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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ Q8 d! T' u! M0 }
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 ]1 N) F" e! I* @" z" E. Heveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( F6 t' Q2 w) s: {4 k* p) l `. j
( g3 K2 o, F3 k# S& Y+ `( Y7 zLet me just rewrite yours: [, G% z' y0 [ D( ?5 B. V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 l( b: M$ h) R9 B& w O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ q, h0 [* H y5 e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( f; p: L, L% ?) ~5 T1 R
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! X& u' R: F/ t
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