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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; _$ N6 B) k& ]. S2 x; H
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 B3 z) h5 R3 @& K" }6 \everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , E- o7 s) C& t/ w6 k2 j8 ?
2 M' b0 P' i/ d) fLet me just rewrite yours:# U- N& C/ z1 C! `7 n( r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 J+ B4 J) p- N; W( M5 ?) q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& y- ` \0 I9 k. R+ M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! f, v; H' e& |: a) t( i
0 K. \ }5 ?1 LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( U: o: ^8 y- d% i
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 p; Q1 t- I) M0 o+ N3 }4 d
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