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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% p9 S _7 Q neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 W! c6 @6 L7 G+ \" W
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Let me just rewrite yours:, ^# z3 U9 p! m( ^! a! U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# K# U5 h* c9 z* ~+ ^% o! t) Z4 c
6 G2 X8 r) V6 n( J$ p8 @+ G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: x E$ t3 N3 O3 w/ x7 I N% a
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. E: _: ^7 s+ n$ X. W, x" G: F
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& K; Z, V. G/ `; s2 ] K% D, }6 A
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ L& P4 k7 W6 ~+ _
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