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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: z' B# H) K- f* S a" t- e
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 S. j% H+ P- ~' [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( g5 L* G" \2 Y4 C
; r5 |1 F8 j V4 s+ ~ nLet me just rewrite yours:
3 |" G# O. x. F, r9 `, L0 MIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 J% I5 {# _8 b3 p
8 ~2 v) |) D: u" k$ q, F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" u: j$ T' t e D
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; Y8 O% A( U n! U- h1 m0 V1 J
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 a, I9 Y v% }6 W0 l. V
& B/ M2 a: z( A4 f7 pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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