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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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- y. @. _. @) A; T4 t& Nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; }3 i2 g" [) z9 S* {# weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , \$ i2 I2 e. i% e. p* q
' `2 {9 A6 _) O# n, J9 y! N( }Let me just rewrite yours:
- f/ i0 d" f# P! |; B& OIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me \! C% m* C2 R" W
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# S# K" l' m: ]) f: p( K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 \. P; G6 q( J% y3 y3 `% a
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 k* G6 o0 f7 `- ^0 y( \ |
4 Q# e# c- u3 s2 J* p9 Z8 |Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 V1 F9 i4 b3 f9 |* {
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