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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 q5 B/ T, n6 A- s% W
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : [6 T% F9 {! b$ N2 T. L U7 K
: @6 F, M( I: T' A) e, G1 XLet me just rewrite yours:. X, @' x I- o" ^9 v: x1 g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 z% g% y; q8 i
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( D/ A5 e; x7 K& E6 T1 S
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 m9 ~1 J( l* M3 W
0 w4 M$ O2 n: R, x" J& w" oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 g- Z; k5 B( l& b2 T
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