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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. x' V6 S4 F, D1 R" s, U
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# d& s- ^4 G, E5 U& w/ ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ k0 s2 q: { G2 S. Z" F( G
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Let me just rewrite yours:: J' T, Q0 |3 d3 b
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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q8 c# X& {5 \1 F7 e1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 c# b7 u2 E! O0 p* S' F: v' h
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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7 C' o+ w$ L7 L) h- eThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 B8 m( @. \ N+ C
2 Z+ ]& A$ U; u2 EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% m1 q5 h. z& U. f) l- t1 o# G2 c
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