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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& I4 J% ~! \* @+ `8 R
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 V" ?$ W0 {1 D2 i5 o1 h* K! Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 @& S) B8 U; e- r
! T0 ^$ R4 O3 j% l3 i2 z9 n1 hLet me just rewrite yours:
0 W1 i! [, N- {. {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; H5 X( h0 | H. D+ b+ I
- d) j+ f, l, h5 W1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: F' h/ J+ m' \! E& f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 ^5 W ?# Z! p. d; l5 t
7 D" ?/ r5 {" F- u7 ~6 \: r8 qThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 ]4 @* [( y5 B2 ?/ A# y+ \& f% p
3 _; R) I2 ?* U. h% K; u$ B2 Q& _6 SThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: w6 n7 W( ^' Y) `, v* ~+ z+ f* g
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