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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ s7 h/ l9 N7 u* |; p9 a; k
8 v( {# T m7 I4 J: {+ \1 ^* f+ uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * m9 ~" b i8 O+ [: P0 U- W; `8 r0 X" N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % U' F* Z/ o6 l2 e
[" `; N2 m4 N# X+ QLet me just rewrite yours:
$ N6 m4 ^6 q3 G8 a8 rIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 Z: I+ Q: F& G/ K( c1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! g( g. I, l8 C# {1 k9 l$ _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- p* h; T- A- e* R) a; k
6 L: @& I$ c) \2 EThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' {2 {/ o' p% s5 O0 p; n4 v( K
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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