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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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' p, W+ @" C0 p7 z6 ]it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 w# R3 Q4 g% G0 ^( D
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. y# o5 l6 O$ w/ O5 M, F9 F7 L7 B" U
0 H: @# _/ I) ]! `+ S9 XLet me just rewrite yours:0 h- h* O: k( N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 U7 {2 _# X6 p' I6 a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 V5 s$ B/ q5 B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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9 s9 `( m7 w% ~9 ^* TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! t- G4 I" H- t+ L) Z( z3 ]
# g# o4 w( R* S1 ]: aThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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