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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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6 b: S7 R9 I% i# {it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, r+ b M7 A- ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( K) H" t- K/ y2 l5 W; w
5 U, F; R q, q& h2 s6 [7 J }/ d8 XLet me just rewrite yours:
8 Q; P9 ?, X. yIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; u) V0 M0 j& V1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. h3 A! C* o1 q a2 T+ x2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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k/ {; m# ?' j. F7 A! OThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' s' V! U) b( F
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