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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& K2 r' W( Y* H8 J5 F) Y c
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & P1 G- l- ~/ f9 L, O7 F$ L" k
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & w/ Z5 n) G( E# X
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Let me just rewrite yours:. Y" s, m$ I& K2 w: Q8 y; i7 R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- R8 g* {+ B( @* ]! E9 p2 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( B) f: W) J! c* \There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ ^- K! o+ G" L- |9 l1 u/ M6 g/ }
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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