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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ t" S1 V @6 @$ M7 A- f) Z5 Y
5 M3 N( ]1 f4 M pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 F/ Q8 @9 v$ v9 ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' n, p/ b3 b. e
, v. P) v7 E. a" b1 uLet me just rewrite yours:& h' s' W, o! z* V) z( C
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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/ S4 J5 m1 N3 `8 v9 }) n. B& a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- C* V d7 N5 j. ]' B+ {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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2 A5 v! _3 t! @' wThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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