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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 [# R1 C$ Z; F
) g8 B, y& ]6 E3 M* i, J% _: a2 Ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; \ {# L! G" R1 m: N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( n. D! A9 E' r7 X
: m" c; v: `1 y$ W8 K# hLet me just rewrite yours:
) n$ t8 C; I2 O" n7 GIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 e* d; v/ d7 {/ G9 d: f
, \: o+ p3 H: w' O _. z C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) q6 S" b5 S p7 O& X! L2 l r
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." {1 Y0 h' F3 ^" l2 W$ x
' f2 _, [- u4 A: [There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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& M4 E K9 T6 Q# ]' @' Y$ {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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