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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 a/ ~# d ?1 u3 @3 j# P; xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. E. I4 e8 \0 c$ ~
0 X- _$ ^( b; ~3 a0 Z8 t3 t) rLet me just rewrite yours: \9 y' {; z) K( h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 r% Z0 z2 ]6 ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 v, N4 E/ v) M; }5 VThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% T. A& L( y) T/ t/ _
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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