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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- v4 i7 q% F! ~( F4 Y, i+ o% C" Heveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & V7 M; C' J: d, _9 J9 u# ~" e2 r
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Let me just rewrite yours:2 Z: c: {% e1 z9 y J# {
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ ]! m0 B) a; z5 m' n- d: [
3 s- O5 q& i* e/ s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, t( w: W$ v7 u! F0 u+ G8 t3 b2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." f% I$ M; i) {, {# ?! `
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: X0 o: j& [! a5 M. d
9 i1 v6 n; ^! i# P. X1 ` ^5 GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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