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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 X9 R1 W C" x, _8 J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' c- I0 m" Q% z0 C8 V. v
8 Z8 k! j# O- i9 zLet me just rewrite yours:# D9 w" i1 t2 B! R0 O
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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9 N6 E1 G5 p+ e |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 P3 K2 F5 A( r; v3 _8 u& z) |
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# ]5 ]* \8 T6 q/ \) a$ kThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ m8 {9 h: ~! _ M u, T0 J% H
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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