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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( c( ]1 W4 w; j" F
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 Z7 y% f" |% |" Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 L! u& B1 F/ L* ?) n
7 b3 [) z' ?5 x9 P) Q- VLet me just rewrite yours:9 w7 q9 S' C& M" n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 ^" ^+ s0 h5 [) k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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' ?( S# P W/ i& z; LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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4 r: ~& Q5 |( Y3 H/ \: {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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