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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 z8 p, h; x4 I- b( N8 k- d
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; G, X- d0 K3 a" N' N2 W W6 Leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , o2 O7 q( O" p# F% u# d
/ C6 J7 w4 n; }$ ]8 `0 WLet me just rewrite yours:
- r# R( p/ m$ n% K8 IIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ E) T! M* ?' f% Q8 W
G O. a- I x, A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# e" ~! n3 t1 P4 F" d% q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. q( z9 N* m' i; E
+ B& ~- s" @3 b6 D5 [( W- `There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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3 j7 x( @7 W1 i- IThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* q8 ?& y4 p5 W% n
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