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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" M" e* J# _7 z0 c, k
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 w$ r0 y1 A' I" U: i2 @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / B- ~$ f( B2 s% z; {9 `
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Let me just rewrite yours:+ W2 w3 D- P4 I7 H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; ?. i4 M- A+ ?' A; V8 \9 o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: B! Y# H0 |( k# C5 _ x3 `1 s+ q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- q7 @- E& a/ z- {3 F
, ?7 e% z$ q8 y5 R9 N5 k" S2 kThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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