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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 O* y1 R# P' c& U5 _7 S
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + F4 t% x' s- Z6 Z7 s; v
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & b/ g5 X1 A' } B( ], [3 ?
. ~0 r b1 h+ f9 }Let me just rewrite yours:: R8 ~9 S! J" [5 {% ?8 o) x( }
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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& I5 x+ O$ @# ~3 W1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 B9 J" X9 |' K. p# H7 q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; V Y' j" n: Z, ^8 gThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 f% ~ d' w2 `" e# W# @4 Q0 @
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