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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and z: N- A3 U: k( [3 B" J1 h
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 G; T r+ _1 {8 x$ C+ F( x) g; K( M" S: [( v
Let me just rewrite yours:
8 i) a4 c/ B8 @& ]- SIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, B4 Y* Y/ _& N& O% I
3 @7 w+ I, s4 M/ g$ N! j5 |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" b4 @3 c4 k# ^' _2 B9 o; y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! y+ D. g3 b" s$ L. |
, `/ h" W+ U' PThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# G( [. W' }/ a0 d& OThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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