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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& f( q2 P$ w5 r. F, S6 Veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , T0 g' y+ P. ]+ z) t2 Y
5 i- j( i0 K# v- _Let me just rewrite yours:
7 a9 ^* B! k) D/ R: zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 Q, M- N& m f; |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: M2 F- D9 A( w2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- ^$ O+ J" e, N2 J- p
% E) s5 k6 |3 x1 {& \1 U/ l. N/ wThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 v, M! e* k( x' PThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* l% x/ t" g4 ], |: [% F
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