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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 u! c' o/ B( P/ _$ e; m
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + A2 u: V; C) N+ f9 Q
( W# u& C2 J# h7 D* n+ d J& m5 k& ]Let me just rewrite yours:
" b0 i+ k' M5 I4 cIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 A* p' f) [, v; g' W
2 v6 I4 u; k1 j* b$ R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, i6 r; q% d; m: @% ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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