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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- v( h" I6 n; t2 g# _0 q- r
7 D" ?* p* E6 F$ Lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- {8 S9 O2 p: A/ k% G Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " M% b( a" p! R+ U
" R2 z6 i$ F' c" MLet me just rewrite yours:/ I8 b u8 s+ p" Q' U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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! P" }: o& Z# B# _$ A( p1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: _$ H3 P" N# G5 s+ O4 D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 T$ W$ S( n: m3 y' ^9 U; {+ ?+ X+ Y
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 t% K; `& W; E3 [
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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