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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ L- L' | C1 K# D, D M+ [ g* Deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + t% a" c/ R- l Y) b' h8 h
) Q9 S6 G5 X) d. r+ U6 ~Let me just rewrite yours:- u1 A( ^) [/ s! v* R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 g; L0 b' X) `3 L' w0 T$ T. p1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# i( w% B. _5 @" e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) r6 u- Z8 C5 \4 K
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