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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, g$ c3 J7 R: V. @ [2 O* |everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 j( @, V8 M1 a6 t j
/ w' e4 G- e. C8 @# E9 U" m$ jLet me just rewrite yours:( \8 o- P1 c" U( R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ p- x e7 }, s( S4 A
2 B# v& g$ [& ?$ J1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ B1 q# m: A! ^' t' q! Y( ^
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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