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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 d/ o! D0 a6 @, T- _
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 y. f4 r* o. ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 n. Q9 g b9 Z) W+ t: m: @& V
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Let me just rewrite yours:
$ [/ _. d2 v V3 q, D2 o8 \It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 F' P. O, K* ]- e1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 K# {! k3 P3 u5 O7 T- f7 [/ B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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& c' G! ~7 [) H0 h% oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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