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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 N* C4 c$ e' ?' V: w. n: q
[& P0 s3 z) u" Q' R% g# fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + z" _ J" X/ h; u/ X6 i% r
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , ~" O6 U) a+ `. o7 z3 v/ f
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Let me just rewrite yours:7 D& i- k; L4 f$ M& `. u
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 m, Z5 Q+ U4 i
9 Y. V! ~; p% p2 r0 n0 o6 }) _ Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* T+ q1 G# x7 O7 S" @3 Z( w
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ Y9 n7 m" n' W: l1 X; @
# E% L& @+ D. X) r) `9 i: v5 l wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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