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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 I; a9 W9 h" w+ f9 Y8 b6 P
2 l, q) ]* m1 A9 L5 T: O' N6 jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 D- f+ l! w" {: _( _0 n8 s
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 f; D$ w! l! [3 W% A9 C, ~# }
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Let me just rewrite yours:
1 Y/ g+ ~8 x9 G$ yIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 }* B; ^9 O$ C$ J* A9 V/ i- _
2 Z% S" M" |1 \; P* r1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 {& [3 J* \ R' L; M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ `( v. z$ n2 u \. @! j+ u: TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! L- h0 {9 R1 }& L! U2 n, D! A
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