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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ Q8 B' U9 ]7 x
( C5 K4 C! g2 p2 U1 }! t0 M0 xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 S, c& d1 _+ f/ q# zeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * P# ?0 G0 k1 }. v# V" G1 y. e- K- e4 \* H9 u1 Z
Let me just rewrite yours:! Y6 N* t2 D8 Z4 M% d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 ]5 A* `2 z, j% s- Q" d1 Q+ ]2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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