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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- S0 Y& p# z7 S2 F* [+ T
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 p( [: i+ B" B, ]) \; Jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - b) B# ~9 S4 J+ @# m
7 X0 l& V$ S( U! OLet me just rewrite yours:0 E# U- s) y# b1 U3 d7 \5 V7 n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( S$ A( r" s% R. q/ L, i0 i
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 |( X+ P T) v9 d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: N* o$ o: L) `& s% X
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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