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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' P. f% N' s% r" }8 i v
o, I6 q9 w9 ]it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : Y( C; q/ R2 J. d' O
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 h/ a2 q7 ^9 h; w5 ~9 o8 F& c7 Z3 \; p
Let me just rewrite yours:: {7 d2 Y% ?! t8 ?, u
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* ?# A; j- G8 `3 y
- [' M! s1 S/ |% U0 U5 p- b1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 h3 }. H1 Z& z% W3 j2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( \# s+ M" U' M1 h
4 r+ z, \3 Q( h. u8 uThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 K( _" A4 x: T% c! H1 y Q! ^1 R
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