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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, B' s0 ~6 h3 P1 bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 P1 M$ t) C) J2 O
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + z G; n2 ^ F: O( ?% ~7 N2 P# s+ w$ O3 x- ]3 I: u, Z
Let me just rewrite yours:5 _$ F* u& `1 T" Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" i% l0 s% J+ G' h- d
, E$ v% A/ ?6 J. u& \2 J3 l1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; H; Z5 G/ V& O. r+ ^$ R
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 }$ i3 B& A- t$ o; ?# u3 ]" v
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ k: {) A, R5 I) i! NThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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