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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! K; n4 i h" f. \& C6 u
, y" l# ~* w' }2 L# j* git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 g2 J& H2 b+ Y9 X7 Reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 S! a N4 r7 Z2 L6 |$ z+ A
I6 P8 e: a+ h; h& lLet me just rewrite yours:8 [: |& _8 [- z5 m3 t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' y Z/ _2 T- ~! ?0 N/ `( }2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 r: W2 p1 p, E, z
9 m" C ^9 [+ @3 G X8 _There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% B% l ~6 A4 ^
3 T- ]3 x, ^0 p& |* C' O. WThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( K' h' f- j6 F9 J5 L
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