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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" u/ `8 v; h& |: Q& m, I
6 O: C9 x+ e( x' e tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- O7 C! }+ ? d7 f4 Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + y% d& x$ b) T
& p# q! j% O7 T% v3 L [7 LLet me just rewrite yours:3 L1 x9 K5 L* y) `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 I! j& F8 A) M& w/ ~% C( |# `1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 M t9 c8 h, }8 v8 n+ r2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 M" b) e" p! d& P7 T
! K; R8 R: H/ M1 L1 t5 Y- OThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; \& D- P- \% fThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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