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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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+ e) \3 \' \2 D# M9 Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 d0 `1 ~7 B D i8 z/ r- W( G
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! u0 W( q) L0 Y3 `, `$ |5 t! s1 F- D& I |/ N. u8 r
Let me just rewrite yours:1 M; J* K' w4 U( i5 H% _
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 j& }4 f+ y7 _3 d+ e0 v% d# p9 g: Y+ @
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. {: G& y9 o' Y2 c' G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 J! d; R: d$ n+ d3 }
4 [5 N: T( _! @7 l4 a4 z9 R( r# xThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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