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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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9 K. o) l# ?1 O1 x3 fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 A- P* p. V: e9 U. G7 ? ^8 |1 s
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( _6 B$ [; \" f0 u) w* ]6 _: q5 F* d
1 g4 p5 t& m# G6 y) GLet me just rewrite yours:& f+ u7 o# H X* @) w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 ]& R6 p" k. m0 e/ w! w& [
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" ]4 K: S% a+ q$ A
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ t; J! a) `4 M
1 \2 y6 b6 L0 S3 m0 [4 S, g$ G7 c( ZThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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8 O4 l1 l- a% l0 s! L2 U- ?6 W/ ^+ wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., Q. Q& i. [* s- u, p3 j5 g( k& L
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