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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) F. R2 F0 t* o
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( @& ^; a+ m% X0 d5 e7 K* o7 q
: W! w$ H3 C( x* x7 `Let me just rewrite yours:
3 }( P) o/ G" F xIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* k u; Z. ?6 _0 W1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ q6 j, o4 M" R5 Q& u+ L
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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* d3 f _, m- m2 E$ nThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 ~) [( o5 M* b0 a& D
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ s2 p- d5 N: }
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