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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# c( g; |% \9 D7 ~
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and _: x- c* ]' Q7 |' d
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , P( |7 X+ k& j
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Let me just rewrite yours:. G. G0 O; `! p: J; p3 s. m3 F
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! k% B$ n" Y2 l9 ` ]
3 m0 ?8 l# l3 N8 m6 N! I9 |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ e7 P: b7 G9 ?! e) d" B0 N; L W$ W' ~
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! ]" r+ q% U& @5 ~% l6 p1 H
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' ?! d$ n0 \8 b& u' a; nThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 e7 I: L- [( d) E* `) ?! d9 J
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