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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* o" N' d) u4 x5 b3 w! \' {
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ B9 L/ R! E+ r( J% s" }! ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # G9 y5 s4 J$ E5 K4 R& b
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Let me just rewrite yours:3 T1 B) M$ B3 S, Q9 `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# [/ q9 a3 B' b" W6 r1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: k0 }8 ?6 Y4 n
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: w+ D% L( c8 b1 u- O5 i( n6 W
: i' j1 @+ A' I1 [$ ^There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 r4 ]+ @. P, H
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: w, R; n( Z) R _4 z
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