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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: X9 V) H5 p7 O; Aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 _+ K9 b6 a h& @0 y
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Let me just rewrite yours:, E+ L$ B/ D7 Z+ U9 \. @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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+ r) o1 F5 T$ [# D" b S I1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 V' ^ g1 H$ k! `- a3 F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ a9 U+ @( Y$ U
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