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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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$ H J/ F9 \3 ?% R1 F1 _6 @+ U$ ]it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) C# E5 }& \& m qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & o7 ]5 J, J5 W$ ~( V
' ?$ T, x5 l/ ^Let me just rewrite yours:' K) F8 Z# K' M7 _/ a' i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 `8 E% S& O- A& v0 y" i2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% q+ ~( B& H' ?% {
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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( n$ E! m$ {! O- a/ m. T+ zThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! j- }0 n" b) ]" A! e9 b) |
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