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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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: n& s' T1 J3 p" p# r4 [2 F8 uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 T7 [' S6 e7 \& k" Q; c" {( A
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( X3 m9 D. D! M' A
# @- o. s0 h8 |Let me just rewrite yours:* }" j; W- s8 N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( e; D- Z8 g0 ]: f5 h: h3 D1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ o; [8 e# a. E2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 ^# r, z/ i R
( h/ @, J( w, p/ MThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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