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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # @ z6 u4 _4 B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 ^- Z" H# X7 {( l5 Y) P6 [
$ `4 i1 T7 f2 x, T) {Let me just rewrite yours:+ ^9 f2 X/ _" }
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- w, a5 i/ i# k2 E7 k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 Z) R( A0 C- d- g0 Q
! y8 R) R6 x. XThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# g" a( E$ z! K3 u" W) HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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