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Originally posted by guswan at 2006-11-15 10:48 PM:


恕我直言,
真係唔知你嘅自我中心性格何來.
我作為一個旁人,睇到你#42941個post都好反感,
你問boy野都好似落order咁,
世界唔係圍住你轉架,朋友.

我知你睇到呢度腎上腺又急升,
冷靜!!我從來冇惡意,
只希望你明白,
我其實沒必要為你花半點心力,
閣下色文我從未拜讀(因為我認識兩個朋友食呢行飯,諗起佢地個樣.....),
只見有不少人幫閣下求情,
心想閣下必有一定價值,
才多事問個究竟.

我告訴你一個路人甲見到嘅野,
希望幫你可以由另一個角度去睇自己.
我發現26fun,係有次聽到一個女星名字,
但唔知乜水就search下,
見有咁多明星相就bookmark左.
入過嚟1次就冇再訪問.
早幾個月清理bookmark時再入嚟,
見到有個時事政論區,
有d野睇唔過眼先開始留言.
(這裡希望你明白你自己係ef嘅定位同價值,唔係你想像得咁大).

1. 全中佢太自我中心,所以我同佢玩,希望慢慢改变下佢,打擊自大既佢...........其實佢係咪獨仔都好,佢既思想同價值觀都係有問題,要佢好唯一方法就係改变人格組素(頓悟成長)........

2.甘生D文章水平..........雖然我都有篇文,但我不常寫中文,所以錯字好多........甘生D文章水平確實未夠班,但基本功好(冇乜錯字) & 題材新頴

3.我開始留言,都係因為有d野睇唔過眼先開始留言.....最記得bigfish兄d某論

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Originally posted by Triangel at 2006-11-15 11:08 PM:


到e+,
我都應該EF係臥虎藏龍
Guswan, 你好勁呀

鬼叫你咁早出山咩(破處)''Triange'' ........吾係你仲高

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Originally posted by 我愛章小慧 at 2006-11-15 11:25 PM:

我d色文水準一時時架喎 ...

所以咪未達水平,有好多都.......

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Originally posted by 我愛章小慧 at 2006-11-15 11:31 PM:

我23拉 ...

23讀大學........仲要讀3 or 4 年喎.....做過工末

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Originally posted by Triangel at 2006-11-15 11:31 PM:


冇辦法啦
自細家貧書少讀

又關事.......多讀書就吾會早破處架喇咩

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Originally posted by guswan at 2006-11-15 11:30 PM:

睇多d(唔好剩係睇色文)寫多d就得,
努力過唔會白費架.
要接受人地意見,
咁後生實有大把進步空間

我成日叫佢睇我D色文,佢又吾睇(佢太自大)

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Originally posted by 我愛章小慧 at 2006-11-15 11:39 PM:

寫咸文寫到教大學?!?

痴線.....寫咸文只係娛樂or副業

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Originally posted by 大大 at 2006-11-15 11:46 PM:

寫咸文絕對有利於訓練寫作

都得都得.....肯寫肯做自然有得着你幾時出色文

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Originally posted by trista_cheong at 2006-11-15 11:55 PM:



我幾時有寫過色文呀

戀愛版吸引左一大班未成年,就因為你

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Originally posted by trista_cheong at 2006-11-15 11:45 PM:



你邊度有色文睇呀

係EF 獨家的......但費事比你睇.........我少寫中文,so 多錯字