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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& {" D/ d4 H* U# W6 r. J9 C
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! N3 O' p y( l8 o8 v0 m$ v9 g
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 O: W! o4 ?1 |+ E/ }: e8 U2 M g. W( r
Let me just rewrite yours:
2 R) \ z- R. [2 P eIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# t" \" Y3 @/ v5 C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 P3 O" Q8 s8 u9 |2 u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' ~, s' p' ?8 i+ u8 i2 A
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 y+ d( u; j/ g- V* ]: E
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. g8 m' u9 Q2 Z, X8 i8 X" X- |
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