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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" \+ R* r, B' I: c
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ B B4 [. J+ f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 ~8 B: O: Y% G4 m
. v& ?: m1 }( F1 CLet me just rewrite yours:
; J) j* b8 }0 U8 U: }It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 @: U9 S/ G+ E; Z/ p3 `+ E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) d! a9 ~& B: d! ]$ M
% M9 E6 ]" `% K( [5 u" w9 L. rThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( a* r' e. C7 K" Z7 p
' J1 G$ r* d" A# dThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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