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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 g- V" B/ Y0 q4 D; k+ C
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : @! m3 E& s" j2 |% l5 {% K( d' z' i8 S6 t( ~
Let me just rewrite yours:
4 d& O- w* V) F& S# ]( d: zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* O8 r# ^4 v; }
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 B1 y0 w6 l! \/ r z$ g
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ p' G2 c* _* A, O
?8 G7 ?& q- J7 L2 TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ U% L' G+ a7 J8 T/ C4 Y
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