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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ \" t0 E/ W; V5 J! Teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 {& k/ l& T% q2 w1 \; @. r
( B7 ~' z. _ ~0 E/ ]Let me just rewrite yours:+ k1 \" B" V9 p, G6 S; |% l2 [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* ~& O! s! E: z# C# ]
* A4 {( |; f; B. J1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 l) E0 L; E% v/ G4 Q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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$ K& V q2 ]! H ~# YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) m% X4 U( L6 {0 S
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