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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# ?5 E) I6 B! `" Z- B9 U
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ P- A! P4 J+ `, [. Y$ Geveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 n$ Y$ s' v9 Y3 g8 n( E& S
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Let me just rewrite yours:$ u3 p1 i8 t% n! c# f, m; N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( j+ R! c/ Z8 [/ i
# @* M8 l" {1 M. G) \ ?1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 U8 r, V! l- v2 T5 U: k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 e* h9 [6 x. g0 V
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! {* N, n- S+ L1 o. W* m7 w, t
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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