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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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) K& @! b; m, nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) [8 u6 c$ B4 Aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - d' l; G: X8 f# ~/ E4 I/ v: Q6 S3 C8 X8 r' m7 o' K
Let me just rewrite yours:/ H' J, I* @- Z; u( h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, \" |+ Q1 D9 B1 d& F( r/ j2 w* Z9 E
, Q+ E. y/ B8 w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 u \. ^4 p; V0 I2 f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 b0 b& z5 |7 [2 ~, `" B
! A P4 ]- m- ]# F" Z# S }There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 v g4 ?6 }$ V1 U+ ]: T# b
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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