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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 N u" y- t* [) E- i% V$ D# A
# S1 {7 P2 J5 j$ D! D8 z& d! Kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 J) ^9 J5 }% T: b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 @1 j" y, W) O0 d5 L. k, I. y' ^7 {* D1 t! U5 M( P3 G8 q
Let me just rewrite yours:: W. v. L: q, I, ?* R1 d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 p G8 `% p* [+ r. I" D
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. [. k i) T& `! ~. ^! A2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." R; q4 U% E- w% L" A+ F
$ a# @. R! X9 P4 X! j8 r6 J d2 sThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 |8 e* o( l+ w5 c1 @( H j! y! L
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# }/ }# j9 o/ l+ V" b+ ^
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