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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 Y X4 t6 o+ q1 b1 Z. B
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 B0 y. s8 w6 q& \3 f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % T7 T3 s* S6 x9 v3 V7 C' z, D
. n/ o4 `* W2 T. j5 h, ULet me just rewrite yours:; |3 y# O Q& {/ ~8 J( {, z2 B, _
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 l) b0 ?# U+ P
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ g( d# E& u) ~6 M: B M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 R# t4 @* p$ a0 q. k4 Z+ y9 V+ A/ T+ U
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