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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" l5 M: K% S7 @ r X( m7 \
9 \: e- r, \/ [" c0 P: y8 s/ R1 F. rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) c8 c& n# Q/ g/ S) qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 g7 z" X3 d b9 `) X! H, W! l2 k. V. @2 v, ]3 N3 `
Let me just rewrite yours:
% B1 n) P4 r, x# H& ?It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, G5 J5 ^& p- h4 m/ O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ M+ M7 F& {% [, b/ s8 v2 ?! y! M/ q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( _4 V/ g! S, V1 {6 r
$ ?* f2 d: Z/ d, tThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 S y+ Q/ i/ u5 B; h
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- S U$ L8 }" s) m' f# W( j
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