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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + @( Z; L' I8 P. I
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 }2 G4 n9 Y9 P: d( Z M5 s
" G, n' `; J1 J2 e: |: S7 r$ eLet me just rewrite yours:. O7 p1 q: }5 X+ K7 P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' y% k+ C( V) t
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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* s% X( E& C ?+ q. ~+ l1 a7 CThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* q2 s. E8 A6 t% Y5 d8 W0 H( l/ N* O: P
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