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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; t) B; S2 a" q, D+ K; b3 z+ |* |- e
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % ]# t' l8 M; e
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & I& s2 W1 Y- d! q+ n9 X
) ^0 g0 e. k9 E/ I/ nLet me just rewrite yours:9 r& @& x5 I3 ^: s R' e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 ^* m+ _' P. s1 y$ g; O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 d! m0 m( h F9 W2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ c0 n! d/ T) g! A5 X
( T% v' O. Z! U- S* b; ~2 hThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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' N( T8 Z$ s* x1 y1 a4 |0 BThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' P( ? g& O% I# ^" m6 `* s
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