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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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! p5 h- f2 p3 \) zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# K7 n/ J9 Y! B# u2 S& j# [everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : ], t' q ?- h; c. p% N+ E9 D/ e3 \# ?, q9 T
Let me just rewrite yours:4 g9 D# o4 ]0 |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, P: a1 U8 @9 U1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 V& f! x, o" L& J5 X2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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" n' {6 R1 r9 C }7 H+ YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: {- w& g3 r5 N
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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