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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 J9 Z4 ], u" `/ W8 E6 m: @
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 w$ \4 A- A7 x+ y" a& ^6 B# ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 |0 O! A8 I8 l6 ^/ O5 i
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Let me just rewrite yours:$ I5 q; l" F% T: t( b' Q5 u5 ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* o' ^4 g" Z; E4 A% z$ X Q
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
|' e7 {9 D I6 j6 s% A: D/ j2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( p: w4 \1 d6 A7 Q8 S0 Z6 ~% i D: M
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: O, v9 J2 E8 ^! P
, M( e/ G0 Q) r3 p- e: rThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ c) D; V4 p I+ \" c2 X
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