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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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1 {7 {# z' }6 l* P9 O* K; y/ q' wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ i- q/ l# D! keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 K. Y: X7 D7 x
6 g2 S' }- C; T: E5 ^: x. p9 M. TLet me just rewrite yours:: C, E" Z% W$ t% m8 }, Q4 {& p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. X* g" `8 s) m) T9 g* a2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 g( c! U1 H2 u( ~% T6 @
& h W$ S1 T9 NThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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