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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ f6 y+ C) Y0 x Y/ c
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
U. H; h* V+ a! ^& u( _everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , _+ T5 y9 S; f0 }, C
+ X: a( f! H6 H( x: V% CLet me just rewrite yours:7 A. k X2 _0 K, ~9 z5 L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 ^+ H: k B+ m' J8 @$ @, {
; C1 k8 t: k2 D. O# e A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" w, r' W4 m6 P! U6 F; R+ o2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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/ G! [. k" t: V6 u: z YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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