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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) e4 h$ f7 O7 E
! {7 H4 m, `3 w; y( ?% Eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( [# Q1 o2 `" h A$ Q3 leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - p( G3 a' u" v
8 f$ W0 b, q! C& TLet me just rewrite yours:: S @4 x6 t# K n$ N" N3 R+ O. j/ c; ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; g' e7 c" I# [1 x1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" z& l4 L/ r" Y2 Z5 R5 t2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( u: l# z' _( ^3 \1 B& L0 H
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! b7 N; [( g8 C" F$ w* J, G
+ a# E. p& Y. y& [* H8 ~: i% |% |Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ }5 w9 U k' M/ z' B
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