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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 a$ u, L) U. q' i$ V, keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % n6 x K. n% P( [! X
8 z/ k) Q3 v' M5 y: ]& NLet me just rewrite yours:+ [$ o- q1 D% j% v8 w7 ^: P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 L) ]" D" g. F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 Q2 \! _3 q3 E* H3 O/ R
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 L0 {8 A5 O9 x. K/ z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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