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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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|( W, p9 C5 {6 {( T2 t* tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ E* ?2 ]- N: Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # P. H7 z9 ^; V2 n
+ L1 K0 W5 v g3 LLet me just rewrite yours:
/ G7 j% x3 O; ~) bIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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/ A! {' V. m' s! z, H1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 w$ P: M4 h8 g# _8 E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* v, x r6 m8 z+ T' g% U
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; U$ |/ i; ^" V) d/ Z$ f
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