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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, f+ F& V, S( |1 S7 Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # X) O! R7 I( T* l* n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # d8 E8 I/ t) }" o. [( Q; ^2 X
) E5 U/ v2 n) V: F4 g( n/ wLet me just rewrite yours:# g+ H* u+ Y6 s! u" F0 h0 K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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" k1 E' v+ T6 f9 K1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 y4 w9 `9 c7 \- Q8 I+ Q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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: R1 C4 q# b9 e+ i* i4 G) EThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& S# Q( a- K: U0 D# N4 a
) J& A! U' A$ o7 R+ i `+ ]Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) W6 N) A+ Z. d9 O7 }
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