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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 ]# J! \, F! f' }; d
6 c; A' v1 ]. B7 m! `it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ y2 @# m' ]8 b0 E" G
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * C7 d0 ^ M/ _) R2 N, s
v* \$ V4 j6 j' u# ^+ S! iLet me just rewrite yours:- {$ S+ D. {% b: ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( m1 g5 p6 U0 t) t, `
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& S5 a8 ?# H2 `$ {6 G# s8 m9 \
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 A2 B+ t) f0 e0 R/ {
5 e" g' O \5 ^+ E; q2 yThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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