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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 @; k( U% e; `
. E% y& R8 n4 M& B7 hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , I! h3 V2 `4 r8 \6 B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 J( b' ?2 `1 p- f( R0 G$ m# z2 b0 q+ H2 e0 H6 r: Z
Let me just rewrite yours:- a `5 b/ a5 x. a4 Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 o' m$ q0 R( x1 [+ u7 Q4 I8 c/ S
: h4 n9 ^+ N) |) A" g q) {" B7 P( \1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ E. e5 n+ V, ?- e6 A5 S; n) G2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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8 Y5 d6 b* @' P% h0 O8 \. O" W# HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' {; K! [+ C+ y, ~
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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