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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 p& R3 o1 F" O. g" T+ b7 f7 C
( K9 W& A5 \3 ?+ u. pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& w* K/ S. q) @0 S. D, ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. |# v3 Y; x. ?1 @* @9 \5 @5 _2 c
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Let me just rewrite yours:5 T- x# C* y" d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 z) M: E* p4 v8 t/ [ H& Y6 l- x
6 ~" V" G! C5 o H1 h* [: \- v( L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- p9 H/ [6 @- P. E. ?9 `
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., r# v" R3 ~+ O; k2 {( R' m
2 X6 Q! ]. @ KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& a, }0 ?0 u% F0 }0 N
, g& ?; A9 j4 X, }1 f/ KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ ~& y6 t6 m7 ^2 }4 T4 _
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