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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : J3 r: f# R; d5 Y) u- V
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' s. C( A/ q4 l+ _, ^1 L
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Let me just rewrite yours:' E. T2 i, Y8 X" p7 f# }" x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. `" m1 Y9 N0 T2 ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 i" X2 T: \' O8 o: K
* M/ z8 N; q: t. t) m$ WThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 {- }/ j! @$ {2 U- P' {" a; j; p
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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