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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% ?0 R. ?9 |7 G9 R) w5 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 U: m" q" r A: W9 D8 `
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) s! E( i3 x5 {( e6 b; _2 [$ G9 _5 C
. b4 y. U! h' x1 l% \Let me just rewrite yours:
7 z" q7 {% P& W0 S1 D3 m QIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' I: [3 v i/ W( I7 e5 M
2 q! Q6 |& G6 M! a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 ?, d/ a; _5 c8 z, Q. Y& N: U2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# G) p/ Y5 M4 r' G5 ], E; r
0 m8 E5 _/ O- ?' K6 q: z$ wThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 a/ R/ `' y9 n Y8 F5 s2 G
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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