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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* h3 F7 W- d8 H# c6 c$ G. w4 o
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) N" A# \* |- Q e# k
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * w6 a( ]/ P3 T- B" a) v( E/ B. R& i
& M5 O1 P9 w/ E/ y% N0 X$ t4 X- DLet me just rewrite yours:4 C/ P# ~, h2 P0 l a. O4 Y4 n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% L9 v- w O6 V+ l1 `( a( l
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" m& _; H+ m7 n9 O$ ?) z2 d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 G/ Z: G8 d7 ?4 V3 y9 P/ Q; b5 M" D
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. N, N- [; c- T% h
3 S+ O, }1 b( ~; ^9 [( {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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