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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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# W q, h0 N+ ~0 X7 {- q, Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% f8 \3 C3 x! G* [* x$ i. A. Heveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # M, o* z% M6 U6 ~ U1 H& f5 t2 o" f# B) K4 k0 h- J$ ?
Let me just rewrite yours:
9 A6 m& ]! l- w* F6 J8 e! f" [It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 z8 v* d& d: x! ~3 u1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 O8 w q2 F: P: V2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' ]- @6 ^4 S( G% E6 f
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ j7 H( O j# b7 S/ x5 L" K
9 b! q4 k2 C! o, @( c, AThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 v$ Q, h3 {, ^
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