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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) A; ?! c* P- d9 i# w( h' ^5 Q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 X& K& d: ^9 U) Jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / `5 ~' q9 Y4 Q: x$ U' q" u5 V; ^: u9 X0 Y) a
Let me just rewrite yours:1 O8 B* d9 V x* S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( o# X N) k, h0 _1 _1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! N, x" {! B3 c2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; A0 Q3 @! t6 G$ }
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ Q' O: a# l+ y4 ?1 n, ~+ n1 r
( P1 Y" ?: R' b) j1 fThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 E: z6 H6 Y0 Y. U9 l+ t L
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