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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* a9 _; _: R8 R. i8 B- ]
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 C/ R8 R8 e3 ]$ aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) h, V; l1 l, C# w- y9 \+ w8 i
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Let me just rewrite yours:* Y( a& t. h% }( X d' C
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 o! W) d9 q. H6 Y
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: ?/ G. K* h5 h: m2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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9 h; S& O3 ?; RThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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