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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! E9 W0 F8 |. @3 t) c8 U5 \: B
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : z9 [2 E& x! ?8 y9 |8 G9 Z9 i) L! E
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 _6 h- m3 [# n7 z& i; m
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Let me just rewrite yours:6 Q1 X0 l$ K D W( N" |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 s" Q' A% ~( T8 g' u" E i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! W4 D* v' M6 g( K2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( I: C4 Q; n( e) ?6 i3 ?7 bThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 G6 [, l& f) G" Z3 N* ~3 x
) n0 Z. c- `, [! G# c" KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# A' F( ~; C' x1 e% w* y' y# D
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