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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 j4 y3 t( b& _9 w5 Q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + V2 t- Q# [" v! U3 p, {& i6 m
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) r( A7 U+ A5 v$ o
3 U' U) q/ B: F) Q/ zLet me just rewrite yours:" v3 {' D& N- o4 K0 z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me e5 I `) I9 s: J) @6 Z
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 v% }+ c; n3 B6 Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: i) P% Q! ], [' B9 N: D
9 i# W1 `; _/ e' m! ~& JThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. y( f* w; G6 u! s7 c
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