wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦4 N3 H& [4 X6 H/ z# B
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦+ x( ?2 u& W- l! G

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我果度冇咗大結局~~; _: v/ X1 J, I1 T$ I
你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:
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呢度有

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thx~~
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wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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拜~~
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我又閃........ p% e$ V; I6 J  Y9 `

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又話等我番黎既...............

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:& I; }$ Q0 Q1 }* A0 ^/ e
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原著係呢度

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你做緊咩??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~; D: @) A& {6 C7 l1 ?
你做緊咩??

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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:; @' d7 H" Y2 k( a& K7 h3 Y# |
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我?
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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:4 q1 Z% q  W; H% S) I9 `# {+ W: @6 J
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睇下你想描寫咩人???$ K3 x* J4 ~5 I/ Y: G
好似戰魂咁??

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