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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
n7 V, R1 C/ ^3 d0 u1 z/ ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! d. H- G9 o' z/ a# \- ]' Y, }
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Let me just rewrite yours: C, r# Q! d' M& s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, |& @% C4 [- x8 v
K0 g: S4 a8 g$ B2 p) w) B: a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ j2 O$ x# R" B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., o+ |3 J) N7 M9 j: s8 B) A# `
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- O, P( L- D8 p9 q! q) H6 g
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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