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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& ^0 f W5 @* X5 A3 keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # p" }8 W4 a* a- y8 M
4 S6 y! z: d- ^/ W; QLet me just rewrite yours:
- c q( W' }: LIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* A1 Z( X6 i) L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& k8 B( y9 Y; S9 U2 n' R( R5 W
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ v6 ^; r1 G: P3 M z7 p
) J8 c' s% W" x7 `0 G# HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& e/ K2 j y5 J2 T
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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