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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 G% o, o, k6 r/ V% ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' ~2 H& x' ?% [
1 u7 e) j$ W/ ?3 G) z8 l0 @+ xLet me just rewrite yours:
6 I: T! {" i" L' Y& CIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. M( ?# @. B: D" t; \" g
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 P) o" h% Q3 j. @
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 B* M, y) Q. }( v! t
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 E) Q* m; ]4 s/ U
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