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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" a$ N1 p# n4 s& Y1 J! Heveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 ^8 M9 h$ z: C" _# {9 x& s
: f' G9 J8 i$ j" N1 j* M% y/ C' KLet me just rewrite yours:
$ C7 M0 M# {# o- I+ t1 F. g/ sIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- A/ o/ p2 F; \$ u! j" {
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& N9 _4 z1 }. \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." y2 S a N( E
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