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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + w5 S9 a: E, j6 P: H( Z4 d! P1 S
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 N: {1 z$ s8 }: f3 h+ d0 _
( W7 E- C3 a5 T; t5 B* {! ~7 ?Let me just rewrite yours:
7 j: N5 e3 y6 ^" g2 V, }It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 C# X6 M% {7 m1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; o3 \2 f, L/ m# v$ J4 g2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 A! G! A5 T& g$ }' ^
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 s, v, }; q5 Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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