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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: d, e" ^3 P# R2 r2 G' `
W/ V2 e. o( g( P! R8 P$ u& L mit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- {1 M9 g! E1 Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 A# n( a, R- ^6 M' d8 g- {6 n
+ C9 q( I% j, N% s9 s+ X8 jLet me just rewrite yours:7 Z1 Y! W" I3 d( U- h" h0 i \5 t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 i: X M2 Z. ~, s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: n8 N+ j: g1 y* j2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# w# [9 D7 b& D0 B* S. {+ g# YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* ~# Y. O3 e7 v# q- T
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 o$ N% Y/ K& Y$ [: h( f
* S$ a. S: Q, M) T) [$ G% `7 SGretz. |
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