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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ u2 p+ W. e. ?; z* `9 T: O' b3 y
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- e8 n# C5 O. \, O* O4 c% w, Ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / d) X" z* S3 x7 C7 |( x7 D, d# N+ T9 y$ T
Let me just rewrite yours:
! u/ O0 g. B! @. `( L! eIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# N! q B1 X! G9 f d1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
]: C* G+ q, T2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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! t8 B$ g, ~6 m, w& m, jThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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