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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- A- M; w+ G. v8 Q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# I. n7 o; R! }3 s0 s k8 q6 Jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 X' r% T# |7 ]7 P, g6 a
3 ~! ^4 X D$ N% xLet me just rewrite yours:+ p* Q# e& d' f- M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; \* x, b G6 l4 F' o
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., A1 {% p& s9 A9 [' `) r& p
" `+ N& l' o& |8 W, f3 mThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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