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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, n. w, O0 |/ [# T/ L# C
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " k8 V1 K- O: m5 ]5 a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ r( p$ [; p, O2 w0 b# _
" l/ _8 ?: g2 u9 [Let me just rewrite yours:9 `' N. ?7 z) Y( B9 v0 T6 N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 o1 u& C0 q' W% H' P! P$ \) G P5 W1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- g. l5 t# G+ O& T C
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# r. x& i2 `1 L
4 F: G8 C6 V/ ]6 E5 TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* {' L4 O- {! ~+ d! S' ]0 s
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