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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 M6 [5 a$ W l2 W8 I
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " P& x8 r( J1 ]" t$ p( ~+ r( P
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 u; a- g* \! m
; ` \4 }; l* X9 _, xLet me just rewrite yours:5 f) b% I9 Z% [; f
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 P( S% q# N7 W
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 D$ f9 T2 [3 w2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 q* c) _1 i9 B# m6 f
& Q! u8 W- \/ x7 X: @) ~. yThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ {0 o! t' u" X; b& h, j: f8 |
0 _ K: y8 d9 u- Y/ rThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: C) X4 T) n$ T; s2 h, I& E4 I
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