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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& B6 m9 {+ z8 G0 `
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 w& o: r7 v/ f" o- Leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 u% T8 h3 o" x" y; Q A! F, @- P" T# U3 N
Let me just rewrite yours:. R0 p* m% S- ^, V' U* k( a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( Q2 t V( t6 R% b- J' ~( Z- F9 [
0 W- | _$ W, f) S. V5 j5 `; [2 I4 j2 ?* j* n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ D2 P4 ?+ F/ s+ r, r9 Y8 \
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* r/ ?0 \. g, |; @( Q; d# Q+ i
9 Y4 @% P5 y% Y4 X( C! \There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 Y! E0 b5 U+ l9 A, Z' A0 G
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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