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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 X+ p$ ^! C/ O) s* I
. I N) T, a0 W" ^it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, s4 {9 x" c9 U& G, t7 ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 R7 G% N: k( ^3 o! X
, q- I6 l0 @2 p$ n) kLet me just rewrite yours:
$ R: I$ P& P2 J9 @! zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 L9 A/ S/ k) }6 f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ ^& s: J" h# h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; P" v p# a7 a3 Z; W
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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6 ^1 n) |# _7 z O: R7 \5 dThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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