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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' x. q% ?7 a, j# }5 y7 Y& O7 ^
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 |" Q3 R- O$ M, t
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 ?4 e( _' n( A% N/ d
) Y2 {6 _0 U" ?# g TLet me just rewrite yours:+ _, P3 q5 s* Z! D3 p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) Z0 _" M, w7 z$ d; r3 l3 r5 R+ Y
2 Q$ D0 p. E$ p: j7 j, b$ ]1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# j' R7 P( i. e" _4 A' O0 x
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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