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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# i1 I, e5 c) c, S6 _5 [1 K* P6 x9 _
- i' k; E: `, G* p* ?) Eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and e, p4 V$ s: j" n" O3 @0 N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : T' L1 Y7 ^1 Z* N# U4 c$ D$ ]
" M- [ _' J8 A+ _8 }5 g1 pLet me just rewrite yours:
1 h) @- G. N0 M& p7 b: _It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- X% v' P! G. E$ {4 F( ]7 x# [2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ s3 q. L# h* z+ x
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% \+ l/ J. k! E6 ?) @
( M4 x3 h2 M' n/ B/ B) c7 TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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