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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: {" K/ D5 K3 e: T* M8 t, A
& {; ~2 k, A y5 f& Y1 P- dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ N) y; j( W& t4 P+ t1 S o, Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - C g1 h0 ?8 t& T- }
3 R m" _' J" J tLet me just rewrite yours:0 e$ ?) v# z% U8 C+ Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 o% ]3 I* }9 A" E) d% H
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 A8 r& h& }7 L
. X7 X, M: @7 U" { k8 XThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' m" K$ Q: o& E) _, l
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