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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & Y% Q& i5 O& R7 P: Y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % u: L' ]2 U3 e9 T4 ~: ?: ~, E: q
0 v1 S# Y/ z% M2 P0 O2 [Let me just rewrite yours:2 Q2 a# V Z9 E6 F" y' P! I; f
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) q+ [ n- R6 Q2 }/ m6 I
- A- C2 D+ J) b1 T+ G" P1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 ]4 f2 c7 \$ V4 i5 K2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 G& u7 o, V/ u
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 K- S4 ?# f/ r# b/ x3 G% k
! f0 s3 c. d- ]7 M/ L' TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ ^% S3 T; g& H w8 u/ B; m
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