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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# K9 {. p# B% n W, h; r
* _, n" ? e+ @9 ?it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 n8 Z7 O" i r8 j* y }3 meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . w9 A* i4 u' z- z; l v* W
$ p- P& _) e. lLet me just rewrite yours:, i1 y+ K) ^' }% o
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 k! `) k" K, _" X( N" \. w# T: z# v6 C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 H( b# H* b: x+ s% t! k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 ?% j2 c; t5 Z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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9 m' w$ b+ P# Y* U2 {' \4 cThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: Y0 \8 Z& \. n3 |2 ~9 b7 v/ U
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