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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: _9 m. i0 W5 e
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" w) b! z2 I* meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ k X% M+ d) |2 O, e* L
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Let me just rewrite yours:( V* }" \' O S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 O [8 K5 s# A% q; k' Q8 s3 n: y
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* G3 p+ v5 V: G% s1 K9 z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! H; H4 d5 @* h! L% c9 m
% f/ X" N6 x' S* s8 u, X% RThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 o5 t. O& I( w1 [3 B1 J
! o9 y# e& y- i' l+ h( [' _Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% }/ I( L1 z' D( G
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