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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 G+ j# x$ T% o) O5 I: N' Tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 O) e+ e5 e5 Z. i8 M9 |1 \: w
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) A( E$ N$ q( F% Y" x. {
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Let me just rewrite yours:' _- {' V$ p O9 r: e$ S) k0 U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 s' p9 E7 B) u
/ {2 Y: n; D7 R1 x1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
^0 P6 N1 E2 y Y: C2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( f# s" ?6 [, z) q3 \4 l" O
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, D% w7 P. @7 I& ^, O( h" eThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ g8 T) V- \# Z; W& p9 B) a
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