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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, s. e! h* I5 c0 F8 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ v( Q( n( ~# ?everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - D2 t$ ?/ n0 p0 [8 q3 j
8 v* w: |- _7 V6 U" nLet me just rewrite yours:
, P5 Q3 w: z1 L; OIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* k1 p) L2 r$ C2 K w, q$ `1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' ~$ V, P( I( a* j0 r2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! j0 p( h8 e$ V
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% A4 U1 _. [, ?7 [+ w% L `: O+ |' |
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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