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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 U8 @% V' [" t4 e" w& A1 n
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 L$ O% E1 @5 Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 l2 z* P v- d5 c% s
- E3 N: i+ [! A' BLet me just rewrite yours:
' n# B9 E' ~6 B! d# k* O4 CIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# X! B1 Q* e2 ^/ I1 @2 t/ L' O
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. e' W/ G* B \1 U/ y+ k3 q/ X" U2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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" @. b: j0 v6 wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# J+ T$ ?: p, I G m
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