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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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) P" a8 n) O, L5 Tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 W1 A2 G; [/ f4 R: P) V& F& H/ Veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 w3 t' \+ ^4 ~
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Let me just rewrite yours:: s8 a& N1 O' S1 C L( k
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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% g% a* B, ]/ n9 L5 S6 k& v! d1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( s3 A0 v+ y& a: D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ x J& d) J% ]" g
: |' b, n8 d2 [( BThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. }+ i2 V) N% }1 O f: h
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# `. o) W# u. Q: q# N- O Y. o/ v
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