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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: M1 l9 v3 _) a, ?' O# A
4 C5 t1 X# D" eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) I& J! ~7 B, E, c- m" h* g' g* ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . ^" \9 J" @( E
" G" z/ o4 C# ]Let me just rewrite yours:' a+ k* `& G: t P6 `% S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" w9 r' l3 }5 j% j
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 L3 U; K. u C2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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) o5 u6 k' n7 z6 A! ?2 rThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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