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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 c$ h/ G! U7 t& I7 leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - @1 l& U/ ?! ?5 g$ c# V. h; {1 L9 F: b
Let me just rewrite yours:$ j K0 [& [4 }) J! p& O
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" L/ K6 |1 s+ G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: d4 G/ r$ D% `7 @% _
: E( X$ j: c6 Z6 }; CThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ O" G( ~$ |4 H: F5 n
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