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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% ~3 s* Q% W: r i* Q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, \+ t# r- _% o8 _- peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 C6 |# b4 Q+ T6 |
! B1 y" l9 Z% `" qLet me just rewrite yours:& F8 g7 o6 L! i% D1 i5 O
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. o5 j7 j, H! ?3 x/ C1 O, ^3 G" g% l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 l- _/ I0 @6 g* I. L
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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