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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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; M9 a( ]$ B$ a; ?! z' Kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 n8 T' n( B1 D& g: y; Neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 N8 L" O& K$ l5 `5 v/ A8 ?
% n, j) `* R, v9 t' I' f" F4 |Let me just rewrite yours:6 j% W7 e$ k+ ?% n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ n$ I2 m* g3 w# ^; U2 r
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ o2 \4 U ^8 Q6 q5 A( e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 z6 Z2 D5 B. T/ L
9 P* v3 a% [, z( UThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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6 K3 J" H& }% U2 e9 l7 IThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. s! U; h. e1 J' B3 K4 U0 x
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