  T: Hscience advance is related to church.4 P! v( x0 v" d
About the injustice,I thnik that it's really about the church.If the church did well,the injustice will not happen,so if many people read Shakespeare's poets and they thought the church was not food,therefore the influence of church will be declined again.

sk

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006-11-19 08:24 AM:
# H* b7 i' d( S- l$ t  P5 q, ~4 A7 f& z/ j( y
2.        Science advance, and so...

+ U) z( ^6 H* h" E+ H' Y
' m$ {  K7 n5 Z) y& yYour reasoning is ok. I just think "To execute one as a warning to a hundred" is a very negative reaction and there are other ways that Pope can view the situation. That's why I suggested point #1, and #3 in post #3.
/ L2 U' U# k9 A5 |3 W9 \( E. G4 Q
[ Last edited by sk on 2006-11-19 at 03:30 PM ]

155220

Originally posted by sk at 2006-11-19 15:29:+ L. r. n0 ~) v. N% j

- V0 [: L- Y4 h+ d1 X2 F, G7 Q: g2 A- V  Q
Your reasoning is ok. I just th...

4 e' P4 m" K! s% b/ i# e
: ~: ?" I7 a7 _" J$ zoh i see,thx^^7 J' X& W; D2 b
but i think that if the pope doesn't punish the people who fight with the church,therefore the people won't be afraid of the church,then the influence of the church will be declined,so i think the pope should punish the pope.
* l, E6 O* S2 c$ S* qto punish them,if the pope doesn't kill them,then the action will be useless,it's because most of the people are afraid to die,that's what i think

iknow

我已經唔記得晒f2 ge世史...6 R4 H" Y( v$ s% n

+ J! \9 l# K) O, b8 q! \- f好在hkcee ge history冇果段時間ge史姐~~

155220

Originally posted by iknow at 2006-11-19 19:51:2 [/ S0 C# X. l6 i6 F: q$ O
我已經唔記得晒f2 ge世史...
! C: ?6 j- g( e& }6 d  v' D8 F  H: d; F! E
好在hkcee ge history冇果段時間ge史姐~~

, h: }* W4 v1 q  Y# J7 |( h/ `1 V
咁正？
7 M' D. Z: H, n: pf2講文藝復興先，然後再講１６世紀後的一些獨裁君主，然後講法國大革命等等
* {+ u( |; P& v  ~想清楚一點，有印象嗎？

iknow

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006-11-19 08:14 PM:
& N7 t  m. R& y' _6 N. b: h0 ~$ O5 _' ]: c

# ?/ ~! s( c. z" t& |+ f0 i咁正？: p; }) N  Y- ]- H3 x
f2講文藝復興先，然後再講１６世紀後的一些獨裁君主，然後講法國大革命等等
: Y# t( ^& b$ F( U- ~! K: G7 }* C# T想清楚一點，有印象嗎？

9 w. s- {4 U) i8 b* l3 ?" a
重有美國獨立
& {0 b5 y/ o9 f8 r依家hkcee係要讀二十世紀ge野! ?5 `7 {) O: ?

1 Z& j: u# {/ c. [0 {, W3 e- s[ Last edited by iknow on 2006-11-19 at 09:19 PM ]

155220

Originally posted by iknow at 2006-11-19 21:17:
2 L2 J! o! c$ I! ]1 A
( C# v' l5 o# X! I% f& d8 Z2 [重有美國獨立# Z8 ?  s+ U8 y
依家hkcee係要讀二十世紀ge野
" K$ _0 @! X; l2 r( J+ f" l9 e) R- W. f0 u/ b& ^
[ Last edited by iknow on 2006-11-19 at 09:19 PM ]

- _( N. e8 j) I# r
5 S  ]) C+ h/ j0 \8 C9 `- b
２０世紀．．．我不太感興趣