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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! t* v7 \& P- F1 ]- x
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) Z$ H: I& n9 T) p
6 ?* G* m$ l, ^, ~- ~Let me just rewrite yours:
2 ?4 X$ |3 p8 m0 Z+ R/ u$ s8 D6 q* \It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 a* h0 p2 Y" E8 ^. I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; @: Z0 @" b- R% P) Z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# L# ^9 Z6 F; c# Y6 [Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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