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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 q0 i* r) t7 C/ u& Q/ g' g2 u
8 r/ H: Z" @& H, a/ }& {( rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 G/ s/ @6 }+ ~9 H; R5 l5 S
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 g2 x& w6 ^ f9 _+ B, f# @
( l, y$ G% ^4 {" Y1 W# XLet me just rewrite yours:- |4 E0 \) H9 J/ N0 A
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* s5 O2 w# X9 b$ }- F. n- d
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 i; ~2 `, @" ~1 B2 G- Y. v
% u4 B* M* c% E( `. R3 j hThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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