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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ Y" w# h, c2 V/ W$ I
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 `, u" M9 q0 j; s" w2 x, J9 U, weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 ^' `% @7 q. K
3 A- \; ~4 U2 {. j2 B7 oLet me just rewrite yours:! b" V! V. \$ n, `4 x" t( @: j* R! b
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! }6 Z" \2 @! B7 u
1 r2 H+ v5 O9 T! A* y. o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) Z; c/ R1 U, E* \ u9 v
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# _7 L; `' O2 u9 Q1 x" pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 j9 A- v2 b5 Y! L/ Q
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