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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" @: d7 o; N+ i1 P/ J% J, \: S
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - c/ y# e( P& W4 o: Q i# Y6 T
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. f; e* H5 L# \" G( ]
/ e! ]. e- B) n/ k' n% v# wLet me just rewrite yours:9 {0 ?: I T1 x1 N+ ^
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) W5 C5 V2 [" k" }# s Y" m) }; g
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ `8 y( x9 T& G* a0 Y" v
) V, ?) I4 p6 j7 g! Q- z1 U6 GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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