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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# w8 q3 i( ]" J( o& i
+ `' Q& M5 S! R" Y( d+ u* sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ k% }. u! w; y5 Jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # ]) u8 F T# v) a3 j% @' k7 E! ~( N: I* ~: `6 C8 V2 a& `( {
Let me just rewrite yours:- h: o6 ^! |) l5 W' ~( Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 J: `$ n5 w9 f. l1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ b r: d. |. J, w/ e2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 ^- G/ N! s3 W' H5 ?$ Q
/ a1 i, n, l: H! ~3 \9 C+ B' AThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ B: X7 m" c, u! \" M
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