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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) C! V! K2 a5 g7 Z
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , j" h6 K. m; a: K( l3 d
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 X- T. y+ b6 Y" f3 A
4 i$ p3 j/ v7 h @Let me just rewrite yours:- u. W2 @! J7 P" m, j2 b* P( I' L1 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& u8 j2 b$ l2 g" l1 g. i) m
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) W8 H0 F& T; KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., o' M8 ~9 Y+ ]- Q/ }
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) t- F! m# O% v: d& u. u3 ~
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