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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 Q5 I: _3 s4 v% F; V+ u) P, B i
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; M w( A( L% q4 R; n7 _
7 T. L- Z! L; `) G$ X0 XLet me just rewrite yours:6 q5 r' y3 g2 m' Z: h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 E& Z8 C; f2 I: o
( h$ G+ }0 m9 t$ w+ j1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ I( U* Q8 `- M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) I* i+ g) D9 L3 cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ X9 O3 [% k% _1 V6 F' M3 z& ^
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 s, N; |+ [* c% Q% F
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Gretz. |
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