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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. h, p) P, ]& e2 z* meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 g9 a m7 G9 V7 x6 v( r$ V
# S" ?; C7 [0 S/ M* |: RLet me just rewrite yours:
5 s0 p# a# r) A, AIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: k6 z- \6 F: L T9 ^, b
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* _- P6 X5 k( r2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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2 I3 T0 w$ B- F7 S3 B1 D: g i+ pThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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4 z4 G- T4 c! X) o" H& \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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5 }* s& @1 h/ |) `9 J" e) XGretz. |
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