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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 @( M7 [; U: Y2 E
) P8 R2 `4 w h7 Sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 B# n' W6 _/ y# L' M; r9 Geveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 w* T2 C3 D; K3 L% a- {. h1 y9 t' [, h8 P1 z3 E7 u- `
Let me just rewrite yours:
g0 V' ^: k8 D( ]* S1 aIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( y9 d; v5 T. \5 q
$ `7 T% g% ^! B+ b. b# r7 \1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* ^9 y D. T) q6 y/ l0 Z5 m- r
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 Y9 w! u' e: |, k* d
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 J8 E# V% L) ?# P# z9 U
3 B/ J* k `$ g# R2 J" r# NThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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