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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 e6 a# R% z) j
. \6 ~$ M9 _4 g# j# tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; {9 J3 C9 e8 Y1 g9 {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / _. j7 l8 m1 K2 a# ^% M: x
! x/ @6 k$ `! q5 |7 a4 ULet me just rewrite yours:/ X: t# W9 F( \) G& `8 L6 H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, j z- y3 q# u; g$ T* O
$ k9 i5 b3 K# n* F8 h2 y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# t. @# q: _3 E! ?% ~2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ {7 y5 n* _$ y7 x
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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- G, P) u7 p8 m2 C& DThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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