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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% H% h/ p9 p! e8 {( C
6 N4 J5 D! D& _4 b7 Dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 r; S/ O6 ^" x. T& L, Jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - S+ Y; {8 |. {
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Let me just rewrite yours:" ]4 K }1 U/ R- R) o- a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 r! g7 x, j, h% o! Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: T/ ` p- n- h9 u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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: L- D3 P0 e- P9 d3 `9 N% dThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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9 O8 ^3 l8 N2 Y+ [$ ` ^Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 l* a5 R" x. E2 ?
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