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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; I! ^+ h6 u( b& S0 Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 |; X1 a8 F4 d$ F5 Y* X# V5 E& F; U+ R8 U- S
Let me just rewrite yours: J1 w' E+ P& k- Y" _
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 Q5 R- o1 d) U1 u: Y& u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' E9 c! A3 ?, N6 e7 K; r
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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