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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 i$ b* y9 x7 r; J/ Y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( k y" r" X& ~ |$ E+ F. x
) P; g5 ?( A) [, _6 q( o1 D4 l! L1 YLet me just rewrite yours:6 K3 ?' k6 {" C# d7 L1 W& h) e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 a2 @7 p5 i+ ~" b3 z: P& d% b1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ D s, f I3 U$ c2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ E& M* }5 p- w/ n4 P0 l* p. T
$ H" d+ W! ]" Z) `& zThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) i* ^7 ?5 \4 l, J }( X" g
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 `+ ` v9 M5 b% }
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