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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ `- O/ a9 O/ z+ P% I3 ?0 m
8 W) B( g" l, X5 H t- vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; W C6 y# b+ r" S0 z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 f; e) Z Q* U6 I
7 ]1 B/ n: f# R, d4 ALet me just rewrite yours:1 Y- W Z4 W7 l6 ~3 m/ r& B# A
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 M6 s8 z! q4 B3 l5 H1 L# M
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 S8 Y" J3 f' a/ O4 R& P9 L2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 [: @: A4 B- e+ M, B
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- F; C+ i( i' W. Y Q5 C" f
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ r( M" S) \; L2 X, K \
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