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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% X5 N @2 k6 x6 Qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. ~3 P7 V# u' O2 Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - y8 w( n1 m9 d T- J# f/ q. {$ a
( z0 I, c# v V- N* d1 `/ @' cLet me just rewrite yours:
2 E4 l5 j8 v9 X, rIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( N; Z$ I6 v Y5 W& q+ v- i; P" E1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# \! V. n1 N3 T% d1 {0 J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 j5 I, v2 i# J7 O- M: o5 F8 P" n
$ O4 w: U- C- G' v6 O! D5 l1 uThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 s9 {! J2 v" V3 g8 L3 e2 t
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