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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* v' B2 V9 g/ \. ~it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) p, q* _8 |$ a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 L) ]# r6 N) e+ y, X% h' G% C$ o2 k8 m0 ?0 v' m
Let me just rewrite yours:# A: Q6 E1 q# ^3 a E$ z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& }0 i/ T) A- B$ l# |
2 W1 \0 W( w$ E0 t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" A$ B9 e5 _& G" t) d- P3 V3 q5 _2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 ]3 L+ _ q" R
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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* H, B4 z* |! C, Q+ Q; QThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# r9 z4 R7 I0 ^* u- @0 w( f: y, ^
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