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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 i+ L X% r/ I; y1 O* Z7 ?7 iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& R, j: Q: O4 r, G; _everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; w( ^( o* y9 A% B7 O! [2 t M- |- f. j/ _$ {
Let me just rewrite yours:' b- T) ~( K# d1 F8 v D
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 Y0 g2 t) v0 a* m1 O! p
. R8 c8 J6 S5 J! L5 o, c8 {5 M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 ?& \! q" F1 S- ~2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, t$ P- J) j4 [# h% y6 H |: @3 lThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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