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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 e6 M' s+ M' v+ A2 h
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * ?; L1 F3 C/ i
0 X/ n: c0 l% J3 g: v+ lLet me just rewrite yours:* C3 ]: @& h3 J, }' c/ y5 O- K- e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; o9 @3 D# i2 w- D, {+ _1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# A) g5 A1 P; W# y+ P9 ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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! v8 d0 c* o% W# e7 j$ XThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 M1 J) j2 k g( N% c( Y
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