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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " D& r) u4 r, v$ R: |" J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 P" D0 Q2 ^; F# A& G" z
A4 I% F; H$ W1 P' lLet me just rewrite yours:, I+ f$ r$ S$ r( I+ M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ J6 a, F: ?0 \; I1 }* `
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# r2 Z1 }* ? h5 o6 m: q& z' Y( u7 q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# u9 h) r3 b7 y1 T
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