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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 `1 d% D2 m! i, E
5 s* Z% m0 G3 Y. ?( V' v% uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* G/ J" ]% O/ m8 h# f4 @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. z& R! f9 u" S: Q% F7 W* [
5 O5 A C9 A+ T+ H/ pLet me just rewrite yours:
" n; y' `$ `4 R i, U( ?/ N) [It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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& i9 l( D+ `) k# q- ]% X, G9 D1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& S% ~. J% `6 U m5 P7 J' u" h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& |* A S$ n* z5 k/ F
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 T; ?; H! S$ D# V! o
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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