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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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( Y. a# L' F8 @( M/ V; Ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 j3 l& r% _* s+ M
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) R: d( b( ]* i7 y5 G5 P3 y( H, ?0 o! M! r3 Y
Let me just rewrite yours:7 _/ T$ ]) I, M, `* `" i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, s, j# V3 F2 B. m/ M
' E. ~2 l" w) ?1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: W0 ?. [5 s# c% G& H2 [: I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 J) Y7 T8 G8 {# n. y7 z
- y0 ~- D' S- g' GThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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