- 帖子
- 1691
- 精華
- 1
- 威望
- 245
- 魅力
- 0
- 讚好
- 0
- 性別
- 男
|
81#
發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
| 只看該作者
Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 Z; V2 O) d2 H5 T6 H/ G
( ^" W- G r9 h( I( g
it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * x! i1 a- e) `" v' J5 {6 t/ V* e
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 E% Y5 i# g( e5 m' v) a) `* }) h8 n
) W$ h! M3 h8 uLet me just rewrite yours:7 f5 h# K$ S6 ~0 m* ^3 O
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 c9 l( N0 c y+ Y* J) {
5 _' _( l- \: S4 M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 e5 l: b0 o* ~: G: t8 }
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ N6 g3 X T7 m/ ?! @
+ r7 T7 W" W$ U4 ] f/ i) a
There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. R% x: l, Z- B* O9 K
% q1 v x; F4 t6 J. ?1 i
Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
( B2 W' d. T v* _) h8 \
9 H8 x, n6 o9 D& {; z4 o" Q! wGretz. |
|