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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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6 l* y/ j7 G( Y' V! z9 P! z: T3 uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 J2 R7 t, `& B8 E
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 n* f( h! w5 \$ M3 C R
# @6 H$ d( }1 o8 T& c, RLet me just rewrite yours:( }0 J ?0 q5 D
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 I) L1 s" K" N5 O6 i2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, f- f) H! K; `$ d7 LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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