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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 E* Z/ n. t9 ~" ^$ Q2 ]7 y3 Teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 P7 T9 t* W' G
3 U+ t9 a; ?5 X* B, l, V" ]0 s& H QLet me just rewrite yours:+ ]6 T, \6 V: `+ b
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 X! H& n! F2 U/ v2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 ]' ]! b+ H, j' ^* Y* B. f
. @0 Z6 L- R- D; e4 `4 o% y& uThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ E9 @2 B+ Z: ?! W) j. e* |Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) |; g% u2 P& C8 n
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Gretz. |
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