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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 k, `+ i+ G6 `6 v8 e/ @7 W0 Y: t
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * N e' n+ h, ? Q: l+ e+ ^
: M* P( `$ A& X; ?- T* q6 ]Let me just rewrite yours:
- R6 }/ ]' P5 IIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. N0 h; J! J$ G3 z; o
& [1 l2 v& q3 K! T1 {1 R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! ]8 z7 Y% w" z) H& w4 u) k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 I: x, v$ L7 h- ?$ T! q* x3 k& j
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 ^* P P5 o7 V% k) ^- E
- i& n* U! ~3 X, P6 I" GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 _& K2 i3 j2 T
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