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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. r3 u0 M; R" F
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 E2 J9 ~5 ~8 N( \9 Peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 d# F/ i* e# m4 T
1 L& m$ f4 }7 `& SLet me just rewrite yours:" Z& |5 S4 m2 g: X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ m* o* l: p! \5 C; k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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% E) l1 |- a$ \There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* y4 C! b0 ^) o: G. }0 ?
/ ~# A7 a- U" E9 d6 M1 d5 q. \9 wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# V; o" | |" A U6 I- Q/ x Y
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