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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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; h% b y/ b ^$ T" E1 l3 n/ Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! S+ \5 A4 C' I
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & {1 S/ z8 \# J& O; Q
+ D( M1 _# M& yLet me just rewrite yours:! n3 a' t V" Y. Z0 \" ?
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* |6 O. W* L9 A/ P4 |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# ~7 s% z- z0 N
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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7 E. T% o+ ]1 {; k9 TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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