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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% J* {, O9 d/ y" k; A3 @
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % c" \7 T' @; B( y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; M8 ?: F1 D* }- b% H
6 y. E! j! r+ D& O- d' T/ l( wLet me just rewrite yours:
( P6 }1 q0 t6 T2 p9 AIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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3 u1 \# {/ A" S! ]4 G$ P( e" c1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 {) G: M# y' d- |( p- S2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( F8 H4 Y2 v9 y* nThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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$ }' @" V U& e4 EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 f4 u, {6 a. |1 M
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