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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 b8 }: O X# s- t9 v6 e% G
0 t* \+ o+ {/ ^* q6 f) Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& x' _& p; u n9 Peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : n$ H1 N5 n, r8 \8 v& a O: y
3 H9 `& [# G6 L" BLet me just rewrite yours:
6 F* j: a5 c6 P" J+ {6 t0 N% Z2 bIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ ]' q+ H: d$ j8 e$ A
5 x. D; P1 l0 g3 l. A8 a* C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 B; l8 L( j) q, i) V& k
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 \# `% k+ G. o5 O8 G% e5 V
, U8 i9 H+ A4 n7 A& I N; ?Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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