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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 d/ A7 K& `& ~* J" Q q# q! w. Q
, ` T% ~6 p# U: Oit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and W9 J* Q, N* g- ]" a- c+ [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * ]0 K1 K3 w; f
* |0 O/ y' G. R8 P8 XLet me just rewrite yours:8 u7 F# p0 Z! n( Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# r2 y% w( l/ o- S; X2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; W ]8 A2 M& {2 r& n, q# w3 d
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) L4 g. m! z% Z) w" S Z3 w
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