- 帖子
- 1691
- 精華
- 1
- 威望
- 245
- 魅力
- 0
- 讚好
- 0
- 性別
- 男
|
81#
發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
| 只看該作者
Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
/ w8 ^. Z3 c% W% d. {1 @0 _0 Y) `- ^# [
it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; G G! _/ u* e1 Q, n( E/ g
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 f3 Q, m* f0 U; i
3 z" _1 k& L; J( x2 t1 p2 k% R9 ~8 v. S# eLet me just rewrite yours:
4 Y" f8 A1 O6 G; P8 jIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
) o' N2 M! ?: b9 m
( I& \6 N. U5 a$ _, V+ Q1 f0 B1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 ?5 ~7 @; l( ]% K( D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; p* C7 o7 Q$ Y) t
; h4 b0 k2 Z6 L) f
There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
1 R9 ?+ K, ~! A# i' e0 k, X+ u6 V, ?2 J3 a1 W( T4 H$ @
Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 i- F! k3 y) o1 Q% b6 U2 ~$ f+ ~ t
% q7 P! l( @1 g2 r/ n% M
Gretz. |
|