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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + `0 R3 F8 a8 X0 v2 S
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , u+ H5 [' i' d5 X
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Let me just rewrite yours:
( q2 u6 A1 H8 h+ C rIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me ~5 u, m! h" @6 a) n! @ [, X6 C
. f) R- o+ q( z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: f7 k9 F% B+ J; w, e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 N- K7 Q7 _0 S
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. } p2 M3 q; y; ?
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 t- `3 v- M/ e2 j! N) {
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