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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 J8 u1 C& s% _$ q- J. U
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* W) y( V' R$ Y' l$ F( Zeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & R+ s+ R% Z0 B+ D# a6 f, `5 K
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Let me just rewrite yours:1 X* a% P3 @. n0 f, j, x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" Y8 s) Z3 {1 t& G' m
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ w- q1 v" ~7 C
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 B" ]5 Y# a" v. |% Y
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ l3 E; E0 k; @
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. |. g8 ]+ e) [9 d
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Gretz. |
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