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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * ]+ A- C3 X0 L9 z" a& Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % A# @1 T6 [) U: A
/ Y$ }" ]2 B }$ z$ LLet me just rewrite yours:0 r4 C6 M2 }- r) U' N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# F) Q6 L: z6 [, D: `0 X) Q' G2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 W, h1 T: j( `+ _ U: N8 g
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." X7 V& C- H% ^( s0 X' w0 \
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