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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # o) M: L1 Z6 t' P0 A) d
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 V# C) y4 Q. H1 b6 X
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Let me just rewrite yours:2 h6 @% H( U: ]- ? P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ x. T0 s% k2 o1 i* Z) V
# P* w# o0 v- X1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# X0 V7 ]1 n6 M: P$ d: N* z5 n1 ?: N
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( s1 r, O" m5 b$ M
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( q, W9 v$ F z; C$ f
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