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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 w- r) {+ B* O1 a
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% f( }+ b$ \. m* u* p" peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; `* m- Y) R, ]+ B c( ?6 I2 J( I- e: N8 c3 D& f, ]7 ~: ?# s
Let me just rewrite yours:' k4 k0 s3 X) q( H N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& P' `: I4 `$ B
9 Q/ n- }5 E+ y6 m1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# R! H- {* V4 R2 _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 s0 i+ O/ w: o3 O' z% [8 A ^! C
, j: T. A) S. q+ m8 DThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- J3 p- z* P, ] i8 n6 S# J
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