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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 N i' C* w5 y9 Peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , M9 Q9 A, N6 Y' f0 u+ J! {$ w/ ^5 E
1 {# W! K+ ^2 y1 p K4 zLet me just rewrite yours:/ M6 {8 Z& b' \: u' S: w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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. d( |/ V) {( r- v+ j" n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' S( M! Y; C# @) F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." R' f+ |' X, i4 K4 D0 R
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 q+ Y& @; ?( n, j
; _2 w+ X. ?0 V, x- ]Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' J" O% V% X8 E! X
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