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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ Y1 I! J$ L* w% b
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everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' `) g2 a6 `( i8 e; t# P
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Let me just rewrite yours:- o5 E& I6 ^6 l) `: O5 s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ X8 d) K3 H. o2 y, O. H0 T, p
! f" e" T' _/ e0 ]9 K: l1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ \/ o( r8 _* i
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' I( X$ `1 M1 O6 D- u9 T; i0 E
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