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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 Z% Z" R& I. o' a# h5 V) q
( ], Z! K( ]) C4 }2 I, f; Sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 T! u+ S8 W5 Y0 ~everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 q( X, J9 ^+ T' {
3 J3 b+ O c% R wLet me just rewrite yours:* v: K/ n( m9 E0 L( J# Q$ [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! D& s. R3 p0 q/ a% u
6 E t& C) L0 V/ @0 i9 c1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
U- Z! { l2 F3 r" o) o* b; P) \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 D+ Z, o: n; n; { Q, z( h- Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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