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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ g1 x4 P/ E% p C6 ^ y- p* teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 p1 S) S) H5 w& Y& `; S5 I
9 }8 `7 U/ s" x2 H& W; sLet me just rewrite yours:# W0 I4 ?! B2 W% T. w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" `2 A' k' w# `( t9 F4 N
8 }* I1 J# j- z; A8 {7 b P1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& f, D/ o( m7 J6 ~/ S6 M2 p
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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