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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 @0 X! q5 i, F; M) B
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 S+ {& H ^2 c- |6 y/ Y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . ?" K7 n* r4 L3 w* y, X; J `0 G
! V. |& g3 @ S' @Let me just rewrite yours:
: T9 c) T, O& b/ l9 ?# eIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: K. [1 U. M! n- w" a6 a
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 F- S7 _! ?# [5 Q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* p F8 J9 K: U# M o% R# B
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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9 M9 L+ t. Z# ]2 sThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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