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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
' C8 }7 Z9 @2 l5 peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % x+ W, \2 z. h% Z
0 U- w' v- `6 ^* G" L4 fLet me just rewrite yours:# l4 i2 Q2 |+ l8 u! S) [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# _, Z( A$ Q- H1 \1 }- d
' }) l9 J* ]( C* U2 g1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& B& h3 S7 M. N; h0 }
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& A2 V- W5 r: I
- q$ o3 q. t7 c; h0 cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- n5 O! k5 F, M* Y: `/ {3 u
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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