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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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' Z& F4 ?7 k2 X, E* xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : ^* i5 P- F& b7 o3 |" k: O
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 |# [2 c1 s# {
0 c) R' G/ A QLet me just rewrite yours:% y$ m3 u- U7 B e1 K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ r' o) G' p3 M; A
% ~; [5 F; o3 k) R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 d3 y5 W. ^( n0 w0 F7 n# J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( Z; T8 P, B4 ?0 Z! [2 o
7 e9 q2 D% i2 @" O. S! l, CThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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