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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; z M/ Q3 x* U# U5 G
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , c U9 t# N3 o1 W: ~# }
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 Q& O8 w8 E, u0 j
9 f+ L6 {5 Z+ b( G4 r. w+ |Let me just rewrite yours:( O' w9 j' p/ {6 _' y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 q* N& M& y9 u7 U
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& K, C' d- ?3 @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( h4 c- J9 t: T J. g
8 C% Y0 d" j5 r- ?) ]There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 y1 P* k6 M' Z0 @1 g
Z( a, }6 O$ u& y6 x4 ~3 KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 Q; ~5 b) p" e
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