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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ X$ m9 R0 X: U1 _8 L3 Z
7 P* Q& X5 E% v( W4 e: D5 iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 L, p4 ?5 K) Q* i0 ~ c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * S, Q; c) F5 D
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Let me just rewrite yours:/ z5 t7 ]- ~, [1 x7 I, B7 ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; \. j$ Z7 n: `. N* p8 Z& G3 {1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
Y& w* y: P% }" T8 T ]) k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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7 M( j+ ?9 v( A8 CThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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