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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' C( k8 \# `* y X$ s1 n
) B0 W! d/ G3 b! y9 D- v, U# vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & ]; K( c) T1 K9 ~# N n! M9 }
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( c. J: z' U" \$ w6 o# f
% X B9 B5 ^3 R) ALet me just rewrite yours:
# G& L6 h. u; w# GIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: G, X0 D8 u4 f+ J2 @/ o
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 q& c& o( y: i0 J! r- g2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 p& O W0 [% r( W E& W
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. f& E2 B) n+ U7 K( F4 {9 bThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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8 M8 m$ C( p8 t0 t# IGretz. |
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