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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 O+ s# B7 G4 f$ c. _, E
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% f% q/ [- j2 q# Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - o' J4 p1 s& h' Z# P) z
, n+ v4 ~* s+ H' j8 j* NLet me just rewrite yours:, ?- I& J* h6 C/ N, J; [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# {% L2 f1 z: m; l; w
" ^' I0 ], T$ l. r8 {, |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! Q \& F4 _) k. z6 l/ B5 l
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: `: ]5 u6 d: u2 {
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& Y9 |5 ?8 k' b
) T) b- i8 f% f2 yThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 n+ J/ y g7 ?$ S6 f
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