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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 J" m5 b1 _0 L4 S/ L2 [( u' F2 e0 ^it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " Z8 K, @0 |% I3 b& p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - k: Z# C. U' H/ e
, ^" v6 @3 U* J6 f# ?/ t7 R. L$ CLet me just rewrite yours:, ]- k: @# `! B) h: F8 \8 J- W8 a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# T& Q I! b3 N5 |. D. a9 P2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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6 Y2 a1 E( w6 W, MThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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