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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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4 n0 [3 r9 [, R$ [" Kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " t' [4 T7 O5 d' y+ _) |5 G" a: b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + @' e5 n: l) H
% ]1 ]" N- @6 {Let me just rewrite yours:% R3 H' w F, ?3 a& G7 x1 [8 G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 x3 \6 U: P @; x5 }! n! V% j
" V" v8 P# P3 W, b- _! j$ C! q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ B2 r; F9 B- r j
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* B, t, E7 G8 ]. F* d
) W4 l) R# p ^3 ?There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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