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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- U: a1 Q4 w0 K' U
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " x. w1 u; E6 L/ I7 v; B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # N. I# p8 d! v! ^
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Let me just rewrite yours:+ _; @& R$ D6 |7 U7 Y9 v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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$ L' N" F4 l7 _7 f& T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 o, d& V2 f& X' z3 h
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ J& d/ C, T$ w
( X3 t+ x* m& j! hThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. m/ K/ v1 c9 d) w! a# BThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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