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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! _2 R. h( ~5 g# neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & X! L9 `+ p4 l6 ~. G" J
9 J4 {( _0 d1 KLet me just rewrite yours:
. @3 A" S4 y5 n4 }1 f! Y: W1 lIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- }9 @) \' |( S# b
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% j1 c& B+ y# Z* ]2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 ~. ^8 x2 D' {4 P1 TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! G- ?% c1 t: [$ j; V: m" O
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