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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ v* ~, e! `9 e- X. C+ i5 w
8 T+ b5 `) w [" Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 h) X0 w4 S0 Z, X$ \
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * l* C( K0 U5 v
: }1 j5 ?, u# _6 e2 n/ M+ ]Let me just rewrite yours:7 c3 d `2 ]' n& o
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* t* b y# A3 f o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 X% Z6 t& k; H
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. @+ a3 I0 X. w7 h
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# u* S- \8 D# {* m5 h/ M5 ?1 x2 \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% B/ a; T, E+ |$ t
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