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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; F+ o$ K5 g; j* H4 b0 |& s9 V9 q4 u
" Y2 A9 }) H$ g& t3 {" S5 bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 M6 I3 t) b/ }: u# {( }. `0 Deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 N* t1 i2 v) H1 R6 q/ y$ z0 ~5 s
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Let me just rewrite yours:2 R/ u7 M, c- ^
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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3 P: c( R7 i: G2 Z7 y* `1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! Z, M, x% j6 U+ {3 r
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ K1 O* M# b' V9 {( L2 L
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ B' m- O2 [/ m2 U7 d
# t# q( f5 Z4 I5 A7 |/ bThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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