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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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: g) v& K' A" r4 S" ~it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 d: f1 L+ P9 m0 C0 I
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 j8 V" c# l3 x/ F/ H# \0 `4 q Q1 R# |1 r8 }5 R, H
Let me just rewrite yours:9 a& d q" X$ m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 y& A; f+ h; [1 G: W* { O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! j$ T; W/ t r9 h |3 h
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 n, @& x" w# h; s$ \ c% Q6 c
1 c# j# |8 m$ f1 H, H- fThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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