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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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& [# j6 p& p; Mit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 Y$ g5 B) X7 Y$ F# B# Deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . K% o# f ? }9 ?+ Y
9 e: N! J5 |8 T5 T& N( O# iLet me just rewrite yours: j. n: e D, R3 Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 K) \9 K, h( x- j0 }9 J6 v
8 k$ B9 v0 a- l2 P1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
k& c# E/ o, b9 I3 F: @* P* s2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 o2 H. F( Z& |7 h
* v& T7 ~; n! R3 O2 |There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. `. b0 }$ X& R
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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