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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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' I# X/ W4 K( M) Nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 G! `4 S' d* S$ m2 t$ k% I' @everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 s k, {# u) h8 H
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Let me just rewrite yours:
& d, A. ~& v" \) WIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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. P" l) S) R( h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! v( P( O+ Q! w. J/ }" C+ o- K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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/ H6 Z* o) |5 b' Y! r* ?There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; {9 Z$ j D8 H: i/ x% g4 {3 ~Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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