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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 Z6 j" \+ Y* h9 _' v% {* i
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - D5 H& X+ K2 Q; H3 u9 B8 i# V
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # S' a1 R% I, l) j- m6 @1 n1 T
' P, |7 r: f) ^* d* s0 x, o; h' PLet me just rewrite yours:
6 t8 {' C! \8 g6 p& W8 c$ B1 rIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" @4 {9 L4 K2 t* N }
% j# l8 Z/ I7 d- [. b1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& U$ K$ u$ @ z$ `. w" ]3 I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( i- N/ A. Y2 r9 b. D) }9 {There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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7 e" {. I9 u" F( M: i: WThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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