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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 h# W. E) M( N# q2 I
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 a( w1 K/ m reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 B& i* L2 U: O; v0 _
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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3 n! q& q, F5 |# K! v0 ^, V1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 k7 G A+ Q% |6 W) X& Q, |
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) t8 q& |0 R7 x0 \! DThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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