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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 x5 B+ @0 ~4 i8 Z% G. u& P
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 e) g3 [0 D, V- u6 u$ M. ?
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Let me just rewrite yours:. ?, j/ @% p0 {% h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 E D- B) E. E' x0 V! s' Y
# w6 ~5 K' N; U2 i9 Z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% F4 q1 [5 D2 `3 m& k3 ^9 Y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- g0 O+ x3 S: r& _' S
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& R' j- _& `% X) N. X; I, W
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 Y. z" p1 f& d) e* n
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