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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 _3 k0 Y9 i6 f' g
- W0 C; m: b' M1 K) l, @it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 j0 {/ g* a8 J% l r7 i
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % s; x: v7 @5 l2 k6 B& N( F3 x- h9 s1 i, k1 x) d8 p, W/ S
Let me just rewrite yours:: O, h# v7 U2 P5 M4 l% b
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 i8 W ~& |2 i: r1 Y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 T6 Q# c2 J, [5 |9 Y, d v2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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. K* y1 P, H; s- ?5 \There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., c) H! a& s% D* y* T) k: Y
9 i+ [8 J+ Q" R- LThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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