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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 ~, w/ I' u5 y8 S; D. e
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 C& \' \$ [. g0 v! o2 O; [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 K5 u. _6 J' S9 f& G! l0 n; L
! ?9 C* @- V9 A4 \Let me just rewrite yours:
0 o J `! s; JIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; B) G4 [( G7 c" J! ^, O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' _* l' d6 d6 M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) L( k% E% w$ C1 M- ^3 _# M
, b) U& g# v" w3 _6 tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 y3 }* U. b' z/ s' _6 b6 u
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