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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 o7 \) r4 A6 z7 x7 ]! w r
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : z0 i1 h$ t m" |8 F3 @
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 ?: J8 }, @8 w5 Z/ V# x
# w7 ~: t7 W+ G7 j& ?: qLet me just rewrite yours:
( j7 b `3 x1 S) o- a. x6 RIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, ^* ~8 ]) M! j: q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 X: e9 b$ r7 w: j% Q8 j1 f0 {9 i; M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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& s# F% F# I7 L+ x8 n* h6 u. i: u9 U$ O5 _There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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