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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 A, T* P; U) ?' ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : M/ f; m, w: r4 ]
9 a- w* R9 q( {) ]4 sLet me just rewrite yours:+ C+ x; X4 R5 h: u
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" O6 h' ^0 D5 V* W- I8 v' b
2 Q0 {# o% K/ W1 W- u4 t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 |. B. p5 O) l$ n. u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 }; j' E0 D8 j" R/ p8 Q9 y* z- A
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* t2 \2 ]( a- k- i" ~
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