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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 W& x; @4 u8 L! T b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 N U7 O/ o/ E. `/ m7 j9 a+ z) t t$ q N$ B
Let me just rewrite yours:5 Y6 E$ f/ N, N l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" o$ U3 {5 H5 @3 _) F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." o) }& y9 }5 T$ w# r" s
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 R- U/ e8 j/ q7 W; d$ q; H x
5 Q2 b* g9 n, ^3 V5 W& ~+ WThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ V0 S0 a# O. T% e) Y3 P& Z3 n
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