wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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hi~tt3 w: \1 U0 S- x% f& d/ o+ `
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦! h+ C' k8 d3 n
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:7 t* A1 @: Y5 {) h7 I" ^8 {9 ]
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦/ y; [7 {' R* H/ o% m% r3 }4 J
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

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wanmankit

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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:  ?9 B" ?$ f! Y0 H- g
http://big.cmfu.com:9080/www.cmfu.com/readbook.asp?bl_id=2877
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呢度有

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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:2 k/ T) R' E. s/ p% _; y6 R2 A

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我又閃.......( R- c( d& F! w( v( [8 M8 X
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[ Last edited by roykenroy on 2005-7-22 at 05:36 PM ]

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:' _' m  H1 n: z( h6 f  U

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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:8 l/ U% n+ T8 B
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我?
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:
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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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差唔多啦，我對呢方面好廢=.=  A0 @6 u: U$ A6 d8 {6 f, ?( n
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