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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ h+ z+ G% E! a6 _4 I
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 v7 n$ D$ W% p6 N% S, n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; ~! I0 [% i1 S0 q
3 r# a1 W4 j/ zLet me just rewrite yours:5 ~9 m; Y2 W2 I( m$ t! z. F- m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# e [/ V/ j9 `% j2 ]6 p
9 }# ?8 s3 x% j- j4 Z) I1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" E8 b; l% B% ?3 Q& M1 J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- K R4 u7 L* r
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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7 B8 I6 u/ G7 E/ u. x. n# yThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% r ~# q* N( X; @1 A; |" b) f5 R
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