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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
v0 K; E# S4 `- C+ }0 Severyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & t' C5 \8 T. f4 O t" S
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Let me just rewrite yours:- F. D+ U, y9 M9 A, i- x/ R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! u. r M, w* d* Y: V
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; I$ z# J+ d+ r/ }9 U2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 M) h& A; w0 m' Q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' Z t% z6 W3 z2 C* Q
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