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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
{5 l, k" H* y3 t9 A a" @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; O& r1 @3 E9 n: v1 ?4 u! E1 Z" @0 v
Let me just rewrite yours:
- D/ C1 i( S+ E' a: R/ O( yIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& p) G0 X- C, D* n/ A4 L2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." y- y( `7 w6 v; ]' |; j
; C4 P7 a# w# p8 y4 aThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! ^! ~6 G1 l; u9 M( l9 H* X
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 T; o, ?, u4 Z6 S5 @1 E/ h
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