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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 k6 d# s- o$ T1 P( F: j2 n
7 y5 b$ X& y7 l! \* cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - l: ^/ G. J7 C& I0 I9 W8 r3 h
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . W1 A* |2 L( N
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Let me just rewrite yours:
+ ]* R- N1 o' V" ?) E! tIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* G6 a8 [% N' d ?2 N$ \* b
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ B/ p/ q2 [9 d# v5 e. @
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 u, C; O- J H: P5 w1 {# t
0 Y2 L, P6 Z. SThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 G, Y4 w8 H5 M, j9 f& x
3 t- F2 I n& v+ M- ~8 U: ^% v1 B TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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