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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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/ G$ Z M6 H7 u2 c0 ?$ Tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 C; q) }% Z T2 G7 keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 [ U0 {2 y. X( _7 b
: @$ i7 e Y9 O- Y! W ULet me just rewrite yours:
/ x4 I# L' R: F8 qIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# | S6 h9 k- H8 E& d& j1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 d1 A2 `4 g8 `/ N/ M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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- N S/ }# [. k! tThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ R: J4 d) O X' p5 Y3 B( J' zThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. R4 C6 S" [. ] A2 y
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