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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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6 K$ I2 h; d( w/ zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - C% r) R" b F6 F; A- m/ k
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 o0 }4 ^- c3 ^2 d
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Let me just rewrite yours:% J1 r' E9 x0 X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 D6 C& ]: c5 g% A& y* Q
- d* h& z- n' t, L, T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 q& O* r& v9 Q' A k, w. f
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. c, u7 _0 Z6 v4 q
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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