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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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& Y- M7 |& Q( h+ a: b& oit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; ], n# K. d; Z) P, w' j0 R9 f4 N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 B+ b- v, z/ b
0 l" m! N, Z$ l6 `- x" m$ {" x2 T# }- oLet me just rewrite yours:' Z1 J9 R/ E7 t1 c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, S( O$ n8 [" F1 ]
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 l5 U, \+ W. |5 i$ t6 G: t8 z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 v& o* H6 R0 [
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% _* q; Z8 m9 T
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