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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' P% o6 n; }7 v2 p. J7 K
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 k& D) o% }; _( z+ n5 K: h7 s
2 V! r$ s/ S- _' j/ c, _! j. ~9 qLet me just rewrite yours:3 G2 ] r$ A! o8 h* X+ n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* M5 Y* e, v0 G: t2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 F! W4 S5 ^9 _9 d' d
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 O) s( G. F6 c- I$ Y' C+ k# o
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