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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ E/ w+ O/ U: y2 w4 X$ A' ^
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / f, d: Q9 d0 F" u) E. I
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Let me just rewrite yours:# ~7 [3 h- ^( {" j! I! m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 ]8 S: r C! r3 { O/ y
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 H1 T: W' A& C$ C& Z. ~2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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5 |; B- _9 z% R0 y+ a/ k9 vThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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+ d$ \! x- \/ l1 ?: \' i; DThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: B* I' a, Q6 y* X1 C1 x
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