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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ l; S' ^2 F% y1 Peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! n3 q: O3 W5 Q6 `# C6 a5 |0 L. K5 `5 M4 C% L3 y9 v, w
Let me just rewrite yours:# z' K4 G; b! K8 M& C' m' p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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$ c3 M3 I6 M' ` C# F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: D0 Z: _1 Q! i: ^- {2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 P$ Q$ T8 a! e' c: V1 U0 K. e
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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* z, ?. X9 q o' @3 kThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. p" R( L% x( X l) t
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