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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 e& W/ O$ t/ T& Ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 b+ R+ C% M1 B4 V' H7 }everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' j/ U k; e* [. \: n/ e
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Let me just rewrite yours:" G; r! y+ p0 D% Y$ A, c o
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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f2 y1 }3 `3 T$ N1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 @5 `9 ]' _% ^6 }, ]! l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' W7 T5 s) c% B" n' m
6 \& U# O" f0 {- lThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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