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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! d3 E: n6 B8 v; \5 ^
# z8 G7 ?: t1 [$ eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* e0 B1 l) F+ G3 K' Peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 r- m! w, k8 f( i
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Let me just rewrite yours:& k. q- ]/ d/ z; y x3 E. h) I
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. b+ A2 u1 D; N: k2 d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 H, y# d5 }, z! r% g" c
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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