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mk政 發表於 2008-7-9 03:46 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]e_e[/i] at 2008-7-9 15:43:

喟 , 我果兩篇文D評語呢???:dev: [/quote]

文筆通順,內容緊湊,節奏其佳
可惜,內容變太,只適合18-30歲人士閱讀

Lee3 發表於 2008-7-9 03:47 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]trista_cheong[/i] at 2008-7-8 11:41 PM:


雞仔自拍照？:lol: [/quote]

你以爲我是edc？　我頂多像倪震，用動物掩蓋:P

e_e 發表於 2008-7-9 03:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]mk政[/i] at 2008-7-9 03:46 PM:


文筆通順,內容緊湊,節奏其佳
可惜,內容變太,只適合18-30歲人士閱讀 [/quote]
只適合18-30歲人士閱讀 ... ED只係色情 , 唔係變太~~:dev:

Lee3 發表於 2008-7-9 03:50 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]trista_cheong[/i] at 2008-7-8 11:43 PM:
:good::good::good::good: [/quote]
ok no problem

Lee3 發表於 2008-7-9 03:52 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]mk政[/i] at 2008-7-8 11:37 PM:


岩 呢到 最大o既一條版規就係
唔可以x老母:D:D:dev::dev: [/quote]

偷了我的葡萄還提老母？
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xq9s6fdrTdQ[/url]

mk政 發表於 2008-7-9 03:59 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]Lee3[/i] at 2008-7-9 15:52:


偷了我的葡萄還提老母？
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xq9s6fdrTdQ[/url] [/quote]

仆街 睇左三千幾次都笑到我仆係到

大聲o的
點解你做萄提子 唔做蘋果:good::kicking:

trista_cheong 發表於 2008-7-9 04:03 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]e_e[/i] at 2008-7-9 03:43 PM:

喟 , 我果兩篇文D評語呢???:dev: [/quote]




呢個………　我未睇第二篇


第一篇個感覺得……講咗﹐由雞變鴨（唔曉你明唔明白:)……）


由以前你嚇死咗嗰啲冰文到依家﹐好大突破就係啦～:good:

e_e 發表於 2008-7-9 04:05 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]trista_cheong[/i] at 2008-7-9 04:03 PM:





呢個………　我未睇第二篇

... [/quote]
我唔明呀 ... 講到我明拉~~:dev:
而且 , 可唔可以講下寫作技巧 節奏果D野 , 睇下有咩可以改善???

trista_cheong 發表於 2008-7-9 04:05 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]Lee3[/i] at 2008-7-9 03:47 PM:


你以爲我是edc？　我頂多像倪震，用動物掩蓋:P [/quote]




用動物掩蓋…………:D:D:D:D

gn00987333 發表於 2008-7-9 04:07 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]trista_cheong[/i] at 2008-7-9 04:05 PM:





用動物掩蓋…………:D:D:D:D [/quote]
唔知攞咩動物先謝得哂:D:D:D:D

trista_cheong 發表於 2008-7-9 04:07 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]e_e[/i] at 2008-7-9 03:49 PM:

只適合18-30歲人士閱讀 ... ED只係色情 , 唔係變太~~:dev: [/quote]



我頭先仲ＬＯＡＤ唔到﹐以為mk政嘅意思係"變化太大":haha:

d228216 發表於 2008-7-9 04:08 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]gn00987333[/i] at 2008-7-9 04:07 PM:

唔知攞咩動物先謝得哂:D:D:D:D [/quote]
一隻蟻

mk政 發表於 2008-7-9 04:10 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]trista_cheong[/i] at 2008-7-9 16:07:




我頭先仲ＬＯＡＤ唔到﹐以為mk政嘅意思係"變化太大":haha: [/quote]

:D 哈 變太 means 變態

gn00987333 發表於 2008-7-9 04:13 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]d228216[/i] at 2008-7-9 04:08 PM:

一隻蟻 [/quote]
:eek::eek::love::love::love::love::love:

e_e 發表於 2008-7-9 04:15 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]trista_cheong[/i] at 2008-7-9 04:07 PM:




我頭先仲ＬＯＡＤ唔到﹐以為mk政嘅意思係"變化太大":haha: [/quote]
1, 快D睇我第二篇:dev:
2, 我E+又開緊工 , 寫緊E篇有可能係甘文史上最溫柔的~~:dev:

terryng2 發表於 2008-7-9 04:17 PM

又有新post 繼續頑童俱樂部好開心
希望有更多人來這裡留言

Lee3 發表於 2008-7-9 04:20 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]d228216[/i] at 2008-7-9 12:08 AM:

一隻蟻 [/quote]
Micropenis? 那很慘欸！還好我是拜羅馬的神，Priapus的

Lee3 發表於 2008-7-9 04:23 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]e_e[/i] at 2008-7-9 12:15 AM:

2, 我E+又開緊工 , 寫緊E篇有可能係甘文史上最溫柔的~~:dev: [/quote]

那和說“我沒有jack the ripper那麽殘忍“ 沒有任何分別。

akakak777 發表於 2008-7-9 04:25 PM

我又出街la~~  閃la:crybye::crybye:

mk政 發表於 2008-7-9 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]akakak777[/i] at 2008-7-9 16:25:
我又出街la~~  閃la:crybye::crybye: [/quote]

:crybye::crybye:

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