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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* e a- b8 i% ^4 J& G
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) I' j2 v) E( k. V5 H8 f9 K' L8 Teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 C. S8 ^ R' u3 N2 }+ q) ~) ~
, Q2 s: u0 [5 K0 l& w3 KLet me just rewrite yours:
* F2 ], M" X) wIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% D1 C, F$ U* K3 a6 K5 R
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 F# x: r( y/ E2 K. i
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* y7 P8 E* _2 j( k
* o+ _! d; ?8 o( ~: A3 N0 r, Q* {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& I$ [+ E8 C5 ?# Z+ k4 p
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