wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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hi~tt/ Q9 z; e$ ]2 s6 Q! y2 K# H: Y4 p
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦( G6 Y9 x6 v9 G8 k

5 m0 @6 z# E* I結局我覺得唔係咁好

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我果度冇咗大結局~~. Q7 D9 f3 A! c. K7 q) m
你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

http://big.cmfu.com:9080/www.cmfu.com/readbook.asp?bl_id=2877
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:5 \& D2 y. Y5 y2 P  ^; F% ?) Z" s8 _
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呢度有

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thx~~
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wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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[ Last edited by roykenroy on 2005-7-22 at 05:36 PM ]

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:1 A/ c, |5 R7 M6 k) g( `
http://fj01.now.net.cn:7751/www. ... cleinfo.php?id=3931
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e排唔見你既~* q9 b' H; N" B& ?6 f) F  p
你做緊咩??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~: p! ~/ @2 C6 S: y( f6 p; u: \
你做緊咩??

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:0 T: W7 S4 R  ]* F3 k. n

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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^, l; v1 N% d$ a  K( z+ N( b. f$ l& z

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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:6 `* @! R0 R8 r5 [

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差唔多啦，我對呢方面好廢=.=; `! n/ Y) A  N7 C3 [7 {
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