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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- \* C- b% c! |
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' \* x0 G2 B& E3 e, j8 S
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 a* x' ~/ R$ i9 B3 K
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Let me just rewrite yours:3 ?0 U/ n p/ L& t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# }/ B# C B" ?9 Q7 e2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' o& B2 y4 x3 k
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 S5 q! v* ^# o3 g
2 ^! Z' k' j {! GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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