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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " v7 e) I/ a" l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - o8 z5 I' i- Q2 K- F3 y! H& g; H+ p$ _: v" a
Let me just rewrite yours:8 o& a- L- w* `" Y% v3 E, u& g7 ~# U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 T7 l5 Y4 x9 H- _& x' v1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% i. X' E1 s7 o; F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) s6 V8 c. ?2 l8 b: OThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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