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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 w- ^7 M0 @" _8 }" u
) p6 F; j: a5 w3 d% ~0 Z/ Oit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : w# [7 [7 `; [" \3 e7 H" q) x
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. j* m3 \' T% f% B6 k% a! Y/ v
$ R3 s' g P d# V% d, F6 A4 \/ ?Let me just rewrite yours:. j+ ]5 X- a2 |1 q3 E- e' _3 ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 ]; }8 z6 M# h7 ]1 R8 [6 a
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 P/ M/ x) V# O* y
. y# b/ h; b( a C5 Z0 WThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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