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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# W8 l8 v" P& h+ `7 l* P2 F. L. @
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- R. V8 R; ^4 F8 x$ j6 _$ u/ p; |# X, }4 Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 H8 g5 F* D! Y6 {
4 j, y; t1 }+ K2 [0 Y; PLet me just rewrite yours:3 @! A9 F% h5 I5 z3 T: d% M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 _1 _- Q* ?. i6 b! f* g
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 Z# g" v' V2 c- J
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: A1 q! F2 X+ I4 ~2 |6 `/ H
% y3 J) J% i7 ]7 V" _! d$ Y. RThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ G8 S1 \6 h3 z5 E/ I1 O
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