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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 ^1 G! X0 g# y' o6 F
- U3 N: i% @: | D# ]# Jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' @( F, G& z( F8 Y7 m0 Q% B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( J( T6 q+ q1 C/ C6 u
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Let me just rewrite yours:: i7 U: O2 e( E- z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 d$ `" {2 W+ H2 {7 \1 i$ t; {+ z! J
8 x8 N" K$ d, G2 z: g5 z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. N$ R! M7 S. U1 R N$ }/ u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." L# i y- Q; E4 K" J/ Y+ A) M
* Z; P A! S9 }5 ~There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 T; t% z% m0 Z4 t; b% c
, e0 L) m( L4 ^. l4 rThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 F) W/ I, q( j7 e: R
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