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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! t+ U! ~4 ]) }. R2 |
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 A9 D1 J/ S2 |2 a# C' k# Q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : v1 ^2 q8 _3 r! L. v5 |
( I' p6 ] M6 m# ~. U& F0 F- mLet me just rewrite yours:6 U/ h2 ?7 I; ?1 N Q' S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 ?, q7 i. B2 v# o# o; K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; y" `) F5 G6 z; j
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& k6 _: j( V; g7 F0 q) r2 J1 @3 |* ^
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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