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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( O9 x- ] {1 K0 B7 [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : H: J) ]7 K( `# L0 B" A
( V) p. ^0 Z1 O* y3 y9 B) ^2 JLet me just rewrite yours:4 C. s2 N) l' M$ g* g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 o) P8 V8 J6 p2 C: f# t/ m
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' Q) H! t/ T: u9 N& \0 \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( C6 q4 Q* v6 a, b; M* H* b8 [
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 @" w( z( I* k6 P) p" W I3 Q
8 I, @: r" E- Q' bGretz. |
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