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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 w: h! i, K6 d
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ \/ @7 L. O8 }! o$ b. c" Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 |# Y5 j) K# t/ E) k, r4 c, ^+ E
7 h( ^2 q( l, L: [Let me just rewrite yours:
: _2 d& d. Q7 A0 y7 G/ s4 nIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ J! S" T* z5 R! q) E
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 S9 p. p5 J8 y$ y) }; ~2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 ?, L) o0 z: A- R9 ?6 T7 A- I
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ b, A3 L% O& _1 [6 ^* ^
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) s5 q; D. ~3 e$ Q7 U
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