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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 H U9 m- t5 T1 u( m
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! k- X# B5 e7 z& f3 D
' f) l1 V/ W p0 I* O* Y( Q( ^0 ILet me just rewrite yours:
1 \8 X' @! A8 T. U$ d) e" L& x7 ?It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 A% \" M E7 M* ]4 O% t
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" T. X: Y5 H4 a, o) |
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) q1 P* ^2 P1 @3 Z t+ F7 i7 p- K
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; ~% c( {! ^+ R3 a- v
) e* Z+ @5 r) l- ]& E8 f( nThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 T+ p8 j' c7 V& L! w
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