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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: Z5 q' w$ M R7 Y5 a( J
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 L) d0 ~' z/ x' i4 \' [) u
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; E1 y+ X# s9 A$ Q3 H C4 k A0 u) W' ]
Let me just rewrite yours:; f. E3 ~. l) z" _9 H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ B3 ^" D" N, d8 E0 x
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) U: L+ C& z2 G8 s1 |8 b+ l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 [, m) |" M/ {5 \- K! i
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) g8 h4 S& g9 }
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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