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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% Y3 {3 g+ q ]
1 O! j, @: Y4 S/ l& z$ d8 [it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' C$ k. C$ w2 z2 j# [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " F l3 s0 I7 p+ u; E% l
- n! Z9 A% q& W7 gLet me just rewrite yours:' |8 Q( l' L: }; @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 F U' V) Q) ]& y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 ]" W* y# U( `! P9 k: N9 @" I* l
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: v" T" f/ j% N/ H: R" z
/ T3 ]& A V2 Z! xThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' i0 ^. R; p+ W! s( Z7 S
5 J; I7 {7 v+ k8 H+ x( ]# KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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