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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% c, ^% G6 E0 f1 }5 y
" n; _7 n# E2 H5 L2 cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 v' a% u( R9 x1 ]6 H! z2 `9 Heveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 j# _- w; C) K! h4 }6 X4 U7 T# @* [
Let me just rewrite yours:5 v% I% i2 z6 V; y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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& j; ?: ~& q9 T5 u: W p; s/ e1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# p9 O X' g% b" z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 x2 E1 M9 r! c& X
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) R3 ^. b2 ~. p# E, v
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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