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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 `7 N& o$ Y& c4 m. L' qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 Q0 Q8 E. g9 h
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Let me just rewrite yours:& n/ _& Y, h) l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) a" f( K/ V& n+ |0 I6 p" K
6 ^ @# S6 x8 A& O0 c" O2 u8 ^1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! I- K9 A4 L) X) o% M1 Q6 U: ^$ Z% {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( _$ S1 k& G% s4 R0 e
( S- g- O( p7 @3 tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 f( w6 H% e5 R$ Z
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Gretz. |
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