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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: j1 C' H2 T( [9 p, _everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % T4 w' v! ?: c- S+ w6 i0 p6 f
) W' |9 F: P, I, ELet me just rewrite yours:
# Q6 d9 N( `6 R1 SIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 k, j3 } s9 P
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
Q8 Q+ g0 n( F2 _% G2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 Z5 L4 N) Y( h/ p; r. c, z
# y, \4 {, E3 |6 dThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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