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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + B7 y6 o' j( G3 ?1 s: H
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) \+ S5 w% B6 p4 P4 |3 {
' h% k6 p3 m3 m/ f9 m! nLet me just rewrite yours:( N- k4 i6 F+ T
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' }5 @% }! Y1 V" y1 A( Y9 u+ t
1 ^8 B) ]* p+ V: X1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 y6 j& Z) g0 W" q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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2 o# H) u+ V$ L. i/ XThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 F8 i7 ~ m9 x' F
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