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甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-11 12:20 AM

跳繩惹的禍

係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小朋友只可以玩跳繩這遊戲,p/AIVZ |G
所以有間學校舉辦左跳繩比賽,有個肥仔好想勝出,所以係草地不斷跳,3D_#YJ0Cf7a(Ms
結果跳穿左地殼,跌左落地獄死埋.:o

aenco 發表於 2005-6-11 12:25 AM

good !! very good !! wonderful !!

joebar 發表於 2005-6-11 01:24 AM

er~~~~好似簡單左d喎......如果可以有多o的detail 會係一個唔錯ga故事主題~~

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 02:43 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:6N(Z8f$Y*].Eb ]
係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]Y S-?0tK D/p
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唔錯唔錯~你的筆法可以出書~應該可以成為世界10大暢銷書之一

biglin 發表於 2005-6-11 04:59 AM

is that a joke actually?

左輪仔 發表於 2005-6-11 03:53 PM

好抵死....(Y x"Y/Y5`-B `8h`3N+r
移去吹水版=.="

發表於 2005-6-11 04:29 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]左輪仔[/i] at 2005-6-11 03:53 PM:
b&Uei-P j.HJVh 好抵死....
A4_A c)h6?5~S;A+l 移去吹水版=.=" [/quote]{'d4shk#_#z4s
移去空間靈幻/笑話區/無聊100%特區/SPORT區都得...
m ]&b Gf7? Zd3k 個故仔真係多元化;)

happylion99 發表於 2005-6-11 05:55 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]奇[/i] at 2005-6-11 04:29 PM:
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/JDc7}Sy_U@&Y,o 個故仔由<<空間靈幻次元>>這一版移過來~~~~:D:D:D:D:D'M9u'Q*wY5Dd't
好似無人願意收留這文章:(:(:(:(:(`"c-z|Fa

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xthmkn 發表於 2005-6-11 07:19 PM

真係好正 個故事有好多元素
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karenmoe 發表於 2005-6-11 10:35 PM

咁個肥仔係跌左落地獄所以死左,還是他跌死左所以落地獄?

Christy~呀華 發表於 2005-6-11 11:14 PM

吓!:o

Dr.anger 發表於 2005-6-11 11:32 PM

有點呃post同想上位既感覺

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-11 11:45 PM

我比較支持篤篤xp
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假如笑話區有你既無限創意支援.定必風山水起.愈做愈旺!!

srfqt1 發表於 2005-6-11 11:49 PM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]honeyharajuku[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:45 PM:
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支持你向呢方面發展
ps*a C$o)A6k;v 成為各位26fun member 快樂的泉源:D

honeyharajuku 發表於 2005-6-12 12:24 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]srfqt1[/i] at 2005-6-11 11:49 PM:
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2]#m0W.?:fi| 支持你!

Rika 發表於 2005-6-12 01:24 AM

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搵唔搵得返條屍呀?

甲狀腺 發表於 2005-6-12 01:50 AM

多謝大家給我寶貴ga意見和回覆我的文章是對我最大的支持2Ir#NZ[
我加入26fun都係想帶給大家快樂
#b&N#S ZU+p6o4K 我的文章在什麼地方出現我也沒所謂啦S'l9WS2c ~7|4C
當然亦有些人對我十分不滿,但我相信支持我的人是比仇恨我的人多既!
-ZZ`*[`9E&BC*?,p:Dk 在此非常感激曾回過我post既弟兄    thx

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:00 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]甲狀腺[/i] at 2005-6-11 12:20 AM:
+^.{S\Pz9u_rk;x-["b 係幾年前大陸山區地方,果度好落後,d小... [/quote]
1H-N-e%Y\ V9io[ X&v ...你果單..太小兒科...
h)O B~"[8V;r S 其實呢你果件事之後, 個肥仔的同學, 見佢咁慘, 想同佢去執返條屍...
!nF7BR2Kh 就用同返跳繩去進入地殼內部...但呢位同學都醒少少, 佢在跳之前入左去一個石棺內保護自己...
tx)R1VT 好啦,一切都準備好之後, 3...2...1...跳!!...?P Xx,b*UX(]fQ
石棺真係直入地底...重穿越了地深...由地球的另一方穿出...
7Z#z#|(K.Cx%Q 由於衝力太大, 呢位同學都死左...好安詳咁死左...
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有一D資料要補充返, 就係石棺最後係停左埃及的某虛, 而呢位同學既名就係..."[color=White] 法老[/color] " :lol:
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本篤十六世 發表於 2005-6-12 02:02 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]JCer[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:00 AM:k/GD;f8X(s~$W

#j~QbNv ...你果單..太小兒科...
I;u0E}#TC7L/p"?G 其實呢你... [/quote]
Gv l2|t ^E not funny at all,boring,you want to make us sleepy ar?
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and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny

JCer 發表於 2005-6-12 02:07 AM

[quote]Originally posted by [i]本篤十六世[/i] at 2005-6-12 02:02 AM:[&lT6_ke
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this method very good wor.;w-YI0l$gq l.Y
and you think yourself is funny,that is very funny [/quote]
0oJMX?T oh, 太可借了, 我唔係想令人發笑的...
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wsO't{;f2}:h S 你呢個什麼...準板主...總係喜歡追住我呢...,可憐...

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