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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ z' \% Z7 g# U, U
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& E9 h7 V2 N- ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : t$ N( O! G$ C c/ R6 o% q# Q7 _
2 j/ L4 z2 w+ Y2 H z- e/ GLet me just rewrite yours:% x5 h9 L. E" k8 F" l+ `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 x0 U2 i; L8 ~5 m7 D6 h: w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! X+ d! |% T( B9 y( D$ q& l
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. v2 j- Z9 u: o8 X
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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