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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 k/ R& O1 g. p
& D) J+ ]! L8 P* @it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) R/ v2 H& b& A) w. n6 b& ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ i3 ?& h/ O5 f4 }9 C4 y* Z- E, X5 h# D$ z& {
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& ^; |* v' o: s0 T* {4 K/ z% W
. U+ |1 P6 u% M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' [$ v8 R2 J% }9 J! w s) v" {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ t* S4 a* ]! @% V
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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