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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 F3 a+ i4 I5 e3 v
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 k m9 I; X/ l( i3 ^: U/ Ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 s& @: u9 J% Q* r5 Y5 P5 W- ?" i E% B8 e: P9 k
Let me just rewrite yours:8 g3 T0 J) P" Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' g7 I: `+ _+ D+ w% k/ N' B. |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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]; T u4 H6 }There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ S: l0 {" \+ Q$ R
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