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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ c0 t( E9 }/ T# `( Y( f3 [
2 r4 A) f) }. ?" J/ H7 Xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# j) \' V$ e: Y0 S/ [, p+ Beveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % j$ I% u2 [& K( g
" ^# B, l* Z5 i6 `Let me just rewrite yours:9 v- k" o) G7 Z: z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 k9 x0 z8 N* q8 |1 L( G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& H5 _$ b' i8 k$ ?
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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