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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 _/ G2 U8 M+ Y8 ~8 H7 z# R
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / I4 u& L( N* D0 {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) c4 G' I5 v' D' d+ S2 ~( k, }8 `6 o" b) D: N6 \
Let me just rewrite yours:
q) i% l) S5 TIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# q. }! n3 k1 |7 r
- X5 x, c4 @- Z0 |+ j1 O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 |8 U. \3 E y* c0 P, _) Z) {% i4 p2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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/ r% z8 q, x; N5 q) v# w) ~There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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