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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 r" Y; p, u% B; Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . P3 y( h2 V* P G0 c
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Let me just rewrite yours:$ v9 ~0 a# ~. O, ~) g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; x9 u- [. R: d3 Z) G/ `- z# R
" l& B% M. E( R' w! r6 m# r( g1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! b4 E5 w+ u% I y( t
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# F9 a7 l( }9 Q
" O9 J- o$ o: O/ i. c- NThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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