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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 c7 u2 i$ N, r8 a2 i: l
( {1 H2 e5 o+ B0 V" f/ e2 Pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . I" ^' \ d" I9 v9 l ^5 Y l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 ^* J! a t4 s$ q4 W+ k% s
3 I g" X( T! m8 D& t% \Let me just rewrite yours:3 v0 Y, n( V9 O# Y1 I
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ _4 ~- }9 r4 P7 l# r4 s8 b
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) `5 [0 h+ @7 o; X. v( t2 e7 v
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' o: A c! y$ @
" b) H9 n* k1 c8 dThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% H) z r. X9 g! O# H% o( F( W
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