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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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$ A5 H4 M0 n: e5 ?1 O5 G/ _* C" iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, J6 M: D5 w, Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( v) M% t5 a, Y" J; g
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Let me just rewrite yours:( Y; N6 a7 J) }4 g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# {" S2 F6 S, m) {: t9 W4 k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! V8 b) [% ~! E) j8 @2 G/ Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- J8 `# P& N+ V, x
+ Q" z3 D# O0 MThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 c2 N* S0 Q1 J. R& R
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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