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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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- z {: j9 U4 g8 @; G+ }it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 t7 o: ]5 w* d' ^
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 B/ v! q: W- n+ b5 v( B7 D+ C6 W
+ i% ^" Z3 a9 O6 SLet me just rewrite yours:* G* V! W _/ h7 R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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/ G' G, v$ X. T }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! n8 P$ }2 {9 H9 o! h6 ^9 ?2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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2 z. R0 [, u \' [) Q0 W, wThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: S3 t/ v3 D) O* K( _
4 W5 v# _8 }* l% ^+ K3 C' m- IThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." H! D. J# ^; r9 n. s8 y `
9 {$ @1 Z! h* B8 Q7 v9 ZGretz. |
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