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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,ZX A8G%x
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,a:hk$p&^ z)K%E"a
結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:\oF^uT/Y/d4Y
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
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biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....
Fp(sWwnn uq 移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:z'\7u2bw z^:`
好抵死....
S$^\ {I&Yls 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote] C7aj3^ZZv
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...M}9f2KsU+?SK
個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:
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移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
C5c+B,_.G$E 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]
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yG"F+g8N5v[ 個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:DX'hO)^}iF({
好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(
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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素 #_3S!D@[email protected]
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karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xpGf3X7B~1y] c#[G
佢講野好有point..6EI!t!Lrz z/V'F
而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁
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甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!+b;p2zXXw;m.H9Y+[
假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:Cu3KsX:`
我比較支持篤篤xp
^C;^R~-\SnL 佢講野好有point..... [/quote]
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甲狀腺正d:lol:
q@ C.B`+e(|'}T4R 支持你向呢方面發展
,D5P'Z0s} 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:
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甲狀腺正d:lol:ca~;o0VT
支持你向呢方面發展YV'APes/{'B
成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]e]Gr/`%f,C

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甲狀腺  釘橋你為我地EF帶黎無窮無盡既歡笑.
eP9U3Iy&H {KWs 希望你計族KEEP住呢個偉大既精神.
6n]0E%nx/a Q,mY,k2V 笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!
Y.A[5B3t 支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

下?
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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持
pxJ!_VVhm 我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂(x-u0VsE&l;|c5QH
我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦
qO:O"@"` `o&\m 當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
WU0M5oD5H2?;M 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
T l#]lQo:L!I 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
Jw#du"U&f ...你果單..太小兒科...:d$G0ijPV
其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...%X%EXY E6H S
就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...!|+[Z%W[ z
好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...w._Yqz"i[%f]Cq
石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...a,akP(wkJrO
由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
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L { p XVL!| 有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:9O/E!lR cy

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本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:R:b1ig3o0wkO7pX
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...你果單..太小兒科...
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this method very good wor.
N"Na w+k)P.|F and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM: H|!V6G}L Z`
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and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]?1]3aMd"Y
oh, 太可借了, 我唔係想令人發笑的...&}%p ? E*Z
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你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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