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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . Q- d3 N1 d6 r/ ]$ W$ B: f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : l k8 O0 D5 K
' }5 i5 P. W2 i/ o3 Q- Z$ A, oLet me just rewrite yours: L7 G" n1 t4 }2 A: }: a4 S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, q; P2 k5 w( C) d# i: |, h) O o
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" p; X' P1 Q7 m A! ]. z+ Y" f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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- Z, x1 N" c2 }" q: vThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 _: ]- G* g, k6 TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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