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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* ~& Q* P0 j$ b' `( ]6 N+ T
' V9 W* W$ H* S% ^; n) s2 wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - r( q; q; x+ @4 ]* [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % Y- J3 I4 U) \9 `7 {) t2 P6 ^
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Let me just rewrite yours:9 U+ p) h+ Y# ]) {* x: ^: {4 R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: @% I2 ]- V# t- I/ v# i& e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. ~. V0 W5 j! [ ~( m
9 b8 X' x( R- V/ n# F& HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) u) R7 _- W F
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 i! p* r. W8 @5 j* l0 ~
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