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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" j% E) T; M z7 l4 C" N. B W
; E7 m- w; l7 Pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) T; P& \, S% ?7 r2 L
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / n2 l2 _0 l A( y3 ?* ~- k4 B6 b3 ~7 o( S8 V
Let me just rewrite yours:5 p5 h. J: C) h# c8 \' `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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8 m+ z0 t0 }- Q& b1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! E U" C/ @1 p9 ~
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; P1 I. |2 t' D% O$ a
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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