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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# a K C# [. W6 Y) v
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! N0 @3 P* J8 q& D! ^1 |" ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . J. v& N/ A. ?, h1 U0 @2 g2 {$ {
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Let me just rewrite yours: w7 W. s& k9 W0 d. q( Q6 P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 J3 ~7 r2 a% y7 y( D* A9 {, q
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 ~ ]( P' `# }" I5 O# r5 x5 s0 H2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! ]( T. Z. u2 t& J( ] p7 Q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 d$ i M% K5 Q. e9 M
/ n* a$ j; [. _: j9 xThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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