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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 L4 O% u; M/ t4 @5 P7 {! R
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ W. P1 x) B( b' N/ @' C3 \# ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % B% y1 O8 w0 ~: t
& F. U, I! s0 M2 F/ gLet me just rewrite yours:3 E' p8 E0 X q+ Z2 }
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 Z8 c; r }2 M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 h0 n4 y9 E6 s% a% }
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 u8 K# k6 R8 i
' t; S& P' l1 Q6 V& h, w- VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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