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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 ^- a8 N v% F, Z2 Z4 p6 E7 @4 Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % q% K k/ d5 R' L
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " j# q9 L4 ^7 C# i
) c$ C% i3 ]- @6 H% wLet me just rewrite yours:8 L+ o2 ?' D3 N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. [! |; a7 z7 S' |: \% L
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% w9 c5 _8 h; X' j2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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