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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 [( C+ Z% p$ @2 o( Z) U
, j. O1 F. M1 e' {6 Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 ]% _& C9 p. Y) d# l- c- T
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 o5 O3 ^- G n) Z
' D1 V' h" g$ qLet me just rewrite yours:$ h; E) ^& D' W2 V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, T4 B0 [0 Y# [( R, K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! B2 B/ e E9 U; ]; @* u
7 k. B3 Z( J& r. `3 e- q( J7 LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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6 Z! Z# t6 |& s6 pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 \# E" E+ o7 C' z& @: l" V3 N! B
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