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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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6 g" K/ o0 _* yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 X: k$ E0 r7 |% t- k. r" c) g& ~everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & c$ w, d8 w5 }" r8 h7 W! ]+ K" G# O. p( o. D: q
Let me just rewrite yours:) A2 X! W' P9 N( h5 N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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$ R+ K4 p' \# f7 {1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) _2 a5 s- E4 W
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." U* N2 _% N" E8 c7 r2 \. n
3 B# T% t9 i3 I) y2 S6 Z: r, o+ mThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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$ b& ]. Z; D# N4 a& Y2 }Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& Y2 v) ?9 ~) q
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