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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 A8 f* G$ k; ~# l# L
* P; G( T4 j4 O0 t1 jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ @) W. G/ d$ N' n r
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 B! }% A6 k2 ~6 X+ V( h( z; `& _: n Q3 F' ] U5 y5 P
Let me just rewrite yours:* \/ r3 p, \$ ]) M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' H" q. e) b8 n5 K7 F
2 w, @/ G" \% h1 ^: p: W% V8 C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; S$ P8 b& F1 t4 s
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ q8 j9 `, p+ P) `) i
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 X6 s2 u$ T8 e( C9 \) t
6 D' N* J! b) r5 iThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; R% u" c0 z" A7 I: P2 v) H' ?
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