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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 n1 r- \9 O& ~0 \5 M
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 h, r9 X0 @9 d: M( }- M6 K
( Q! T* V B! E; @9 n1 S4 R3 XLet me just rewrite yours:
$ ]2 a: ~- E6 {( m$ r* i! \It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' [7 n$ [: ?6 q. Q
8 I( j- |* @! |9 L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 ^9 Y+ `* ^$ \8 @9 e9 B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ N% ~! D W) l6 EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) j- `/ g0 |( w
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