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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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& @, q w) P3 S" Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 ~. Q% U: ?7 Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 |1 Y* L6 V$ L, Q6 p% l
5 y+ g. H8 r% b) [Let me just rewrite yours:$ ~$ p: M' l8 T" G- X; J
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ q, [* m B+ A4 D6 Y1 h
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 m" g( d4 F. D% ^, m, j
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 `7 J1 w. r% |
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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