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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# t' m( z) @8 ]$ y4 W, x9 s0 ?- x! ]' e) v
0 T t6 y2 R- ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # C7 V# Q0 f- n2 c( R+ p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 S" L! Y$ X" C4 I, y0 d/ V; z3 V A9 M+ y" r3 g, g! W3 n; ]
Let me just rewrite yours:
, y: R& F% X vIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 G6 _6 W+ L+ }2 f% s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( h0 T9 j4 H! h% W4 ^) y: |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 F `/ J: A6 K- S
) R3 V" G9 s, V# ZThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: d" ]3 W: U% K% n8 T- Y$ T' \6 ]
- A2 N- u) h5 @ TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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