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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: J$ m/ y9 n0 ]% [; _
4 V! |# U# s- G5 F: q: s. mit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; D' ~- ]5 C6 q; k5 N, _2 \5 L) n neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 m$ k1 ^* t. I" q( j+ z& N& F5 f1 S& Y. A T
Let me just rewrite yours:" s6 _2 s9 i3 V" a, [& D3 Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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' J! g6 J$ I/ ?6 }4 r. w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 H6 N5 |; H" {( }, g* F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 h: K/ P- R9 A5 ` L: J
) j6 x: L) Y9 q) F6 NThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 p: T, E6 M6 {; k) U e
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