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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( g- s, i/ m% E7 b0 A r! h
7 E" o( _3 M8 k* X% U2 Uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ ?1 \4 \, n' Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) l R% l1 A+ b
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Let me just rewrite yours: B# `5 r7 t9 W7 R$ d. g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# @& c r$ V+ Q( e2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." m' q* L# Y, j* _& h4 }" [
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' _3 b3 E. F+ YThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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