- 帖子
- 1691
- 精華
- 1
- 威望
- 245
- 魅力
- 0
- 讚好
- 0
- 性別
- 男
|
81#
發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
| 只看該作者
Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: o# X/ x+ a4 A+ D
8 a6 L: B% e2 \! U; r. `* C% e
it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 n8 I, Q+ {* m; keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! i$ N; u; ?& F
4 w# B$ ?) H6 \- xLet me just rewrite yours:) y: r+ A4 p# `. @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 N8 T* L! I' S9 O& C! F
/ ^1 L- ~% B* d; {; c3 r
1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, N6 W8 J3 s, U1 c) F4 R7 I+ W8 d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ ?" E4 p; t! N+ q) Z
- E+ [4 j! |+ r2 L6 l8 l5 ]
There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
1 {/ y1 L$ w, G5 F" V+ {& x4 ~+ U1 k" X0 t
Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 V. k$ K" n8 a, ]
. \/ h0 ^" p9 u8 j" j5 e2 f
Gretz. |
|