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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 Y! U, X2 S9 ?it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 Z3 k$ H# l0 M2 r5 eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 g V, I: I9 a u' f
' Y; U9 D" t9 r6 n( JLet me just rewrite yours:6 A( K: b$ [1 Y: i: P! I/ V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' t: r3 c/ t5 f: ~) D/ I) m' K6 A
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
K5 R7 T. U: y7 Z# k* n' f- h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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: \+ x( M. E5 K2 u' cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. S; Q8 r% `% M0 O! N
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