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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' I; J( l; h ~: [2 r4 X
. v S" l" j; ?% N0 ?- qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 R% s* l K& ]) Y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ S( B" L7 X! |9 h' ~; S3 \
8 w9 j* H! i1 X* Y J, i; j& sLet me just rewrite yours:0 i1 x! K! _* c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" W3 `9 c/ I* O/ s1 W. F3 X* x
3 P$ m6 w/ q" q! u# ?4 ~1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 F8 B% a* S x8 B9 v2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: B* @9 A% j9 x- B4 r0 z
/ ?; O4 q; K x4 M M2 h S% t8 bThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- f; s9 {# I t+ ~
6 A+ {, v- v; c+ _0 ]. {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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