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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: u# W7 n& ~' p- ]
+ u( ?# V; p1 t; b5 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : O0 S ~4 `: n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " R' E$ O! n/ [6 F( [( U, U6 Z2 M V. i( T
Let me just rewrite yours:0 @- D4 O9 X" G1 L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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: F1 Z* X9 ^( Z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' M5 k0 c0 m9 S6 r1 C4 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) O* H8 C; G( }! j/ I( g2 eThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ f" m& s# L7 ]* U6 I4 O4 O
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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