Originally posted by 155220 at 2006/4/13 17:17:
http://www.26fun.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=109868&fpage=1
由於今次是小弟第一次作一些比較長篇的小說，因此希望得到大家寶貴的意見，多謝．

Originally posted by CHECSS at 2006-4-13 19:06:

too short , 內容過分簡單 , 47分

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006/4/13 19:08:


可以點改善？

Originally posted by CHECSS at 2006-4-13 19:18:

long d , 內容多d , 複雜 d

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006/4/13 19:18:


每一章寫幾多字好？

Originally posted by CHECSS at 2006-4-13 19:23:

about this at least :
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Originally posted by 155220 at 2006/4/13 19:23:


咁寫幾多章好？

Originally posted by CHECSS at 2006/4/13 19:24:

don't mind this

Originally posted by yorker at 2006-4-14 09:06:
歷史故事好難寫得好架~
因為個結局通常都已經有左規限~

Originally posted by beginner at 2006-4-14 16:05:
講真﹐睇完都無咩墮入感

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006/4/14 09:10:


咁應該跟幾多成好？

Originally posted by beginner at 2006/4/14 16:05:
講真﹐睇完都無咩墮入感

Originally posted by CHECSS at 2006-4-14 19:14:

no mind , but the ending should be the same with history

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006-4-14 08:18 PM:


中途天馬行空都唔緊要？

Originally posted by yorker at 2006-4-14 22:09:


反正小說都係老作ge姐，天馬行空...

Originally posted by yorker at 2006-4-14 22:09:


反正小說都係老作ge姐，天馬行空...

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006/4/17 14:27:


可以點高潮起伏法？

Originally posted by CHECSS at 2006-4-17 16:06:

see see
http://www.26fun.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=83094&fpage=1

Originally posted by 155220 at 2006/4/17 16:12:


thx
有無C仔你親自執筆既大作？

Originally posted by CHECSS at 2006-4-17 16:41:

none
i will write at the paper ge .....................