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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: `% d+ V) c/ X; p7 I8 v
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & k" v0 H; R# k5 ?; S8 z/ @! q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 n: d3 p; s6 _ p
6 Q# K$ G/ u( F. b M- S. n+ E2 YLet me just rewrite yours:) Z3 i0 J- D" w( X: Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# A5 d! Y' t7 e6 C+ s/ @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) h1 l/ I7 }, d
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 @6 _1 I! |. V% D3 k0 u
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