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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 P+ z8 `4 h$ }it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) U( e" ]3 o) F( @9 feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 f! V7 l7 s h6 |
2 C6 |' s% J& S- \Let me just rewrite yours:7 v( X( {2 g6 c$ ?- d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' l* Q" q0 d( @5 |1 x2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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9 o9 @2 I, r! H3 i% {- b1 IThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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% P: y. c/ L7 d- {9 x, YThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- ^" V: K ^3 t! f- X$ t
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