娛樂滿紛 26FUN's Archiver

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,(J g6|!W{)G8F#A
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,2RYJ3Mc#\#wy^m ?
結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
(i&pDP_y 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
{!E8A'Z oL$H
Sg C'FrFp6s,T 唔錯唔錯~你的筆法可以出書~應該可以成為世界10大暢銷書之一

biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....cGd/D&? L7M'af
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:
7yx rqR1`#iY 好抵死....
-d7s)G l@j}t 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]
j-var0v,z 移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
t*l%]?d S J 個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:
)|FL8I;Z6GP~9Z Y q,uRJj:C$Jcq
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
O#PR*P g `0gw;Yj4[,a 個故仔真係多元化;) [/quote]
k&Stu R-e6@ %P2z HJ _-b
個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D
"S]6G9H-p5Ul 好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(
&vR+_-Y-D
4R1VKM@ ] 我呢個故仔仲勁: 中國山區有個女仔出世後個patpat不斷咁脹大,而家個patpat大到閰王都話死左唔收佢

xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素
id?1~d7fTT 科幻
7a'wK,[4h'X@4uT-H 靈異
S*T+Y?7[ q ON9
0q9]|_z 喜劇
g,S8G%b C @,O6n-b"M !! 真係好正

karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp
lv rh%xF'LN c 佢講野好有point..rF]4X#s
而且佢所搞出黎既笑料有時都幾好笑嫁9j,O(qq!z3Q

xB&yr V'meKj0E 甲狀腺.建議你去笑話區發揮下你既世紀搞笑專長!
G9t2xN[ 假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:$i4Eg5n;C||)d I.G5_
我比較支持篤篤xp2YVL,?6}^}I;p
佢講野好有point..... [/quote]
T*L[b!Y o l} a5Na1B+bk`
甲狀腺正d:lol:
T+lZ;cw)~~k 支持你向呢方面發展
.l/T@\ g m 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:NK!w4rt

"^IS~[;Q o3ynBa@/F
甲狀腺正d:lol: ]i3}k/Z
支持你向呢方面發展
4j&s.B'|wFP 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D [/quote]#mJ NB&A(@'q

6C |p.GT:R_
:O.`V)f:i+W3l
7]n/SX*tp 甲狀腺  釘橋你為我地EF帶黎無窮無盡既歡笑.
e7BDu}@]X 希望你計族KEEP住呢個偉大既精神.
R,{ gv/\1gt+D`$u 笑話區一定有你既方向  一定有你既出路!!
{o M-{ [0A 支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

下? r4KP*E!oZ9K-a
搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持
9fA/B(v#Ic]4QX 我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂 `3q)c],eT[g
我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦
~7`l+@$R X 當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
H7f[D`.Z A 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM::bqx4f)B1c
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
[ z8P?Kx)Yp0X/@!o ...你果單..太小兒科...
QSf2Dz)?s~ | 其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...
?q$b(P] h 就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...
5} d p2u{ 好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...
,c N2x9hp 石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...Z x,_+~'U/XLM(zi.X
由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
e!r`;XKx.n/Rm(jI6a }Q0YY)sN8@3?+S"m
有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:
\#O+@9v}&IP'O
T6mA;pi0P(L t"O [[i] Last edited by JCer on 2005-6-12 at 02:03 AM [/i]]

本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:
g%~'I3]$V{:C T
xXd*~L)AX9Q ...你果單..太小兒科...
,Mwr di 其實呢你... [/quote]
7q}(ZQ[sv not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?
r_ s/B|7d#K this method very good wor.
!_$Vj*V%D B5\]Ar[0Z and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:T0B$m sl.VK
+fsyg6@$G^s
not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?qOv2D:k!~z4P a
this method very good wor.
0Phu DV w4s4R and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]
Rs0}\-? G~kI oh, 太可借了, 我唔係想令人發笑的...E"c!r-i [
你點可以當係笑話咁睇呢件事? ohoh 可惜TF"C0Et;M
mf/gFc&G\:b
你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

頁: [1] 2

Powered by Discuz! Archiver 7.0.0  © 2001-2009 Comsenz Inc.