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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 [9 v+ c m) j, F0 Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 ^: R& _0 i) Q \4 B7 z* qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 j1 k" Z* T H$ t
- {9 u- _* D: n* @1 z+ j$ R& FLet me just rewrite yours:% a/ |# Q/ G$ O! Q; M5 M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# }& m6 T: \/ [0 G. _% Z, _1 D
' W6 H3 n3 A7 V- f5 Y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 t4 x4 S E4 V6 E2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! J8 @) {8 i* E9 E5 J' A5 |4 A
6 m p- n: v0 I2 e% ZThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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& {* B4 C+ A9 J) D' |3 }% oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) @5 j" X: y# _0 f$ k. M
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