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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 ?& @/ W; Z+ O0 r) q5 ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 E' f) }2 o+ y7 n0 J' J: z
* R- B2 o8 G; I: y2 ^Let me just rewrite yours:
: J5 p4 y0 j6 d( O( }It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. } T5 w& H8 S* b0 t
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 a) f7 w. x( N0 ^+ h
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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$ M* E8 A* K! i) jThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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! f& e; N- ^% J; \2 JThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." q, Y# ~: t5 v- \) y* ?
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