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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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6 z* N+ I/ u( J3 J0 j* ] w7 e: ?4 ~5 z. Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # R) K0 O# k; L! O9 [* ?1 `& ]
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 p- B- u, {& [) k& ?+ N) a
. @1 \2 @3 @9 @* g, T, f: }Let me just rewrite yours:( @- V- U5 ^8 ? E0 I- c# [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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{/ ~, l+ N( x6 s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& @1 ` s+ T3 T- S% P2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 q; D0 Q4 ^0 G8 P
1 a# M$ n" y9 p0 D/ B1 FThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 v6 l: o4 T; G# e- n9 P+ r4 n
f* b, h- x! @( A `Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. a5 q7 d; u8 C& e. h0 s
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