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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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( H {: n3 c" }! T- vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 n8 r3 I! q2 n, O! B" _5 Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / m/ m$ r% A* P. p! Q1 |4 m& z: G
+ W' U" Q) y' E- o' ~Let me just rewrite yours:9 _3 U7 |; t+ E+ k+ a1 D
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
`+ Q, K5 Z, I* E% k( L8 x5 }7 m e# Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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! A/ r; C3 |' K! ? \There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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