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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- |; \& }5 c( Q& H8 @' `
- I( R8 e3 Q2 e' xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " E% X* t; e3 z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 D, v3 x1 ?/ j3 B+ n0 ?
- O. o4 b3 p# z1 l5 ]3 YLet me just rewrite yours:' H/ R; t3 q' ^& R3 f
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 i$ [" @# ]) D6 G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# L- E& g) B% P7 a& p5 L9 \% ~2 uThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, Z' Z7 E' G! U0 j$ x4 HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 i6 Y* v" ^' O5 w# E
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