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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ U6 o& }' W# M5 ?' N9 xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 O8 g1 c9 Y+ \
. W2 u7 `: m4 P% Q% YLet me just rewrite yours:: C% Q0 O5 Z$ i7 ~5 M! V$ q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 k e6 Z5 B5 l; e1 {( G
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 w* c; b' R5 t" Z& V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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8 I4 y. F# `" i; J/ mThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., Y) a' r: \3 k% S- G
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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