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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( G9 K5 |! D" }: P0 i& z
8 @! b4 b3 R9 W1 iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( r2 G2 w; v1 m: {! r( {everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; H, H9 p+ L2 c* h5 ~ J
1 s, J& B) V- e% y4 YLet me just rewrite yours:: P; P5 t L" y% s0 ?, J
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% R, x7 O4 G/ w' E& U& g
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. s) n1 n+ q" W7 j% b, C+ o2 a2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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" y. \) F1 V0 O9 s3 y: z5 jThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. n e( u3 K8 u) Z2 e4 OThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 y. w3 O' n* W& b9 w8 p! _
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