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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ G D+ J& v, s0 V2 C
' t# W/ L0 n6 s9 q6 }) l+ w4 @2 \, L4 W3 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" w( R" x. H/ f+ d4 L D. ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. u9 @* E# M5 v- o0 W. x
, Q$ g) T6 s1 kLet me just rewrite yours:9 E d- x% t8 w* _7 v; j
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* m, R/ p8 p; @3 }* d
, `. |/ i, n1 r$ e2 @3 @1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* Q5 _' B: |. C4 k5 g6 s. J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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5 F# k8 R$ n/ m2 i) WThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 T# q+ ?( O* v" e
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& F! i3 J; E J
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