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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 f1 d$ F1 }+ V% z$ t
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 {) Z" c X& j
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! B r/ b0 x4 F* g5 U
) `8 c* R! g/ v- ]2 m" r* i. QLet me just rewrite yours:6 M* ~# U( ^* a+ ~4 Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: a6 r9 e" q& y B( c% l; G) [: |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' G. A( a6 v( i6 r, C! u
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) Z6 a5 ~0 S, s( l$ o) M
" G' ~, p( M+ P; d uThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 V* z; a" D# f( H
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