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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / K5 r- w5 p- a3 c/ i7 @6 R# o
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + l# b& J& G% J
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Let me just rewrite yours:7 A, B# H5 L" f! J( ^ s6 {
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 x* ?1 c3 \# O+ I$ Y9 g0 X, Q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 i/ v2 m; T+ Y( J6 U4 ?, |
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# ]' a1 O } g) e0 R4 G2 F
5 S% l' D/ f1 H8 YThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ B/ T: K7 B9 j' G: p/ I+ |
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