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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. N: S4 G9 Z5 L2 Y& }
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; G6 [( m8 w$ C- y, p+ u4 X4 l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. g. r. Q* C( g9 Y, t% W/ m3 n
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Let me just rewrite yours:: p/ Q7 M% Q, l# }( ^! ^7 v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* S+ \+ R4 h* N) T, @& i
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; w& Y: G) i; ^7 k1 `2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." R; t. B9 a9 z* T% n; Q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 O+ Y6 j% u' e# I) B0 O* m
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' d7 A1 q' F) z9 d8 [8 W
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