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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' I/ L' ?9 _/ W
4 V9 p: B+ F% d9 lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 Q+ s- j! d$ X- ^- S
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 X/ W# Y2 D3 t5 c" U- ~; i2 T+ ~, g. a8 C. V
Let me just rewrite yours:8 M/ Z5 x) ~7 G5 u! S4 A! \$ r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 `9 T& Q1 }6 ~& v
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ K: C6 N' F+ W# E2 V# M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% U4 y4 x3 F6 i" l, o: {/ D
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 Y; [0 ?; `: t
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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