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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ x3 ^' \/ g# n6 J) h
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & D& v& b8 u. }5 X2 H$ Y8 a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + q6 ?( J5 n& U3 z! ?0 d" N2 B9 I
Let me just rewrite yours:+ a5 `+ [2 e4 O% D8 n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 \3 R* c/ Y- ?: |. @
6 ]; T/ M7 m# m% Z6 e+ y! ?( E1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ l+ c( c8 x; u8 h) ^
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., d" N% Q3 d9 }" b( v( ~
; f1 b0 F9 E3 {) ~( p$ C* IThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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2 d; J+ {' h' v" gThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' [) o! f% i& e; C5 K1 r6 j! W
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