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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- W2 f+ [& R; e' r
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( g1 ~5 B% F5 e3 w; L7 U* R' Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. H) A' e5 J) O( T3 O
6 H z9 O8 X7 h& Y9 b2 E' aLet me just rewrite yours:
& f( C: z$ u. A# g# H9 EIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- J$ N- | e3 k) L* W( B
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 j# G5 w+ m4 ?% F' V: W# {8 w7 w* D
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 p. E9 M" Q2 i, S- P& l
% Z# n( z# S3 y& V2 yThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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