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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( G( k. q" _# _# _
H* I. S3 Z8 s4 Z0 y8 M# n. b# F& h' Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- D9 Z8 i" R9 q, u* Z5 severyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , `8 n: n) E9 R1 n+ t
8 f$ W& n, {5 v* f1 c! pLet me just rewrite yours:3 k2 Z1 H) W3 a* h! w8 A! I
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( n7 d+ L/ u# f9 T$ [& r
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 x# G% ` C6 G4 B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ F3 w5 K2 _, C' G: I, {7 U
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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3 h$ K- d C \# b# I( kThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 ?0 B/ F* c8 v, z7 Q! z9 V
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