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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! R& I! h9 y8 G P
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
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Let me just rewrite yours:( ~& W! i I. R8 c6 w8 A/ U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ {- y2 \1 F p7 y6 A3 w
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. Z) \5 Z7 ?- j
( B5 V' P# Z( C5 l" w0 h8 g/ C1 ~There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% F( N' a F7 s% W3 c# @) p- d+ B U
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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