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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, `* g0 j0 I& X- R& x! P1 J
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
' X! l$ x/ H0 i7 ~) deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , L, [4 N/ w6 Q0 @0 @* g
$ ]! r Z" C7 L# [$ U$ Q: @ iLet me just rewrite yours:
2 Q4 k% q$ H, h5 JIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; I9 T1 s9 I( \$ i9 h4 G8 p! p
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" U; ^- O5 [* U. a$ f9 T2 M- e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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* [7 b( l0 r7 [, K gThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 J% q N. j5 w( n& G2 e* u1 ^
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