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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 V4 R# @* [6 @' L cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( K+ a" V" ^6 x- q: [2 Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % o% |3 Z. t$ a1 H3 Q
- c3 D T1 ], [3 I/ O1 XLet me just rewrite yours:$ n9 @6 a7 d/ S0 f# a# J5 P% y5 \
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 s2 V- }& r$ r0 y# V: e5 e& v. q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* B- H+ P3 J* ?* Y2 p: {
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