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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " {, L+ U, u H* ?+ j0 E
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 d ~! i! [5 @$ N1 g
+ }: i% Q1 Y, `; A" Y |Let me just rewrite yours:$ U$ q: @0 U ^4 G* C* L1 ~, }% F
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 z$ o' P# q9 c( }% C( L' P
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) T5 e( o, d* dThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: W+ v& `! e0 z3 P4 Y; k; K f
) L5 z% v! a9 Q9 lThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 ^4 m; v6 y5 b9 y6 s k- {0 o6 d
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