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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 G% T% Q9 Z0 f3 H; ~) X# \6 Ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& }, ? B1 y# E& t, Ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; X+ J8 C- Q: |. c0 R
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Let me just rewrite yours:' ~; ]/ Z! U1 }% N: h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 E$ R% `' U; `# v% x' v9 Y$ c# A% n5 _1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* b( Z$ R" G5 v2 H2 E8 U+ T
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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* i. S$ s9 `. `2 BThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ |- k+ t( ?+ Z5 Y( M" H9 E
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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