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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 H# {: D* y" \6 D N8 r, ]+ Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. y* t) m6 U& ~1 ^+ A' h3 Z& Q Q
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Let me just rewrite yours:1 O& _$ U+ c$ r. D, ]7 o
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, u/ [$ g) Y5 G- c2 E4 y/ p( U6 c
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 C* N$ V$ Q! T2 |3 f4 p2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 [6 C# V6 X4 F) T, }# g0 x
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 d, i) d! g5 s8 C7 K
( W$ Z3 ?3 ?4 k1 mThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. z0 V4 q3 j3 k
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