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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 j+ s# \& B0 l+ L7 Z2 l" }4 Y7 @5 M
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & }6 S) M" x0 C5 X1 ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 m/ e; ?' ~0 @2 g; T' S7 \7 M
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Let me just rewrite yours:9 ~5 P* a k7 I3 G0 ^2 K. M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 U8 V1 c& M) q, W
, g% m$ Y! N7 j! d- H! R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' n* H/ J/ H' y4 |, _" @6 C2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; R4 A- z. ?/ ~4 p, q
! d. v& J! o( k8 L7 HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow." C. |$ n! |; q7 X b
7 n: i* r# h. e& pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# Z, z5 h$ d6 }1 `8 O |
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