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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 k1 V8 J% f- q: Y
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , `/ Q$ S% Z. c1 ? L6 M
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 Z! f1 ^! v, n- z7 |6 q- `6 z, S
0 @4 n* q; b( L% C5 q" DLet me just rewrite yours:
4 E3 U5 s1 g5 z, j$ sIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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. I+ N0 N1 S5 L8 B* K5 H8 T5 M& z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# D b* K7 I2 D8 u! o3 b1 o/ Z- J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( r6 b$ w+ i0 s8 i
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! ^. W. u- B- W2 M R
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