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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 ]% ^. Q6 q; E$ W0 E1 E- yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! p1 A# }$ T5 {' V9 x7 }4 y
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Let me just rewrite yours:% S; p0 @, \& t7 Z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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+ t2 U1 Q, Y& n+ ^& [! R2 x7 S) Z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. ~! J+ T3 y: Z) {3 N, p2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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4 S0 q2 ~2 k# ~Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( T5 T# q* M2 l+ T+ Q
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