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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 G( z9 N5 n5 G8 K8 f5 i! x: J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 s( J; |3 `8 F, S
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Let me just rewrite yours:: {3 P: `: P& G% d/ b' H ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* ?! i$ d6 m( I
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 Z) c+ Q- s5 |
- _& F8 _% m9 xThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 H0 O, B2 }- N0 L; Y. t
5 j! E8 l$ P* K# ]" |- J. fThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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