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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- Q6 G! b& ~: a
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; } g( N% ?! W6 w- }, m8 }everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 o7 b$ F& {# [% D. ]2 X5 b+ f* A7 b( Q2 v5 H( `
Let me just rewrite yours:0 K$ }: I4 k% J2 x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 M3 c0 c% H* N4 R; F y! j
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ ]9 v2 |: \5 J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." w- F6 [# J3 t, A6 F( D0 n) C
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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0 b( k$ m0 v4 R5 o7 a% O. {* mThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 ~0 N, S9 [* p% q! ]/ v; s" O
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