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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 N! J: W! o/ G1 ^
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ P, Y+ Z2 n' u- ?( j
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) L) k- B4 G c, F. {/ v h. ^# n' `: I) g7 O- \ l6 T
Let me just rewrite yours:0 ~. B0 x' ^* d4 f2 w/ W
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; M0 C+ N0 N' r G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
z0 T- O/ Q1 P2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, ?$ E2 U# y. KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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