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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ d1 @$ c3 P( N
4 O# x# W" p' W- {$ }3 B+ rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 g* o0 _( b6 \, E. x% T; f- h
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # J( F9 C9 ]8 S f7 ~: q
2 u* p8 ^! b8 q# Q) G/ nLet me just rewrite yours:% ]; t! i: k. Z- Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 [3 _3 b* ~ i) T: V$ |2 k
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ Z6 M) e( ~' Y" |+ S" X* W0 {2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ i2 a- I, z, e% m
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- M# V& I# z+ Y( e, M! i# `' M
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 q4 B6 ~$ z$ F1 K7 K2 t
: ?( C* p% K. s' qGretz. |
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