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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( d- |! L% ~2 s$ zeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " k6 M% [3 w9 N6 c
& v+ o4 \6 O6 g- ?8 T% }Let me just rewrite yours:( |: ~* m; D4 B
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" x( M, G5 g! h7 Z+ P
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" H+ T& |, d7 j7 R
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 @! E2 K" K0 d" R# d! }
, L8 D, P7 v* E; I6 p8 v' eThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% c3 }0 A9 t2 S9 g6 f' [ O
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 _, g# D' ^2 I6 V1 w: B; ?( w
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