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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 g- ^$ ]7 D) b7 F! z# j
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & T+ e C# a" _( H# U5 `, f: {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " r0 e7 b! d3 J5 ?9 ]# D
$ }" N7 ] T$ A) a8 e7 YLet me just rewrite yours:0 T3 T0 f; x; h1 B
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ v+ k0 n4 Q! E- F0 h( H; u
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 P$ H% O/ F" Q; v2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 C& @1 v$ T; i
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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