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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( ~5 D9 \5 l6 S2 b2 X" p; u
( N1 q, F7 J* e9 b7 f& lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ J4 D# @1 e/ C( w: p, V) @7 deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 I$ r% I% Q1 d% G% z
$ d& X T1 w# Q1 \; VLet me just rewrite yours:5 \3 ^* y9 c3 `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! u' i7 h7 n) h! w$ C
% T" B0 I/ N# T* e( Q5 w3 {1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' H0 c+ x! a9 Z% r7 z* W% _
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: T$ _; U8 _/ ]4 J, D* W
/ Y6 Z9 E5 m q [There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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