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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * Y$ U+ O" k, |
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # O+ K& v% e% ]
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Let me just rewrite yours:
9 ^7 ?8 t. j, I) S: F9 |It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 M( I) R% c+ I4 f' Q. [8 i' B( g U1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 Z5 ]8 g( K. m6 r x+ \+ W2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. P- _& q x" c/ ~% s
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- d5 }9 m1 p$ t9 F' H1 M
( S4 A9 M8 I0 c! k( F/ ~/ @Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: E5 M" L5 k3 [9 x0 K# I
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