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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " r8 y; U$ d+ B- F% A# U1 t
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # G1 O1 ` J8 @( T- z! T# x
% q' i' e/ O# [Let me just rewrite yours:+ |* _2 v- z* Y2 C4 k4 `" n2 O) ?4 d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 m" l. T: y" J- _! }) [& m
- w5 C7 q( Y; ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 \+ |1 W& h; p* c ~& }0 X2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., }% F6 R! u; _- k w! h9 ~. b
/ E4 z7 L# _' aThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ s& ]1 p1 G0 u& q% F7 p' p# DThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 T I0 n( r+ V0 {
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