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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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6 O- u& W) R' X$ \! l7 k0 e8 rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , c0 q. h9 k# Q, }: x
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ a5 C: u+ I) S
R% H5 s. f/ q2 H5 U% Z; xLet me just rewrite yours:" ?* s+ ^' I5 G2 u7 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 r; y6 t0 ^( ?5 h' ?7 ]% L) y& w
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ q3 d0 R: c3 w4 U! n6 g& f4 G3 {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) D6 P; z5 T8 @! u* m8 Y$ h+ P$ nThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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