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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. [3 X' O; m# T9 l3 L4 m# u
% ?2 n9 h6 }8 A- nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 Y4 B) |6 B; }+ ?( X, c# {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * \8 _- ^. j/ N& {0 Q
/ {# o/ j' _, h. y7 aLet me just rewrite yours:$ ?8 e" v( |2 p0 D1 m% ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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' N+ y. B% k" F D) q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 h0 J$ X& Y0 w$ y# u1 h _3 ~3 c2 m1 U
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! n) ?% k8 O( V) c) B! d/ E3 |' m0 D
3 t$ k& y- j- o7 x5 ~* A) T7 rThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; x: j; E+ \2 m; ~' N
/ |) S$ ?4 w- O3 R& CThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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: ]3 s+ w& R3 _$ ?3 |4 x5 v# @3 AGretz. |
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