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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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/ W$ J' |+ i1 Sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 `$ Y5 E4 Y% L5 Veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & B/ t) X, V6 m, I* [4 c5 T
6 A3 {6 e2 o) P3 S# pLet me just rewrite yours:8 @7 ]" A W6 A7 j' S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- m7 [- Y& O' d T i
; E" M. G- ~/ u( ]1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 e7 i& [' w4 m( X4 s2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( F4 ]: D* t1 }
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 ^! o3 S" I! x) G
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; {7 o0 S4 u0 B
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