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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- M8 v1 Q6 V; _% T+ I- Z
4 |: v) C3 d! X" `2 L0 Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& F' H* Y8 @: n& L; Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % ?: E: A. P6 g) c' R
3 c, ]0 O# z& F9 zLet me just rewrite yours:1 ^+ F7 R6 @; z e( F7 ~2 P& M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. `) J a2 i( {# s+ l( D
1 j4 c: n. S+ `( e1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ o5 S: e7 X" |" u3 x
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* S$ ]8 P1 _# d
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) D" @% h9 L3 k' M" }: f1 J" ?5 f
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