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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: U/ ~( b! E Q% H: M9 \everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / u" v& x6 [) @2 J' v; o% Z9 Z
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Let me just rewrite yours:5 g6 i" X4 E+ K+ W
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 e( ~* Q, g. z! |
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 V L) E" s8 u! L y" i2 T, [8 W2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 @3 s% C/ V `. C Q
4 U% `" i# \# ~, rThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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