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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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1 x+ b! @5 h; t8 y2 |it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and E. N C& `3 S6 O* ~5 i
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * _, u2 p1 ?/ y+ B7 G
G. r: r3 X( U3 X) J! }0 v3 i6 ALet me just rewrite yours:3 p4 X. f* A0 X8 l; w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# i. o# P& }5 X# U: p
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 S* ]6 `' a6 H- X# {- k
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' V0 @! v0 x& E4 ^
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, G/ j( Y$ G9 P) Z3 sThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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