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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 \9 N0 M- Z) }4 j' P/ \8 Q$ w" ~# Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 g( ?' R3 C( }: v: z4 `
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 q* I6 }4 F8 [+ U0 i8 z$ }( S+ u6 A0 f$ s, l! v$ X3 J3 k
Let me just rewrite yours:
; L# V- N, X8 G4 CIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' [. p7 M# j" n( g$ j
: u5 q9 C! N0 h8 F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' e% J+ h+ A. n5 }+ H, W2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 i, W2 r& |9 s- T1 v9 g5 n: }
5 Y) o# V0 q! G# I) }# S( TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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