- 帖子
- 1691
- 精華
- 1
- 威望
- 245
- 魅力
- 0
- 讚好
- 0
- 性別
- 男
|
81#
發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
| 只看該作者
Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ `3 b7 X( L1 ^/ i/ V; {+ }2 H
- y; x0 }* F" z$ x, P
it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) l% k! G. U& J+ l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 Z8 o9 Y# K' D1 h0 n7 r
4 s; X4 k" W' e; X8 TLet me just rewrite yours:2 w. V* ?9 u. ?& i- l! p0 A- ]9 u! [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. o' X/ o6 N- h5 C. F
$ j" t- r/ {; g1 H1 K1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 e2 P9 R) b" L, }4 [/ L; S( {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
( c* {: e. o, P
9 \+ }. J/ g6 K" i, L; H& HThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
* m8 M! {" p, u& E! M5 N7 |* `/ M# h e
Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
1 L/ I) ?9 A9 h6 l) r: H
1 @ p6 p: F. CGretz. |
|