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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: M7 d' E& w- _( r: J z
1 b3 j; c+ K. @9 S1 B wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& S0 ? h! |$ Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ ~: j' \# q' q& N( r+ W
. _2 ?& B7 c' k1 z4 n" o! k$ GLet me just rewrite yours:/ _9 n/ B, w1 X- x5 |: Y& l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 r6 F* U2 _) H: e, h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! _& C6 `% N! r! Y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- R$ j5 J) e% e1 \% |! ?0 L! S8 x
* b' e8 K. F/ s% g' g& ]There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: q# j3 j; T4 ^; V% s: c
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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