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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; }8 {0 w! h) b. y& `& d; C
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 `1 C* S' \5 t" o8 y, o& L, M0 d; g2 w. p* E9 a4 U4 z; D
Let me just rewrite yours:" \4 o( G1 I2 S" Y) o2 M0 X# w4 [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 ]4 {2 I) U2 q# }8 z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 V* Y: V1 y. X2 P% z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% j" [) s( u/ P7 J4 X# ]8 Y% z
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