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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 G. o ~4 R3 \& ~/ v$ |3 feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 R# V/ I- c6 m" a8 z, ^
1 Z' W# L; ?4 s" P2 D, eLet me just rewrite yours:1 v2 T4 z# m9 \0 Y; i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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% L6 B" o! }( ]: p' \0 }7 V7 n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& i) [8 l% ~3 ]5 N- f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 C3 y( m, f) VThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 R9 r; e% s' C
- R+ L- r9 u) Q2 _0 {4 eThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ W& ^* z9 \1 [/ e8 a6 u
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