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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, j: j( c$ e) r* z+ s8 }everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 S! P3 M4 @, k0 V
3 c' q3 d% u4 D7 W& Q, CLet me just rewrite yours:# K4 h2 `$ h- g t0 s7 ]; b5 D* L* s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, m+ M2 n. E) D0 d: U2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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- y, A$ Z" z: V/ n$ \There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 s4 [; u+ S( W: m8 O) e
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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