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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 T6 X, e; E8 [8 y& Z0 F; h" h9 p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * J$ o* R; J/ \. w3 N# N
4 _! n+ _0 c. P C. S, z0 M. a' ~Let me just rewrite yours:/ j( o; ^7 H1 Z& u
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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) f. {( { B0 Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 ^9 }& s# V0 Y1 i* n8 }1 ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 }& k; q8 y6 A, s& u
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow." i# P) e1 q' K; I3 S- h% Q
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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