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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / x3 s: D7 q. b! r! b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! f4 ~3 L; y* Q6 ?9 a0 Q9 T7 w* G' E2 g6 ^. P
Let me just rewrite yours:7 F, K% Y0 d+ s: \" ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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% \: q) O! w2 O* P1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ d9 i; G# i. j- D! K% D! w& X5 s% j2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 s* H! n! d7 @# }% }! }9 W
+ ]$ A2 H* z4 i, m" C3 ~There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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