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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' o' e6 w1 j, b7 h& e$ n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 Z- @7 a+ |6 ^! R
$ A1 e8 M U) hLet me just rewrite yours:
! i8 n# s; p& F1 a0 yIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, \6 H' y$ p R1 }. J: F
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) Q7 w+ D" a/ r# W) b4 \; f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., E% B8 J! Q% _
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 Y# I+ |& a* P, D
; f/ z" ~! P, W' c1 X5 V8 AThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- b7 W9 J% z; N3 S; X
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