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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 S7 H) g/ k: R' e5 z# i9 Sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! {) V9 Z; ~ [1 Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ f" }( @$ }8 C) ~; z% \( Q/ S% \( O9 E! J; c* |" |4 ~
Let me just rewrite yours:1 O* ~' l$ O1 E! Y3 e1 }6 j7 Z& o
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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/ }# Y, y" |# f& E; l1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 ]5 v9 [) t. x3 E. N
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. v2 n! S; j: a( t1 z* ?8 V; s! N
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ N' @( j6 B; |+ v3 j# d% F4 J
5 G* E% U4 r8 X8 ^) S! p$ v8 sThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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