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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 b& x$ m* t- @, \$ I. J1 Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 I& u4 i$ p4 ~ F! Z0 I+ n9 N
5 Q- C; b1 O& ?2 FLet me just rewrite yours:4 @/ z0 \" K: Y' C
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 g/ V' [7 K! z$ |: I
5 v) P5 W5 D- ^& y1 `1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, w( S/ |3 m2 n* f7 \! A: U9 N2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; j) ?( U) O/ |9 E8 K8 P
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