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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 d, b# ]0 U( ?4 p) ?
; H8 F' k* y1 z1 E5 n, @( _3 d. K8 kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % I& S7 \4 a3 Y9 t1 ]* {( |
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + `7 L8 A* F: n8 y" h9 N1 U
; N% l) n/ H; G( vLet me just rewrite yours:7 {! u& F e: _" ?+ L! G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! y: \. ?8 I! N u/ n
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# d* c. j( {- J! l& N3 cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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- y1 R3 P) Q K' r! |% Y! vThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ ^- M% s1 n3 F: N) }9 t8 s0 h
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