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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 z* e3 {0 @+ N$ V
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ z' w, @1 J* P4 p. z# c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 G7 R! [4 k/ @' J$ f2 V* g; c% l4 Q
7 Y+ l# r6 V7 b9 V6 d0 r; L, }Let me just rewrite yours:: b4 ~+ N9 l' C- T
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% V8 i3 h' X9 [; T1 u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 u. [. T( A3 C" g1 l
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