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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* P( B! h$ A/ w7 W: ]
h- ~/ G1 ]4 Z4 N* Q' Q. yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 \$ T2 }. O, }everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 @6 f/ F1 e/ X, K
1 a$ e) Z0 t/ \5 f& f8 L/ yLet me just rewrite yours:
$ w- x+ e y' R: l4 l4 LIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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: \9 n$ n' q7 v2 q, [ z" H1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 X, i4 s! S3 [, k! V& u# v2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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- ]: B7 k5 h, X$ lThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 ^ J3 _6 A) ]
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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