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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# L q% \4 e& jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; s) n l7 Q2 i! ]( V- {
5 \1 \+ B! Q* Y$ H, a0 @Let me just rewrite yours:( [2 x; u: [# S g( S7 m# P5 B/ N* [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# k" j" A E" O4 {% b2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& p7 D t8 |8 K1 k2 |; @
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 f7 P) G' T/ w8 F! k, H. R
6 v5 E$ O; I8 Z cThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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