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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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" ^# w" T& H4 v$ m" V* `it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , s3 A8 F( w6 r0 H& M
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 {$ V2 B7 G$ E0 j/ m2 C" I7 {
7 L/ ~, t( Y ^& a+ u$ MLet me just rewrite yours: |: C7 P( l; W* S. z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ T# D& Y( M! @( M8 _3 z8 k/ Q
$ Y0 y' @0 {3 ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. }" w7 ^! [. \. H: Z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." b) x) f7 [ L
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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