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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / ?* C" ], G2 S" w$ L4 b9 G
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & O- w8 k3 @* N2 f6 Y
0 H0 U8 T1 T$ N6 MLet me just rewrite yours:4 N( @1 I0 T8 c( i" k! H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- O9 l# w% g. o" y4 B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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0 n: _5 q9 f+ R8 Y6 T4 zThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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8 T3 O$ Y7 |* S4 @, g& M' VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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