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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 B. |0 A7 i" G ~3 B, h) T
, D9 @& U5 Y5 K6 M. Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ q9 |, s8 [0 q$ t! l/ A$ a. [everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ u# ]7 ?! u' Q1 M# Y( Y3 j# d& b
6 l& ^6 a; `$ F1 k& e! zLet me just rewrite yours:+ e5 a' `" x- F6 z4 f
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 m' g& r3 |' \* G. l; N' l
/ ~4 T$ P1 @/ u$ L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& u$ k: I! _* ^" o8 r p4 v. I* c0 x
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; ~8 Q$ `5 s \2 k, z- J
* C5 a$ l! p) B' Q5 r. `0 mThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: A5 h, v; U! n$ N% |
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