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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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[3 g* i+ j# |) k x' q+ q; xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 o6 d* ^6 _# {$ G- K& qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # K3 j/ F% I* ]3 H
1 m. ]- A+ Y5 I: L; gLet me just rewrite yours:6 u/ x1 ^# ]8 t! w+ K4 H- M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: O/ B; |7 f4 s% F, D% _
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 ?7 j; `* A5 P, h8 N; J$ Z1 O. k& f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 q& y, ]1 z& a0 [$ Y* CThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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