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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ J, g, i7 u: Z) C$ a1 d$ G8 G& A
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
' p/ y7 x( P5 X0 Q; g- _everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 Q$ ^4 t- n4 d
: {% }5 V& t) T* b9 ]& _Let me just rewrite yours:* w% J: F+ X, S/ r0 x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: ^5 }+ x( S* x$ U% y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* [" M9 D8 u }! g3 q3 J5 J0 R: C
; m- {4 ?$ A/ s0 ]3 s+ J# l/ w- LThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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