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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% |+ m0 o C6 A% h g
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, j: |% V, X* D5 T9 m6 aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 `" U( N3 T8 d2 j: z! ~
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Let me just rewrite yours:! W! J6 f8 l2 S, ]! h; D: K/ |" r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 M. W) |$ v) |# Y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 ]! z' l" l# L( Z3 x
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." a2 y# ?+ M' r; i; |7 |7 K& O4 w0 d/ `
' N2 Z& k0 S* f& ~/ G6 D8 LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 A7 }/ t3 q, ~9 x9 w- b
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