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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 f# Q: c0 r9 u0 A3 \7 ]8 eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 t s9 K8 M: leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 b+ ^ H' q$ M- C6 t. @
' E5 f+ _( U* @+ f5 \% I+ E" b+ NLet me just rewrite yours:) B6 t4 d4 z R. H0 Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, }. y. X, G* |8 c+ a b1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 ~1 x V3 M0 [. `/ Q9 I' @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- j5 ^ R3 m0 }; T3 Y: \+ C2 `2 e! ?
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow." Y. K6 j) S" k' P6 ?
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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