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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 |2 P: }, T9 c- o- H5 a5 T
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everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 t. @$ Z* n% i. x- {7 |
0 o; t7 p. O9 V; N; j0 H7 F, Z- t5 _Let me just rewrite yours:
, q; f7 ?$ q( P# m# bIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# F7 ]* l5 C# a% R) l
! N. p$ R9 v% I: f( Z9 A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ n$ b& p3 ^3 U2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ u+ ~1 U* {; F; G) T7 g
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ C7 F: }. P0 O
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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