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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( {1 _" W7 y- c4 Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " X' Z1 m- \9 H* A4 R
0 u/ j. w. c7 X6 x" d+ R) S1 R1 l2 TLet me just rewrite yours:
' C+ N4 q7 ~# c" q: K1 v8 {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* ]/ [- r: o7 V
6 v% z# a- j( {8 {# x1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 m' D: M9 T! \, f, N% G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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