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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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- j1 V" M4 j% [9 x( T# R3 P; @it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' @' @5 C, v) v& y; |. q; u
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' `4 h; N2 o* C M3 j
Y' w4 i# y1 ?' bLet me just rewrite yours:) y, Z: x+ {, J8 N2 g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 E; v2 i' d4 j$ ]3 \% f8 M
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; A' ]1 L6 y: I0 }" w
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 V w* g$ r4 ]1 i/ A. B0 Q
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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