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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) P! _+ z8 v, `/ \
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everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ p( n# q4 `. q/ s0 _1 M2 F1 g( R
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Let me just rewrite yours:' z8 r2 V$ I& G5 U+ B
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 B, c+ l' l% b! k
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# o8 M: m) y; _* j- X/ s F" d& s
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." i$ n2 D z1 Y7 X3 v
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