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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* i0 x, P; v( a, o. E6 ?
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; F' \4 l! s6 N; t
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - C0 ^8 M+ Y9 R* Z1 O5 m7 x
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Let me just rewrite yours:6 v h/ Y( f- z' a# f$ M. I
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ A5 K! E2 p/ {. f7 {6 O5 M
( q8 k& O4 s( i* D2 E1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!% B" Y! A- c6 G: v0 M0 D$ d
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' X# M$ q# ?! C" [
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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% v8 `: [+ L" x0 N4 `7 r: v- E( C, @Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* I( h, x6 I: P: ]/ n) I( @* P* E
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