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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 F. G! b' R q+ A9 J' I7 G5 n
, D# o1 @# h6 S- f$ N! eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - Q& C! _( n" j5 J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 H) K, |3 j$ c5 r
1 V3 {+ y5 p" R% R6 N: x4 y$ mLet me just rewrite yours:8 M. J6 U5 v. V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! \9 q: a9 @, l4 V
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ L! c) ~) r5 y, s
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 C5 D p. i, k5 {" L2 f X4 p1 s
7 ~6 f5 C! o" r# h/ UGretz. |
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