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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& a; C! ^* ^: P, ]. V7 i1 U1 K
3 _2 Z: a% V' l- I l" nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 c b c. V2 h3 S3 t. _everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. z9 K2 a9 U; Y$ Y8 t$ J! ]# G) E5 g! Y5 X- c1 `
Let me just rewrite yours:
8 t6 i8 m# T* ]' }It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ y: T( H: M. X* q
/ S( j i6 S4 ~' _( s+ s6 z$ k. J1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- a6 I! \1 W/ M* C# I+ K$ l
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 w3 H1 X. u1 J$ B+ Q6 j4 D
9 p. \1 M0 C" q/ y* R M* jThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. Z) h4 ~" i9 a" Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: J! S$ f* N& i
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