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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% @9 \( v! o+ ~. s! O) ]8 M3 X: Q! Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 {/ X, @/ K# v7 |8 H
: f7 v1 V3 u+ ~) v* lLet me just rewrite yours:- h3 _# ]" M: W/ f, i- c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# q0 t0 f2 h9 W
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ x; _' q% V, S' u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ t7 C) p) I( ]9 j
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 g/ ~4 k& M; M& z E
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