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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: c& c' F" M4 aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( L1 `$ {/ P* |! T, [2 D
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Let me just rewrite yours:
4 M4 `9 \4 N n3 S. P0 z8 bIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me a. c9 v E# h9 O% \
: W( `( R4 P. r& J; K5 \) l" y5 L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 q/ W2 J: y, N2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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1 a- \# o+ m- H- t& s$ bThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% L' C6 d; `$ [8 C$ X- h3 K
- O8 o# n/ ]5 k. x0 Q, wThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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