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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 {/ t+ `! Q2 ^7 n- y1 \: severyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ^" m# w1 K. O' F$ ~* ]6 n* |6 B
. W" Z) L+ C2 X$ M' lLet me just rewrite yours:4 L4 [. @5 \4 ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ B- _* |7 L5 l/ D3 N2 r
3 Y! {, r4 W ?+ K1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% D) V" y' g% G$ ]' z" L4 F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* k& ?3 N# F B4 ]6 t+ Q# |
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# l2 s! ^$ i1 l- R
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