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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 |* |- `& z. ^: b2 N
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ d6 a4 z$ ^7 q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 s( v$ y3 a; ]
, j0 t- Z6 V# FLet me just rewrite yours:8 y2 V& E+ c) j2 X2 O6 Q. L3 T
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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" z6 }3 m8 L/ ] Q, J. n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# f+ |' {) n, T% o3 A7 ?+ R' K/ l
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 ?: j5 B+ s# }9 F7 k
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ N! N5 q, v% a1 v+ L! Q: U( HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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