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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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. a4 Z+ ?8 ~8 r6 w4 ~% {" Pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! @% R' ~8 m+ l9 y2 C* {! X4 `3 P
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 O* J- l4 y+ D3 C t( k
# l8 e/ W* D0 ~4 X# x6 i1 j/ \Let me just rewrite yours:) N& C, v) s! z/ X- i3 d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* a/ Y- y; h# |9 D* ~1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ o$ H3 b0 k j3 T9 Y2 b4 }
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( z7 s) y- D4 W. j
2 I$ n2 A% W# M# a3 c8 ~Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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