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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ J5 p b, X0 \) }' {
1 ^- Q. B( c% E6 {$ v" {! Tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( \! L3 A8 F. p/ a" u# C1 I: ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 e; _' D' X% r6 M. i
2 e) n1 s$ X& h1 Z% aLet me just rewrite yours:+ ~: X# k' L* |5 h9 \- O3 Z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ ?! I, b( _! C5 g4 \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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5 J, J- E' @ m w4 K/ oThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. c' i( ]6 n9 f1 o% H( y, O+ m) D
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 M" B$ D; F5 x
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