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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" m* H) h, L1 {$ P9 ~9 v- z
6 b, { G u2 K5 q. b/ `; {; ~1 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. w* Y' s9 p1 T7 k3 R, }% Veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; p3 o/ T$ [2 I: q/ |: z
# S$ E! R4 O) F: x4 g* m2 hLet me just rewrite yours:7 E8 L& C4 \( G2 S% F: I: _
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 v4 |) W8 o g( [; G
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( Z+ p6 g7 Y2 Q" l/ L2 {2 ?& E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ j% N$ K! b8 W7 T( x) q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ K/ M$ q9 b% A( f( ~* ~' f4 A
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. e! ], H8 {0 h* q! g& x
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