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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ Z% K! Q* D" z. z
% ?& o3 D8 ]1 Nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " y( t9 M- h# x! |; e* P2 j, }3 ?
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; @! r, @) r8 G5 r% ?, @4 e+ w! l! y. |( n7 t" }/ W/ e
Let me just rewrite yours:+ g- c. q( l7 {+ N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 z) R$ v1 ?4 | I& Q- b* T
- o" ^$ {' P* {% b, C1 x- K1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ w, U3 e0 C* I) q& y8 w. I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' J7 Q; Z/ r5 v8 @
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% E( U; w- n! a( a: d3 ~* l. e3 r
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- s) P; V/ ^2 G% v6 P
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