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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* A' F' t& j f5 D4 \
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! B* k. y1 u* P/ v$ Y5 ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 j6 q( c( s' Q$ F8 D
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Let me just rewrite yours:" @; E/ ?) X: T( j6 T
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ G4 K0 g: ]) D
9 h- N5 B: @$ H9 h- [" @1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: \# J) J4 A F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 Q/ O) j2 Q& V) H/ e* i
9 _0 J# }) X9 k2 LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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4 \) @$ n4 w$ V, @; [) f5 |+ SThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. ?' x% w- F C [+ I$ \
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