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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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9 _' X# f' r C% L* v6 Wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. m! w! v+ F4 y$ l! L' reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / E5 ?, p7 d/ M# [' p
) Y) V7 J1 r' N, ]. y8 [/ U; A! VLet me just rewrite yours:* v5 _" l3 V+ j
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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- Q) q0 ~$ p, H# _5 `1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( Y% ]! g) p6 ^* w0 G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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1 `. h. c; w2 gThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 O8 v! U1 w6 F$ P1 R4 _3 F
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