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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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1 Y |3 w; w+ r. `7 t* Z2 mit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + b$ H4 [% ]3 F9 w' s& N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' s8 V% ~! ?+ F9 o$ y& I; n
' q" X3 `$ s8 q' D4 \Let me just rewrite yours:
1 J M; y5 R) d: B! P) H4 {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' p: t$ L& J( ?2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., e; Q: F" T( J0 t8 E5 S
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. _, G8 W' a0 Z! P" A
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% X( U" u$ n1 Z: T5 o
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