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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 n$ Q- E& A$ zeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) p; c; N6 U) S' Z* g* H
7 a5 D: z$ Z+ t! m2 h3 T4 K' y! ~/ WLet me just rewrite yours:
- g/ M" L. ^% N1 S% P5 c! EIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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. W: C, n5 @ M; }% N3 R+ ^: w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 M2 z2 [0 ?% J3 t. T6 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. }+ W0 z$ V9 y, n; _0 q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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