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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% k3 i) k- }; W% M3 k. Q, A" Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * f! T |" K* \ I) F0 b3 Z! i9 b: H: Q; w
Let me just rewrite yours:4 D4 S$ q/ H; e1 [: X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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& {- |8 E4 Q( S: |3 o8 I" f) Y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# ]4 r6 _. W! z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 |0 i! D. i/ z* d4 i1 R" u
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 K! ]- y8 J, G2 w2 `% g8 e
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 K& P2 p! Z! d
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