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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) \$ v2 y% k1 F- f
5 v/ @! q" L8 j; t) k$ n) K3 e5 ^it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( _. ^; Q9 p" `1 D7 m- k- c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . M, }7 s; ^ a. V
- g2 T& j: [4 ?+ P9 H2 h3 H% eLet me just rewrite yours:
% ^. j. Q) T$ T& l, S1 EIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( j7 b, [1 L& a2 Z6 g4 @# }, F+ T
) l9 ^" D* B z& ]; G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! K( G! P0 N4 Y) c
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 s* e6 u% C" b. T" u/ QThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% v+ r/ w+ [/ r+ ^: p& V
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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