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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 k+ e+ s' M& V
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & L2 u8 l& c5 Y0 W5 H& v5 S
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Let me just rewrite yours:7 f" z0 m: O' _! i- e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 y! I9 j( Q: b0 T8 D) z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ t5 K I; H: m, W0 G2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 _$ R f' T9 u @4 d, A+ U/ w! w/ J: g
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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