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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 [6 B3 k; Z8 d2 f
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; m U! Z) c# |' oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / H4 D y8 `- X8 j" b; [
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Let me just rewrite yours:, y0 T4 T* f3 G# B. R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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% e5 R5 X" w; [! x- i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
L1 h# Q- p3 R% [$ E2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: P9 W p: m( Q; O8 C. w
0 G3 V- d( R4 H# XThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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