Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-2 09:41 PM:
小弟今年中三,要交一篇1500字的功課,...
Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-2 09:41 PM:
爾朱榮要殺胡太后,胡太后自以為削髮為尼,就可以逃過一劫,誰知爾朱榮竟不念舊情,堅決要殺死胡太后,於是胡太后的一生就此結束。
Originally posted by 康bb at 2007-12-2 22:32:
我學校都有功課係1500字小說.0 B( W% }; O. Y) x
聽日交-.-.
不過作校園.# ]" w/ T8 o* V, @* ] ?
簡單好多
Originally posted by 衰貓 at 2007-12-2 23:42:6 I/ F8 r5 B- F r6 A) D+ O
其實依家既學校俾呢類功課唔會俾埋題...
Originally posted by 12d3 at 2007-12-2 22:07:" [# q' F6 O5 |5 _
1500字太少, 寫唔到.8 Q1 \ `% L+ E$ Q! x" h, w
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不妨將重點放在呢個情節度, 加d愛恨交纏, 易寫好多.
Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-3 05:12 PM:
如果以上內容要簡化,還要怎麼做?
Originally posted by 12d3 at 2007-12-5 02:50:
曾聽過一句話: 研究歷史會發掘...
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