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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ l/ V& ~; l, ?4 K) J& l7 r: P
- Z: a# U+ M- J8 Nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" ^9 k! c- L& Y V+ v+ V E, eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 ~: `% G$ v+ U0 e; j5 x
C, ^4 `, Z0 ]/ ]! j: B% MLet me just rewrite yours:6 j& p, F5 |3 X2 c1 _7 U3 r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 ]& D+ v5 P. }0 \& i6 L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ N# V9 W3 |9 [2 ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% G: b/ z& u4 b0 ?
2 Q k/ o1 O* N, U Z' CThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., b. [* w& u; S9 q, S) G2 ^, }
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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