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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( u; K! L: ~9 e" [8 d, @
! f5 N7 x- Z7 }it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ j& o* Z* r. |( y% [6 Ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , g) ~3 ?' X$ g! |
0 }( K. Y2 N9 j+ L! b# Y- dLet me just rewrite yours:/ p. N& B1 t/ \8 O; ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) L9 X7 N* v% h: |2 S8 N2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; s; a. K8 S9 _ m# p
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' h. j( `8 F3 _) h
4 x ?& j) b# Z: P7 L( @Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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