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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% L! K' N* B8 p9 ] Lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& y3 W% ~1 q. q& ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 } i4 V: _! q i( ]
4 b/ R3 Y g; t5 u4 j0 T. CLet me just rewrite yours:2 c2 ?5 @% @ R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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. @4 x7 u" e5 f6 o$ x" ? \* u2 M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- N5 L7 L3 F$ }/ j, _/ `' V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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% e2 {- k( \! M7 c5 b: h4 ?$ FThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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