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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( o% s- N1 f2 u1 e
8 I6 y6 c- C% u* @8 ~. bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & Q- l1 G1 h, o
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 a6 b2 e& g$ q9 L7 V
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Let me just rewrite yours:7 V, T" k1 t! ~8 _+ @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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- t3 Z$ H T H: c8 @) _: U1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; p) r: s) O1 Y6 A& n4 V! i2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ V. H. ~2 P5 v
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% B3 u& ^' A5 [% Q6 x) x
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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