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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# a- i2 x1 L2 s- g# P4 V; P
$ _# H" I; @2 c/ Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 b/ L6 d5 s/ ^( N4 I+ j8 }+ Weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) @( j* m+ ]' ^
2 i4 I% i3 {& s0 X! t. D8 qLet me just rewrite yours:* N3 U+ [3 Z' S) j& K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 q6 s) N( s1 j2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ W' H& Q; q- Q" ^* ]$ {; E1 e2 P, }/ f
' C) f" b4 d: \4 p# M: u9 N( @Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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