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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 N, D3 M/ _' t) G, g& @' P
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 }/ d7 _8 i: \/ \& Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + D4 a1 j& M0 Z, L- l
' ?% j/ k$ N2 Q& e+ bLet me just rewrite yours:: l1 `6 }! y) H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 d5 I) C) a* d1 V6 C# S! a4 }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 W4 j" m$ X2 S" l' J" {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& M, T7 ^ C6 ]1 E2 d
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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