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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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+ J h' C5 h9 A! uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ^3 h9 Q: W4 V& b: {* T0 S
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " `$ N3 d3 G1 f8 T- r5 A, J# ^
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Let me just rewrite yours:( e1 x( @# e- j0 Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 o' {4 F, W: r2 C Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 L9 J N4 `2 O9 ~, w, e. W5 I
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. R3 ~" P2 ^6 [4 J' ?& W, l
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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