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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* x* J V) R% H. q6 h1 x/ k0 git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 m5 o/ S s, y3 u2 C8 Z& U- m
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 U4 ^ Y; z. c# m3 g; y# g9 `; m: j$ K/ M* c2 H9 z: x
Let me just rewrite yours:5 ]3 l) R% _% o2 O& i+ O6 m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. x4 n4 l+ Z u6 y8 H b
0 J! y1 ]! E* @9 [% P6 {+ @9 {" p" ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ R! z* B6 T7 Y1 N8 ?6 K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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! k, {8 z$ K% hThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! v0 f2 R( m2 ]$ ^9 b7 ?8 l
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