wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:4 c* |  {) W" \" ?

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個篇戰魂我睇完啦8 {9 H( s/ ~; k0 [6 c' y. d
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

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wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:
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thx~~
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wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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拜~~
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我又閃.......# O% ?. G1 r7 d2 f/ \1 o" Y* P

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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e排唔見你既~
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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~
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2 S4 y+ x8 T9 c2 c% I6 gtt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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睇下你想描寫咩人???3 k, }* {) i6 B+ l  C+ E
好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:) X. W2 \8 v  g' M7 K4 r
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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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