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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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& _" e$ z! W" B' v4 P" git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 \( y9 G; a- U: d) F/ s$ Jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 w% d" [8 g0 H! c7 M3 b. O
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Let me just rewrite yours:# |4 L; ?# [3 k- Z" E2 a0 @4 T
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 l7 ~3 `- Q$ o5 D, R2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 x- c/ ?2 s: z( M* Q) ~
7 W) C: v4 Y& a: e7 PThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! O/ U B! u, q
$ ?& a; \) ~1 \" fThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# D2 |' N2 k% q8 s5 r$ d7 ^6 X
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