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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 ^1 a4 \3 } e' O3 g$ weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) J3 p/ i7 D+ a* I. W+ `& ~) q
3 R9 q% G, L( t: E H( J+ BLet me just rewrite yours:6 I, m' f! `% [" B" I9 e' I
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 N8 J3 [" {# W0 b) ~) h' O1 S
6 G, [1 R" X% v/ @4 f! G% R9 y+ C$ Z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
l6 y- E6 N; d% D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* G- f& P# [' G; c" Q: L; h' s
2 p# Y/ F( G' n6 E* \' xThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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