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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( ]/ {2 R& I* G, A. n
# }" O: Q+ R+ P4 D( Uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% r6 H2 F8 E, B$ |* U. g2 K( _$ Weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) l& ]" h# n- c2 r' Y
' I% T9 w. k6 ?' H* U9 | BLet me just rewrite yours:
" D: }. K& l" Z- v+ k: wIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 A, U5 D n/ ]1 d" q
, \) x. @3 l }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: _/ V0 F3 {7 a) k9 |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 x- g+ p- N/ [& \
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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