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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- E. D) K" u9 K8 D3 _2 D% M
- H6 k5 D+ l" j( c3 |it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 b. Q( Z' Z$ ~1 n! |! ^0 `+ meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( B1 a" W c* H5 J/ `
. D0 G1 j, F- |Let me just rewrite yours:: O8 f* z$ R4 W( c/ |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 b/ c7 Y |! l' Y! M: e2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 q, L# R2 W7 ]0 O$ D% e4 _$ M
' [/ \3 m) J: z/ z( F- F$ D* }3 sThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ Y- p) {2 u0 n& j' b
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