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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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1 R4 o, ?; x! A/ J/ J+ i2 H# vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 d+ L/ T$ L% i# k7 u& P$ k7 @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 y( i, p: Q" L0 Y/ D" p) \: e9 _- O4 ^
Let me just rewrite yours:" A4 ]( I& W5 q6 O
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ e% }- @2 O& X$ L% t7 u1 `/ K O( c7 b
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) x0 D3 u# x( p; x+ t# l( Z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow." D, Y* |( w2 T; T
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 U/ |! J. V/ w I5 q4 R2 f, t* l5 u
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