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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 Y! m& \/ v+ s3 T; A2 A! G
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : v) `6 I8 z0 r* l; l
1 G- k/ ~+ M: T+ GLet me just rewrite yours:3 s: R3 e( @0 m7 ?
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& p: h. t6 l% q' A
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% C* p6 l8 w( K" p( K6 ?2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: ] j) V( o' K2 [' w; L9 {; Q5 g$ G
! [ }0 \* H8 cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' q0 M, [5 _, A
- ~1 _6 S3 ~& XThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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