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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 n+ o, X! O P! a# ~
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* }( [0 i& n1 Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - R5 G9 i- s6 I( Y% p
# X* b3 A' J+ b9 j9 RLet me just rewrite yours:% k2 N% H- X, D2 U# q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. _8 c$ M6 x: ]& |4 l% V- @, s2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 Q% n! ~. u+ x9 Y) i& J4 C9 N
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., B* ~) B* `& J% b; B" e! X9 u4 D
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