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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: D. {: {0 P4 I. ?
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : Q6 ]4 U1 u- p" s. |: @, c, f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : s/ Z ]' p9 I! t5 H
# m% i2 z- {1 ~) F& OLet me just rewrite yours:4 e: W. a6 e* ^. k, D' f
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ S6 K/ T8 z' Z: _" d& z7 M) ?
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- N/ m' @/ c7 G4 _, H, x# \
. `4 ]" H1 x' CThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ Z* O1 ?9 H$ ~6 z
8 H# U4 k A) ~' l- ~0 \$ a- SThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# H D* P% y1 b) P' j$ b
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