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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ e- f* Y& i u( N5 M
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : x, @# |* g; Y; y* S0 h C
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . u- l% ~9 ~" n6 D$ `; X/ H! R
: B* D' f) }$ x5 s" E5 mLet me just rewrite yours:" D7 Q5 i. \) j( X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& }, `0 _& _; v. b6 }
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ n+ i1 g: v' p. P) j# E2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( Q+ I2 b( T% P* Q$ W6 M8 eThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." F/ h9 V1 s9 k( u
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