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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 G) y3 s$ y9 b4 {% c
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( L, u& ?; f' |# D$ R3 beveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 G% ^3 m- C" n/ |+ r
" J, O. F" l4 _( z. X: B2 @Let me just rewrite yours:/ w, I% Y" u) x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 b! H; c B0 v3 a$ h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 p" S$ s! i2 s+ c9 e: \8 T! U2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# Z3 ` t, F# f
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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0 I3 @ W% p: [8 } p( tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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