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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 q: ?) e6 k% O) Z5 W2 f& Z5 m3 a( a c' O
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 }, \, d( Y7 B2 Q" E1 n/ l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 c$ g* x7 c$ B5 i C" ~' v' E0 [! Z6 o/ J4 A- e
Let me just rewrite yours:
- y D6 b, S1 z @1 T7 NIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 F8 t. p) _( i# _" B( K0 U
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ U1 ]- ?, y) b6 {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: P j3 x) B, a2 \
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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