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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # `% B8 K9 f" p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 M7 b) L3 b$ ]; O+ X4 \1 A7 K8 K* `( o I7 I: N( ^
Let me just rewrite yours:: Y2 D6 d# w9 V7 C9 Q+ w+ J' j
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* G* R1 j6 d2 c" |$ ]
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- p# b0 K+ [' w; D$ [
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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