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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ `/ z |: E: a, L C: [
* N5 x3 [7 D: g( R. @5 v# E, `4 o7 cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 |3 L* [8 W0 H) ^
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 R8 T2 @" u- h# O/ e3 B
( v @' G7 T/ U' x& YLet me just rewrite yours:
- ^$ D. Z9 w8 G7 k* y, L( G8 Z/ ]It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 q( T1 N$ c& E0 g1 F3 _* O
% e, C9 }3 v- v+ s% C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* ^( |% D2 Q* i1 y7 P" e; A" C2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 c2 [# ^# F/ u: A
( u/ ?+ a9 H8 `There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# K R4 `0 h: L/ d1 C1 ^; N* ?& N" Y
' Y0 c' n: s9 D+ A3 R8 s" cThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. t% h% O& f# S8 H+ v* j
: {9 N! ~+ v/ o/ i& I2 F" jGretz. |
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