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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 z0 ?* ~: ^4 u7 r# d/ q% Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * ~7 e. c! I8 s" T s! L6 u
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Let me just rewrite yours:
7 [! s+ ]' c N7 _It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( X( F6 Y& ~! M h# p ]5 t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ F$ w' P/ V6 n! C4 V% w* x2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' }* E& W: u0 t$ |, E! v z2 H
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& o, C% u3 y9 } s( c
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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