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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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: y% L! e9 _7 W+ y5 G# W6 Q) y3 Sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& ] D3 H& i& x; Ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) ^* I- f: r5 A9 l( @
# e/ A) z* \. @8 s2 e- T$ _Let me just rewrite yours:9 k% D9 x2 r9 e7 s0 Y2 D
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( @+ H& r: Q$ k3 E1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; O: h& X5 f: t$ X3 C: y2 R$ u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% |8 X5 l) p0 \: r3 e
$ D% m' D w3 \( o, D+ HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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7 s; r1 g3 t# L3 Y4 c! iThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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