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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 ?" G3 u8 Q8 z0 L
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: b2 S# j0 f* leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' i9 _. P2 h: }. b( k* u7 i" | z
! M/ G$ r+ Q% G+ h4 H; p2 lLet me just rewrite yours:
( g! p. L3 u6 [) d3 k& [" k8 KIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! f! _" J/ m1 U3 X
( l% _, [- O+ i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 s1 o* |% K9 G. h; V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! d; S' x4 c( ^
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 i3 c) p6 ^1 e ?) U, a5 T
/ _8 n7 s6 z0 n0 t! }Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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