
Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-2 09:41 PM:
小弟今年中三,要交一篇1500字的功課,...

Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-2 09:41 PM:
爾朱榮要殺胡太后,胡太后自以為削髮為尼,就可以逃過一劫,誰知爾朱榮竟不念舊情,堅決要殺死胡太后,於是胡太后的一生就此結束。
Originally posted by 康bb at 2007-12-2 22:32:( U W9 J* O: ~+ U. A5 \
我學校都有功課係1500字小說.
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不過作校園.
簡單好多
Originally posted by 衰貓 at 2007-12-2 23:42:& H& |3 w' M6 ^; y1 `" c# c$ B
其實依家既學校俾呢類功課唔會俾埋題...
Originally posted by 12d3 at 2007-12-2 22:07:: d; ~) e4 o% {9 b. |
1500字太少, 寫唔到.
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不妨將重點放在呢個情節度, 加d愛恨交纏, 易寫好多.
Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-3 05:12 PM:" |' P" I$ u, B1 e. n
如果以上內容要簡化,還要怎麼做?
Originally posted by 12d3 at 2007-12-5 02:50:
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曾聽過一句話: 研究歷史會發掘...
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