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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) k- K$ r9 i, {( |4 L
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 Q; B' }( `, s/ p( ~% f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 e% Z, z7 I! |7 \! ?6 ?- Q
& E; R8 ?8 U3 y' Y) i+ W* xLet me just rewrite yours:
: q2 c# E0 E# S3 F6 \It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% X$ n& F. ?, Y& O2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ T: M/ C! U" T$ }6 Z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: a4 S+ U; P0 |" u' [: j
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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