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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- ]' @, I0 {; P' h3 h
' U1 F* x3 L( W @' `it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - ?; H, V8 f1 n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; r; [- r* O7 p) Y; g* s; A
5 @4 x" t2 {7 F0 ], nLet me just rewrite yours:2 L7 `% \2 K0 T( z- B* C
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me Z+ ?- u6 B; G. s% ]2 a
8 e- I8 q- K, W4 F/ I1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) B; j9 F3 U$ x7 A( U8 [2 Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: t$ w& J" z+ ~/ z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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8 B0 T1 k/ O5 w' v {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; u$ @9 z& c6 |. V( z% n) [) e
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