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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( Z( K8 ]; v1 ?) B; D% n
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 x: Z5 a0 X5 q! r5 Y+ zeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 V1 [) O" A& l* B: ?& J' n! L% k
+ ]8 L! Q8 c7 G$ D* p: dLet me just rewrite yours:! P0 t% M- J' {% V9 b' }. I
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 }) c l g7 m: P
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; f# Y& B3 d+ e
6 ^3 V) N( B& E* B0 V9 o4 JThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 J5 X1 g- v& B9 w+ y% k. X
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