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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) @- B, d" Q# k& H; geveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 R9 v- u' F6 o8 \; i, k
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Let me just rewrite yours:' P: ]5 [3 M" d2 z. ^/ X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) s+ n* l5 A- P& n5 g% O) Q' H
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* ^$ g* k3 D# N2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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4 V! r* V4 \/ Z) `+ SThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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