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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
s% i( N) G# geveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . T& Z. M. J$ ~3 d# M9 u- c8 N9 V* e( ~, h- C( n
Let me just rewrite yours:' b0 a1 A2 E/ r' A+ f) X- F+ S4 q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- L# n# l9 d4 s5 b
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; q3 O3 K3 ]2 I4 G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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