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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 ?. U( g- @8 d! A& ]* n$ Z4 hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; F u9 L. f: F; W
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 j4 {" w7 P5 n( T+ m7 Q4 c, a
2 I1 i2 W5 k0 f3 bLet me just rewrite yours:
( J" j1 D& {; }2 C5 k6 I) _It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! }9 X0 ], q. E; O. H
; w% ?$ Z7 q5 l& k$ n! k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 U) `: o2 f3 y/ J
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ q! |2 A4 i3 b. _& s1 V
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ Z. i) d9 n) I- r7 p- t: i6 W3 d
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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