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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * K) t( Y" F* `7 ?$ r& @' ^' ^! G- `3 F6 p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! z1 ]% x3 g/ Y7 w# Z% t
5 k- _7 s1 H, ]0 y- ^) U1 rLet me just rewrite yours:
# e( H& ~, q& j3 XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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& z1 j- u' X4 P& _$ }3 c1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 @& ~- B8 |. X" p5 l8 K! y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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5 Z3 o: _* u& w$ JThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 ^+ X8 r1 \( }3 l$ Z, r3 Q% {
8 X: P& m5 I k( \0 \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; O5 D, A% F, m1 ~, A1 E; }1 |3 r
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