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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . u- s* ?( C* I. q) R
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : L7 i( [- b, t1 r( _
+ y' O7 a& k D4 c) qLet me just rewrite yours:
$ E1 U1 G# o8 {7 [It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# ~: ]0 E2 v R& {; l1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 p) J$ |) d3 c8 T1 R2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, m0 w f" g q5 ]# t& X9 r1 ?% S' @There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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3 c+ J! h9 } J2 q2 JThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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