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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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: n3 G- L% Q4 ~, _' V6 a4 B6 Uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / S# b1 E/ b( z, a+ h2 R
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * @1 l& [" ], }: p2 \4 p8 P/ g! E
4 j: \! ]$ E$ v( r/ N7 D9 WLet me just rewrite yours:/ _( h& a& f8 b. \5 W" O& B
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 h2 L, z# \$ @" L: k. F2 C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 B, ~8 _; H6 q, i/ x- |" U
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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% Y( w9 c; w- K) \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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