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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , M" O' x; N3 L( O; @
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 E7 z* ]# W J( O$ r2 L1 b
2 {% v6 n" x0 ILet me just rewrite yours:0 C+ J: O6 V Z9 ^1 d9 l S# h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. p6 x) T1 s. l; Z2 @9 M
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, a. S- p. r5 E p, w1 p
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 o4 l* o2 Y4 p& O4 n
6 X+ f0 ?8 q1 A6 N# JThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., @# O) _. }! z' G w% ^. {1 ^
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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