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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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1 s; g3 o7 y, b# Rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( m6 X: @9 `9 Q$ G
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' A6 w$ E8 B% t1 R- y# x* Y1 y
7 Y! k; Z `3 y0 _# [) X3 ZLet me just rewrite yours:) {/ f' J; Z8 b+ C+ f6 U8 a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 R0 F$ D( M, t( V0 O
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 P# K1 _9 J3 d k& A2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- J6 o% ]. v$ _( Z* ?
0 |/ @. w H! r9 k, t9 jThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# G) d& N2 N9 uThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: S' L5 y/ M( h; Y% `( h( u1 Q/ R
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