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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 ?: [" q1 g2 J" n
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 w( q% m9 k# ]# ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 e! V$ e! U0 i: {/ j
' R' i9 R& R- E; k# dLet me just rewrite yours:
' P6 y( w9 t' O( a# OIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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' S3 L% q! l0 k/ d1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 e& k( h) W9 i' l# b/ `6 ?( m
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ G2 K# F* G$ N& B4 g+ H' o! }# T
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) B7 o E/ X7 W# f( `2 u. Y) o
8 s5 z& _, w% T9 w" \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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