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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! Z8 @+ G6 T+ k
! e+ e! \# X1 Y9 C, a, x5 N9 Kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % w; D+ Q7 Y1 X X
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , `( {3 j2 A9 @' ?0 C9 _9 D7 k
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 H @9 ~+ D( j8 u" G* y* v5 E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: A9 D5 d7 A1 R8 j, y1 E: }9 n
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ C+ h K2 q2 h" d% C+ n q
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