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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 Q j) N" Z- c$ `/ b% J
3 v- C, U( V( l. O$ M l& w8 bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 g7 ]6 b) D/ q$ O% s
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 ?3 q ^ \$ l8 x9 k5 K9 w, a
' a4 E6 ]1 ^4 o$ S2 h z8 YLet me just rewrite yours:
% S5 D0 z" B; u" h+ y+ a; VIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 O) _, s6 K% k) T% r) Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ Y: o y8 l! W6 R1 B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! ]; e, t& m$ f5 k# C l$ {% y
. s' q$ ]4 ~8 |Gretz. |
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