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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, g7 K, O7 W' s7 n x& d0 ]
! s5 ~7 I3 k0 H$ q* E0 I5 Uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; s2 | j- J* [/ ~" G0 }everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , B% v' [1 Z9 ?7 j" d6 P. d) h) l
- n' |3 ?9 U, r2 W$ ^- J5 f& v" m, FLet me just rewrite yours:' o7 P$ r2 u" S7 `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* T) }) e; V( V) i$ W2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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/ I: i$ R. {! o! G. WThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( j( L% _4 I; f* f9 f* a$ s9 x
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