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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: ]$ n( c I$ u( n; A F! d) Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . o# `, h( _8 _# u, ?, y
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Let me just rewrite yours:
# V6 L. _' C/ T9 O; J( I* n; W& |' ~It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me c# B- S9 ?% h$ T' D3 c% U+ y
3 U& `+ |. ^8 s2 C5 B; y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 ]3 L, D1 n; f' k; x
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. b& s& j3 r, p( p
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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