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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( i( A! Y C0 G) N+ G
2 q8 l& m# C' v% W) Q+ M$ iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; d& \+ H r' H* k
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % C8 a B6 B) D8 c* I, Z. Q$ M' O1 [
Let me just rewrite yours:1 K/ {( w+ D( h1 C# n2 E1 b, \4 K
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% O( W% Z. i8 g- {
7 S* _4 G: C6 g$ p+ Y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 [- V9 _6 r- U/ E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ e- X* U1 }, O" {+ W
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: b8 `! e6 G, @$ p
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 M; G' i* _2 `
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