wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:) @6 X3 B' x4 o9 ^" l$ K% d

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個篇戰魂我睇完啦
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我果度冇咗大結局~~# h( i$ V1 S2 P! n9 w( B
你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:# u/ D' {1 L- \+ Y; @" r5 X
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呢度有

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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:# x/ M4 `/ n* Y8 T+ U' z( t' L7 V2 g
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拜~~
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我又閃.......* ^  j  @! Q2 d' }" ?9 d
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[ Last edited by roykenroy on 2005-7-22 at 05:36 PM ]

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:4 y$ b) ?9 i* T8 F, o
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原著係呢度

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e排唔見你既~
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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~  K$ E( A/ G3 ^9 r
你做緊咩??

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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:
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我?
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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睇下你想描寫咩人???  x% @, e* h$ X: ]8 H# B! c6 X
好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:* g3 @9 L0 U+ u+ I3 B& f; {

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