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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( w; x; y; J# D9 }
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 u! d8 g. \9 p6 h$ F: } t( g
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. Q" B, J7 Z6 ]3 p8 j
1 B( r; U& B+ H I$ l+ s: BLet me just rewrite yours:, l6 H3 q# w5 E5 y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, d5 A& T$ P) S" ]
2 H$ c9 W1 k$ k& G2 P" E. s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 J, k4 i x7 \7 e5 m6 O
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* _: [0 F2 T* \3 A* X9 g' p
1 ~/ C4 c# X7 B" CThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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% K8 [1 s$ S8 P$ a2 T3 dThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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