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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- P6 i$ Z4 u5 a D$ p; b
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. X# g1 ^- T; E: }8 @: teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 {0 z% C: J! Y- H7 j6 s
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me u1 [1 O4 T: G2 S3 A
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 _; M" q+ ^2 l$ e; |
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# H- l: X" t/ D: e2 P
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- u, X8 R+ ~# G' R' U7 L
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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