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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: Y: m1 x5 K) k
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 C$ X9 \* l2 _1 m3 G) V- n6 E1 a/ m
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( M/ Q K2 i6 f, j5 U, A8 Q
# \1 p; l# g9 mLet me just rewrite yours:- | z# q0 @9 P/ N+ k
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 A9 D$ E) T5 B$ I& c2 A; N
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 _$ S; Z1 H) S0 R
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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