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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: T) k6 @0 F8 d7 ]" |7 M
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 Y+ @4 |6 r. M4 n/ j
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - T( O- f4 W! d( [( P0 k: ?
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Let me just rewrite yours:
3 ] f: A# d3 N3 E; V0 D4 KIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 C6 K0 T& {/ d4 S
) u6 o. K" I1 S9 f8 Q! y& i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! p4 r! W$ v/ S$ Q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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" x6 L% ]" G7 B+ O+ C/ b; d$ WThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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