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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. a5 k8 L6 t, n c
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; I2 e7 A- ^# J; {9 O8 @0 D
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / ~* L- b, t6 f+ j( L
1 L7 {( T" }4 x, f" J) OLet me just rewrite yours:
9 T- E1 H- h$ J/ L' k2 W- Q- uIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ `. z! Q N+ k- P( W3 p6 R8 P `
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! y5 A( |( F$ y; I9 h; s
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ X; n2 b7 S( P g$ q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% X' w2 ^+ k; h) Z
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: O" `* ~! Y2 ?$ Z; v. s- P% N
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