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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 H; {5 ~$ q5 C7 T0 Y; Q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- W$ Y+ }# q6 c9 f/ Y) U' }everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( J+ s2 F: ~0 F. k% C# {3 d7 j+ Q
0 R, o% E1 s% X5 nLet me just rewrite yours:
3 p7 H( K4 m5 Z' ]1 MIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 {( Y$ p0 Z7 n; \- K5 g2 i* G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 @+ [( A& r" N! t" w2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., k: {% ~5 ?5 n* K$ E
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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