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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 y9 j. K+ V' P* s
) q; W' g3 ?$ Y9 Xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - D, [0 U0 ^" A5 ~$ ^& G
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' J. }$ P/ s* J6 @6 D4 \5 ~
/ c+ g# O$ W' X7 D3 y( f: [Let me just rewrite yours:
! \- f1 f# m" s# R3 X! eIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ p% p" u! {" s: Q
" v3 Q* v( `+ G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- x9 }& m9 @! J: b+ E, X7 W
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 y2 p: k, L3 b; M
- B, I$ i, I. l: d9 z dThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 C, Q* P& a2 b% d: U m3 W0 B. n
H. B+ O9 X' \# g6 j" e3 J; DThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 R# b5 u; \* q5 D" x7 h
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