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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 ]5 x, y5 W0 z6 z. F: P$ R: `6 T1 Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) V9 I( G; P* F& ~# t% A
; d1 f" v9 B# b0 s( X. ?1 a: sLet me just rewrite yours:1 S& y: ~7 P K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- B2 q( x' r1 O2 i, g& U4 J5 z6 [2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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& q% {& m7 z" z/ V: \( q9 Z& X' U9 l6 ^Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 l/ Q, H3 Q# z$ x0 s) N1 o
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