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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 e" p& g1 m9 P, dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! H/ U" w; J/ R0 ?+ j- t0 k1 U$ ]/ d( k
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 X1 j8 L1 D! r4 f1 K% Y
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Let me just rewrite yours:5 Y. `9 ~: c; p+ M* N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 U& M% t2 G0 z* j9 s" r1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ l8 L) _# i/ @( G, C
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 r, J% `( p# R9 `: h& ]: @
1 e" i; F- j rThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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