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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* ~( i3 j# |0 Z6 v$ S% Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! O7 |5 Y/ p4 c( ?/ M: Y# x
1 i2 x" d r; v7 X# ~, E$ n; e# @4 uLet me just rewrite yours:
6 H3 h# i3 }9 g$ Z" ^5 oIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 b' `$ S- _( Q& o
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, {. }" n+ Y+ E- b: X
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 | p) E! Z* T, A/ j
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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