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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# U9 {4 _5 |# @. B. j. ] o
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ O; w: |. ~; ?everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 |9 `# C- t9 t! t
0 f. s* ]# ~( D+ N0 l0 KLet me just rewrite yours:
$ X& \2 s, w' a. D1 k- G$ f/ NIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. l: m3 o- w9 t/ I
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 ^- o0 u w q4 q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! z- G8 J' n3 c: w( C
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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