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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& @8 @# ^7 t/ ]7 e3 A5 j1 [
# g; F& M5 r0 O, b: v- R: R' Nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 B6 M+ e% e) |. N. S) ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 \1 f0 H- i" T1 y6 g
6 I/ [; @7 P6 x6 i) E/ wLet me just rewrite yours:/ s, n0 ?2 ^, f' F0 i. t1 L8 v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* m- {4 L) n( p
& V8 O5 F* [* w# O5 j% y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 R, a5 I3 Q+ S
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 h/ p) P( H: B7 |! a3 `' A4 k8 X
# j' N( M# }0 c3 W% uThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. n7 ], v5 k& w, q e" F% M
) e! ^' z. t! A1 FThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." I! Z h4 L$ J# Y" ]7 H5 A( g
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