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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: ~& q( n$ r5 L: o
, I- ~, s' c8 b6 d) y4 g9 M8 Hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : Y. t+ L- I8 W! O8 F
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , f& a2 ^, {' y
+ [7 L4 M. J( l& Q( G" v* c' eLet me just rewrite yours:, }2 w7 {# q! g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 L6 z& F( w6 v, q
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# ~: A; x0 I6 t; `" x
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; q6 e$ K; G$ }8 C3 d
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( h' S9 V9 ^0 g, x
D& t/ C. ?/ r& X. [# zThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- j, r5 q! t4 U+ I
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