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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. O& q2 {4 C, ]' K( r( W" d
, l& p3 l5 L! k$ v7 ~6 lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 d ?6 G) B3 G/ |
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % G! u& u9 r) V {: A& y+ W' f/ d* T+ |6 _8 W2 n" @- {
Let me just rewrite yours:, M3 N/ M! D+ Z" \
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 F0 k' t. J: i: y3 | x
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 x. {9 W$ z) w4 w2 H2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( ?$ u9 U! K' s. \( Y- d
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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