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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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4 M0 ]0 F3 \6 e: [it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 A) X# A# Q; X( q+ i
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) p7 c# z+ X# D, E
* {! o' O! g7 }8 @; \; aLet me just rewrite yours:# G0 m( ?% V" V" Y+ d+ k! H% }. d. K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; P* O9 S# R* h* a: k* U$ h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 d2 z. o. o( h3 v8 A/ V$ B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 O8 \' {$ A$ t: r) y G
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