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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& G* h7 \% T% n( V2 Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ x7 M9 D* |) q: d7 a ~. x; B/ k; ~- u5 W% z+ m8 W
Let me just rewrite yours:" K) I4 }6 o4 q1 a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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! ^7 a6 I! j0 v6 p1 |5 w* ~" h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! v( t9 t4 F9 [
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. u% T9 @ b; L- S; H- F! d" N* s
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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