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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 ~5 z( b4 H* m& ^- Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * l" S3 M( [- r X5 L/ Y& g, i
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 w, O# T; v/ V. \8 r" X8 \* }1 X# ?9 F2 e3 @3 c4 b" U
Let me just rewrite yours:6 P9 s& d" Q& i- {0 c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ M! H# U( c% g2 _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 o1 |/ X% F, t) b5 | u% a0 ^There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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