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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! d, }$ G! H* U+ Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ]/ }$ L0 v- k- w! q4 _
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Let me just rewrite yours:7 w# r% w! W/ ?1 K/ X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 o. u7 `$ } [! {8 i
: C ^, e" y) N3 D( b# j& |" r1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; M+ D! @' ?; [- I" Z1 |* {4 X
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- e8 S! q$ [. P- D
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