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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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6 c0 {6 d3 |. {1 i, s1 E6 zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 W! T' U4 S* Q; Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 O% z/ x! J( z1 f. w; [
9 _4 f* {6 @1 ~/ u+ r$ o; ~- [( [# YLet me just rewrite yours:; k& A1 s2 A6 b0 t9 d0 H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ b; c f, c0 Z* d* a# q# ] y6 S# }
: N c1 {5 Z9 v% X' J1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' {# N, Y; I# [" o( k. ~, s4 V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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0 B/ x: w, C* XThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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