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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: } g' L( P! ]- ^* N
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' o; ~6 f+ Z; v& B- N( q( w
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 M* \* K' d/ ~* b6 E
$ K5 K9 p0 _: |" G: e0 i6 ULet me just rewrite yours:& M0 I8 p4 k8 @4 g2 w, ?8 t6 M: F
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, v1 t, H, {1 t! f2 E) W
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* N; u; \6 B, A$ b: e* O2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: a# e/ n5 j1 W( _! U# ^+ }
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