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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 I7 _1 m: |' ]: c# n' I: bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! m/ y! C n2 @8 a+ @- ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 R! X$ i" `- `7 q# P: i
+ h* b, R( {, }Let me just rewrite yours:/ {4 V* m4 i+ T: z' c% `3 n4 T' W3 T8 S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* k/ g9 m) }5 A1 n* \$ B
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' k% X- m5 z5 T0 {9 W1 `
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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: {; C0 u8 ]; w3 O$ W- q( tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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