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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 S+ M( g. [+ X
4 ^5 C, y8 W* t1 d$ T/ V; hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # L! o# k1 S! A% D
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + G' P" H& s" _3 C; V1 o2 c; Y2 E% k
7 A$ J6 s5 x wLet me just rewrite yours:6 x: N' T, o) c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 C1 ^# k' d J+ M
. Q9 _# l3 N$ ^ e+ E1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ d p) D+ F9 a0 m ~" L
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% i: M; x: a. H, q6 n
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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