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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 {: q0 H2 U/ E9 y9 Q9 D" y' J8 [
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . F4 C1 W( ^' N/ v' [" x
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( d# G3 v0 @& y. V/ Q* ^
( t8 M' f9 E8 Z$ a! O. G( J- cLet me just rewrite yours:% y7 h E1 H4 m- m% x+ ]% s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: _9 n5 O, ]2 J4 w0 _5 h8 _2 b2 u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, ~: X4 w5 b+ H/ DThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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