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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& @& M2 T: n* y
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! Q/ j* }% S) X9 O4 |
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; i1 u7 O1 k8 v2 }% b2 s' t6 V$ x
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Let me just rewrite yours:
, ~2 w$ i C4 r8 o( J) WIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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{. H" i- I) |4 w- s# n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& o+ b0 s) M/ E" d; }, U6 S# y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ F6 h5 w6 w0 _
3 m8 |' L) E0 w3 X9 SThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 n# ~+ n: t6 v; |6 G9 g. G
! k: ^6 w# r w+ @0 [; J& d+ KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: L& g1 m) @1 d
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