wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:9 `# R' R4 ^, w! U% A- A1 c
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4 O+ W" [0 V9 J個篇戰魂我睇完啦
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦# x! A8 M- _+ z; P0 H5 Z8 v5 n

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wanmankit

http://big.cmfu.com:9080/www.cmfu.com/readbook.asp?bl_id=2877
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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:  Q# A1 J! X0 K" q: `' R# Q# Z) W
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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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原著係呢度

twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:9 g% r0 B  F! i/ V( [" G' s" h; F

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又話等我番黎既...............

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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原著係呢度

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你做緊咩??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:/ E+ @; s4 k" i* o5 h& M# y
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e排唔見你既~
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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:$ [9 }4 ]& Q7 z2 k/ @9 E
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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:
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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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差唔多啦，我對呢方面好廢=.=- N' @" G' r/ }/ g( f  \5 e

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