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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 [ a+ ~; Y* g. H6 \5 D* I
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : r) M% c) p. z: l( Z8 Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; B1 W) V% W! o; T3 m( g" |$ C p9 U
, h7 q( |3 p6 v6 A7 s/ XLet me just rewrite yours:
; e* {4 c: b K5 ^* D2 ]It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 n' O, u& [, q* K4 m
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: `) @" p# o, e0 r' _. X5 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, ?, s/ f: a7 n% u8 w& u. s. K- Q2 c \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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