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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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" q2 I8 o6 l% z: t. z, Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& U4 V" S: t" G4 d e* C8 oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 [, T* A3 Z1 L) N% r
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Let me just rewrite yours:6 Q# ]* B3 I) y6 C/ t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. o6 }- L9 n. o @! s* B) g8 m
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# [7 x. \( ^8 g/ M4 t4 T2 x2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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