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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% L! @' `) `0 F9 R, e8 {1 N6 U
- C) _% V$ m8 Lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 q2 s9 Q; E6 j" I' O+ Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - E* R/ U- p' u4 n# G) L3 ~) K2 t
Let me just rewrite yours:; f% I- I6 b* }3 c. s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( Z- C9 W2 B- L' Y. l7 x) s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 b$ x0 P9 W2 e a6 c& M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., w. D% A3 P6 H# h5 N }& v
, k( C" H: H- xThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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( B% h; r5 f- G$ g# l% aThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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