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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( F: i4 b n2 @% G0 K# Z
6 ~0 o( l/ [ ]" [2 bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* T8 ~/ d1 n* Q; q9 Q6 z9 n# Beveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * L3 \/ e% R$ i4 g2 Y) Y
, b# ^4 j9 n- @6 H9 h$ d yLet me just rewrite yours:* J( y5 j, x- H# N/ f$ u5 T, w, v# }
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& }' S$ J5 R9 k. {3 q- ^: i
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ s0 l; ^; Z& g6 h0 K+ o2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 a! w4 y7 ~% m% J }: E5 B% i
) }6 m6 Z7 L; g) W& KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 `3 |0 e) x3 ?5 H3 K ?- U
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 |; u, h' x* t% `) B
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