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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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" B& o: x7 s# a) C( _9 w* kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 }$ ~. _. s0 z: a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 q c7 ~! O$ a0 m8 h/ U
; G+ m& h4 i8 m' s, CLet me just rewrite yours:
, w; y E7 R6 z8 vIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 j: }* p4 F1 I3 ?
6 Z9 {# V/ S4 m0 K5 t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. f4 ]1 ?' E1 |5 N8 n
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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% ]$ x+ x8 U+ \+ U' uThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 K3 l# E5 D4 d( _& N
& j( ]8 z# \) O A m' MThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ d! W8 J' R; c/ |" R- _; T/ Z" i
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