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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, k; U3 P# y6 v, I
j$ e6 T$ ^9 e; `it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 t0 |9 Y) ^4 S, h" H& Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; b1 q3 N/ s8 q- h2 M& g
, w( B$ o# M! D* E* n9 |Let me just rewrite yours:! V# ~3 G+ \. i9 x2 N6 I) |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ Q7 @/ ~; [8 B- k
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 _* t+ i; F. u' L
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 q7 s5 x# E" I8 A; G
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