wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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我果度冇咗大結局~~3 {4 S! ~  z& e. I. C9 H5 D( H/ _
你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:, q1 M4 x) b6 W) ]' R
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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:, Q2 j7 Q0 K$ q4 a; S

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我又閃......./ H! X, b9 X* q) g

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又話等我番黎既...............

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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e排唔見你既~
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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:3 w/ d- T+ m1 e& }9 ]0 e' m3 a

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:
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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:
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睇下你想描寫咩人???% h) L) ?. w* @! W* ~) X
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差唔多啦，我對呢方面好廢=.=
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