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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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' K& Y3 O, w$ s( rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- A4 g5 c0 f0 Z6 F/ _/ ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 K& z3 C; j2 T4 U% X, n! F# X& y$ g; S; \7 B! F% Z
Let me just rewrite yours:! m( V1 ~8 G5 |$ m8 M9 d+ P! n: I( q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) b) v! A1 [- e( s4 p8 p
; x( i$ ~# y5 u6 @4 s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ a5 M2 a+ A1 v/ S- V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! _* N9 c$ s) I& s- ~% @
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( o6 j' d- h# G1 l
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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