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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ A% r1 D4 _6 \1 ^everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 ^2 A& E1 b l; i) A8 g
9 Z" ~ i! b& R6 R0 lLet me just rewrite yours:7 B) R" L( L. @" S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' p# t R6 i/ [8 ~2 s) ?
. {4 }" {: p2 P; Q6 U7 x1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 M& j. D+ A6 b6 b; e% L/ l* L2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 I5 {3 H+ k* L# N0 U. l
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ J8 A, I B% S$ H' i: a gThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ n9 b: K3 i, d4 w, i1 o
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