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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* g2 d+ l7 @7 Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 q9 E9 m5 A A# S" Z, D6 M1 J7 F& n B" W
Let me just rewrite yours:' q( ^: C2 H. k, F2 l' b
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 N" d' D/ _/ q& m$ T0 |: }, ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( U. K# g& S. Y8 Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 V0 r, D6 y, U3 A
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( A* O, v' t# N3 g
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 ~5 `6 e! I( _4 [
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