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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; M6 i) L/ T' f5 w( v5 y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : b0 v, R2 k! p
2 c7 d9 M# `$ @8 ELet me just rewrite yours:
5 J$ }: c- C& k$ y0 N9 rIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 p5 r0 {: X L! U( w2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# k/ d0 t! E! {3 n& A* s" R
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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