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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . ^. u. h8 z9 f& U
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 F5 D# g+ r8 {: B/ j K! S6 E* F# \; j0 w d, B+ Y. c
Let me just rewrite yours:7 e+ r4 _9 S% h. x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ g) U9 N J/ a* C, e* ~: }
/ Z' V3 Y, v& K% t h) a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 a: `+ U9 S, p2 U0 A: y' }2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 J" S- r. f5 f$ D0 G: R4 ?9 EThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 Y/ L( d* H" r
) ^) T; P$ A$ l8 KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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