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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ V* e( V; S. c- b: A/ teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 ~( H/ l7 Y7 L6 ?" J
4 | S }5 a3 ~4 B- ^3 {" VLet me just rewrite yours:
- J& {; G" p. R: ?+ [It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ m- n# V- f2 ?6 D, C- [6 z# w) X
: ?9 Q) G3 h9 U T; j; i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. e0 N& E. K9 C+ C* z9 Y) P! g( \( z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 \8 ^+ ?) O6 v
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. `: |7 L% d, N: W' M% kThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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