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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! Y+ q# A8 R1 {* [+ v8 {9 ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 g- F0 {$ u8 I# Q5 Z- L1 W
& e! d* S7 v$ |" `- C1 R6 mLet me just rewrite yours: i, j5 [7 `8 a, _- s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% {! L/ c3 E+ ?' C
' p6 P+ h# r; l+ ^# [$ V1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 ]- f( v6 A# Y0 l9 d1 V2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; u! ]) x c8 [+ F3 a* v5 X' N6 yThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ R. i% s7 p; S' ^ z2 ]
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