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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 J% e- I3 t1 l% ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; Z$ _+ D$ O) R3 U$ d7 f0 ? o, w8 ~) ]; }
Let me just rewrite yours:
, O/ |$ E) O% ~$ J9 L& {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( n5 l: \, E, R t: ~! w7 P2 m
5 w, w; ?$ h) b( ?1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! D9 z9 N4 J" ^% a4 B- Y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* M+ \- k) f2 t3 {
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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