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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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4 F) r5 {- o" ~( Z2 Ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - L2 \. ^2 ]( f4 f9 I9 S( C
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 ?3 P. ~) z# V; G9 W, [. W" ~- w4 s! C$ t" f
Let me just rewrite yours:5 M& c) B) s; V' U1 x8 x1 X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; {: q; U' b* J' S9 |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 L. ~! X1 h7 g' n- q7 j( |
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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0 N" m7 u$ R- h' G MThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; l. Q' D$ s! K, P0 ]- i0 |! a7 L2 R
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