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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 ]0 A! n4 y/ a c, K" Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , ]; @: b% S5 O# ]1 L/ T! J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 R+ _$ u. D- n% h7 }# P/ V: z2 m u% m1 w/ l- B) |9 B
Let me just rewrite yours:9 f. N+ o* O; b' \5 d) l& c1 s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 g, j' j$ ? d( }, M# ~% N$ j
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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1 _6 y9 M8 o1 s; sThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. v# C9 {0 A0 Q3 e! n4 u4 w) k
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