- 帖子
- 1691
- 精華
- 1
- 威望
- 245
- 魅力
- 0
- 讚好
- 0
- 性別
- 男
|
81#
發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
| 只看該作者
Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: q1 I# C# \/ P
; @- u: l9 Z6 M. g) A
it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" D" D0 j7 N# ?: V% ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 {$ ^6 A; q* }) q# B# [" D) ^5 z; q, N% g: h8 g
Let me just rewrite yours:8 }, l3 R" \! r, m2 W8 W0 h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
, n* Q( h0 X0 B5 b3 _9 r$ c! P
& L% g& ]2 G7 \2 C; }. Z: g1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! `+ B' H* R9 {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 ?9 W+ c5 R8 D% \" v
1 e# p" R1 h* f. w9 Q
There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
" r0 S6 B0 U: t3 [+ ~* S/ J. U9 B( }, r. [( ]. n2 l6 y5 o
Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- b% z/ y5 ^+ ~* n
1 m$ x. [: s$ l/ GGretz. |
|