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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and T: y# x8 s7 z- A/ d. _% n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 e! K3 o( B9 X6 J. ] e" d# a) V3 F( @9 a4 T
Let me just rewrite yours:0 ~$ X6 \9 a8 ?( m9 N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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8 t0 a$ G* J3 Y+ H1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ o- y b" H- x/ e+ {2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 x0 u. E+ [" K* M: v% b6 M
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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