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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 \+ X' H% k& R4 L$ m. `* U, B
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 n% z& U& O0 @3 k8 D
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ w5 v; t8 i* w z# F
7 a) t- I1 W* |" i0 oLet me just rewrite yours:' }- O: i& h& i; X4 M% H z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# q* i; ?$ ]+ E9 x' I
4 H f; V& k/ m' i9 t- S5 {1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 E. C, J! w7 o4 M2 G# ^
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ x8 R. A3 @: T0 R) _
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 b3 i! E0 k7 f' C8 h/ ^
. v7 i' p% s3 G' v: l, e& vThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. _$ h; r5 m" I" V3 x( I* j' W
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