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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 F! S! K+ ~: S$ c/ ~4 N6 ]6 W5 @
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 l: F# I/ ^2 I
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 v* T9 U* s& K2 |) I- y! B( C
& ^! w" g, V& I: W% J1 GLet me just rewrite yours:* R2 W( ?" m( ^# t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, \2 W/ { t* }. p
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 A1 w. u0 D" y" h# G7 ^/ f
; z: D* q1 Z J# N5 w3 w# cThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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