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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' [/ f5 G. b" A4 y- L
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
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Let me just rewrite yours:- \9 d) V" j+ y8 \
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 j' r# k* I( W4 |! {
& u B( r/ g3 Y7 j0 @1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 [, \' o! _3 Q, _/ I
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 Y7 [3 N' t; \+ S6 @# ^: C
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