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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. m3 C$ ~) ?% t3 q
% P: h8 ?! E: I- d3 |1 B8 @) W Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 N3 q0 M7 ]% ?2 \
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , y0 h# O' g( A, i- j
# U& a P- t3 R0 DLet me just rewrite yours:
% W8 a# }9 V* C+ g4 {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 N7 d( H; x8 ~, u$ k, ]7 U
3 M2 m. [. b* i' U6 P8 G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ ]; \( `7 |9 `5 `9 {6 {2 z1 J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 D- K; {* C" b j: h1 ~
+ M# U. \" ?* ?( ~5 o6 s+ fThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' `% O. [/ F: i: |
P; w! |- v2 B3 Z) nThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., P6 x: J* T6 L$ E: [( I
, s0 R b& n k V* a8 Y/ \& HGretz. |
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