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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 ?, i% {) \ Z* u' d) a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + F" z8 a! s: W2 |$ i
' a# T% _" Z3 u1 z+ Q4 U, dLet me just rewrite yours:9 y, r. z5 U0 M7 `) ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 ~* @, H2 b4 g8 b2 a" r# Q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 A- N& d( i( | D; J
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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