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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, v/ U7 ?) \' p! K$ a) w2 I# }
8 }, u1 T, \& w$ o/ w+ L% qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
o& |0 M9 |) u' yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 H% T, j6 k* W3 _
6 C' x: h3 E% `9 Y5 d" N8 i xLet me just rewrite yours:" m+ o6 Z! y9 R! y% t& \3 @. Y2 C
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 C, _: R/ j+ p( P/ K, U) q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# v1 Z. r+ H$ l5 OThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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