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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 n( Y, `) ^4 G, t% a( T; kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) [8 ]* M. l9 K
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 f! m7 p* P+ G# T: P1 L4 h
. {: p) R, v$ C- b7 U8 yLet me just rewrite yours:' P$ ?6 K" S0 u2 m4 }+ i9 M3 c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 o z7 o, {( e& {% V& p5 }, m1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& H6 N$ S% v& M3 P! ^: X2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; I1 K: \) |% i! y. ?! v1 i( nThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 u* Y# {; M( [* G4 m4 q9 l
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