
Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-2 09:41 PM:( q1 q. o" s( z3 f! N
小弟今年中三,要交一篇1500字的功課,...

Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-2 09:41 PM:' u; R- K+ F1 E" E/ b, C% F
爾朱榮要殺胡太后,胡太后自以為削髮為尼,就可以逃過一劫,誰知爾朱榮竟不念舊情,堅決要殺死胡太后,於是胡太后的一生就此結束。
Originally posted by 康bb at 2007-12-2 22:32:2 l2 `- [) [) F4 m
我學校都有功課係1500字小說.; I: [0 r: D( C) {- g' v( Z
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簡單好多
Originally posted by 衰貓 at 2007-12-2 23:42:" |" l/ M. [8 }
其實依家既學校俾呢類功課唔會俾埋題...
Originally posted by 12d3 at 2007-12-2 22:07:+ W) I4 |. Z' R' p6 K" F! t
1500字太少, 寫唔到." c |" ]- {% n
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不妨將重點放在呢個情節度, 加d愛恨交纏, 易寫好多.
Originally posted by 155220 at 2007-12-3 05:12 PM:0 M2 w2 r" a, c
如果以上內容要簡化,還要怎麼做?
Originally posted by 12d3 at 2007-12-5 02:50:
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曾聽過一句話: 研究歷史會發掘...
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