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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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1 J8 K* Y: w, cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' P2 ?: D" C4 w/ |2 o& c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 S' o% d8 y& I+ v. }8 G+ ^2 {) Q1 L" b+ t T& E. R. ^
Let me just rewrite yours:. W3 b2 H, G1 f; }+ c h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ }( `6 m: l$ U# W* h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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7 @7 u a7 H8 `+ QThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow./ o% Q+ H: A, i( K: E$ z* ?+ J+ L C
# h/ T* i8 V; U8 W0 OThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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