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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, N1 c' b, r$ k& P( Y, Rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ X& c& p+ ~" n: ]6 J! `" M: g7 z7 L$ f1 peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & [# a% |2 u( n. b8 L
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Let me just rewrite yours:8 ?* N" s: T0 D6 d+ s0 s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 D+ w9 R' W. w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* z" Z4 S0 ?8 M+ k6 _* @0 E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; L% ?, y# P3 |
Q& E# m s5 W6 W! L' ~Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." I+ B. U. O: Z
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