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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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/ M6 W$ h8 J' f$ |2 v1 K5 d. Ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 p" H3 s Y% j* ?$ P
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 E9 k" j1 \8 U7 K' @8 [) _$ J
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Let me just rewrite yours:
5 X1 _/ f0 V7 X h7 D9 @6 \. zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 p$ o0 @- ^9 ^' N8 i" C/ f
5 ^- H, [4 u% w8 d9 k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 F, U7 e. U" D" D- I- p( q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., l! e/ k7 _: w4 [
/ H2 C3 w+ c* q$ u/ vThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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