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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 {& G- }1 t+ H! _) F( n: D9 D! c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 L- ?0 [( t& j. g
/ `6 n: @ A! U& N, SLet me just rewrite yours:" h2 a& p( T. W/ {1 e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: ], e# A+ n- r2 L- _
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* x: m- Q E/ b: b) M5 r! R* b
6 w% A7 j [& x: r& i, gThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; G# c; V) l& N c
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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