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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: J, ?) ^$ [/ l" J' F- D
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" G7 @5 L5 b* p/ _: I% s$ `# yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " B, W" r" p* G/ ~: s: ^% `
9 t7 I' ^9 F7 s. w& c- e: i$ eLet me just rewrite yours:
. i, f5 g N2 ]% D4 i) L9 {0 nIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 v+ D2 u+ ]" h; |1 E
- x/ d$ m9 V& F# |" p( f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# u' D- m8 X1 p- D% C( ?1 A2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; _) G* f# N, a/ b( T2 i8 }, yThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ n% H1 K8 j; I# r# Y$ J f: T e3 \! h
2 p: o/ s$ p2 z6 f# x' A; F3 }Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., \, R% a$ K& C' O4 F
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