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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ S% g. Z+ G+ H+ F9 |/ c( {! y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 B- `1 @6 k0 r3 ~4 G' @( a M
- E- H7 D6 `# z. [Let me just rewrite yours:1 q& R8 w( k& _5 n) E" p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' g* t) E% [; Z- E, ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 i, m% m o3 L
+ f! ]5 U: z' ~$ bThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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