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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! `7 {8 ?) K7 Y) a, ]$ [% M3 U" `
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " B( d! r" I) A
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 _ k. Q0 f' u: J6 N2 l- T8 C' \
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Let me just rewrite yours:' s( c1 N% o# Q; J; B' W
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ R* `( r6 M2 S# l
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 \9 a4 n5 F: c& g2 o' r
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. h& F/ ^+ G! H2 v+ d( v, {
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: |; ~" K' X! B3 O* }
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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