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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) Y4 l! w% h% Z7 W U
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 q5 j$ z: H# D' `; S' s" {8 J9 ]% D. D8 `! i& m" }
Let me just rewrite yours:# |5 }/ c- v" [* X. ~$ W) l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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9 T- c2 p+ Y' g- \! `6 t" w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% o! M; Z/ Y. R2 y T" z; ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# z/ }# D4 }5 ]' V0 N
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 |$ k/ }" o+ p }/ X. o; A) C
; y V: m- P# J; N' V6 EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 ~* ]+ b9 c( h) e. |: G
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Gretz. |
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