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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* m: X/ W* ^0 H& s6 y+ D+ K9 \1 r
) n; R; d! S5 e+ {* F/ Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 n0 A) k* o9 W! P
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 i5 X Z2 F% c! U
% M, ]- M, v- j9 f& i+ t+ rLet me just rewrite yours:# @: n, O. L! o# h( j! a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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- p' A. f3 W" S8 f; |: @1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! a$ W/ H9 w' Y" d2 m2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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/ P' z( G/ \. m" o9 c$ o. c. LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* P; n# b% f. L: N# b
& z( k2 T7 ]' V6 q" `Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. i! s; d" G s" K( t
% c5 H4 l5 N6 p' u) yGretz. |
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