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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" O; q6 k6 I; Y5 y* h. U; o- S
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ b4 v( H$ ~4 h0 U1 I+ x- F! ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 h( Y; B2 T) `: p
$ g% d [" k% d+ ?! cLet me just rewrite yours:: N2 _7 X w3 }
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 e+ H1 R; y6 d8 V- @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 U! V$ z1 R, FThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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: {9 l" h8 Q3 X* wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' e2 q( g7 V! Z7 y3 E5 v( w
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