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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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; `0 H$ e" L( Z& g5 ~it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ W# Q* z/ A i4 z! c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. S f& S" {/ G9 G. o6 G2 c
3 N% Q7 V' S; b* ?, B4 L6 pLet me just rewrite yours:4 I+ a6 X" V2 ~3 a0 ?; |. ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 x$ b5 k# C3 w; Z' ?+ T2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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! ?. m+ F, s8 O H4 [7 f1 [There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., [8 {7 B( N1 Z2 P" q/ p1 E
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