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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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/ Q7 n% n$ G X# G( ?2 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
' d6 Z$ w$ o% q; p, c/ l$ T* eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' u1 D% P5 I, l. j
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 P& r6 ~% ]; e3 J% i" @# T% f
{8 r" ?1 h, a- H. M9 A* U5 [1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 E# `3 C. Z+ Y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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