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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" G q7 f$ N, ^/ C
- L3 J) g7 V9 x( x# M7 Uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
n8 y2 \$ F" C$ peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . [2 |" b' |, o# j# q) [
' @$ g( b6 c, ~( bLet me just rewrite yours:+ X5 c3 F! [+ r" F7 P! Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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\9 }# G8 C2 V7 y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! R! O- S* f7 s& P, W2 @8 v; _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' G! h4 R- D, x: p9 M2 C9 i
/ ]0 M( C( _! k9 {3 r" w( o* iThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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! V [' m9 n1 [$ O6 EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 y, f% j* P2 e3 v8 s' ]3 {$ E v
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