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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 z3 X4 w( g( j. k% `: u, {everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 U: ^/ b, y. f8 z! G
9 G: i/ H6 n1 m+ |5 Z, k4 \Let me just rewrite yours:7 D! ?$ O$ S( M0 n! d$ L X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: L- g- Z9 @3 x, P! t2 ?8 R" p
; m; d3 A( C. n3 K$ |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* f- W3 F7 H; n, B- H S
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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2 w2 Z' V C; F4 l$ FThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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