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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 K1 K% e! x/ j& n1 m2 G
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% z5 L5 |( {# P' h Teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) g0 ?4 T8 m5 i! c8 b0 [! m
! O3 h1 g3 w1 x2 K2 G- P/ \1 _) xLet me just rewrite yours:
9 A+ I2 \" k9 r0 vIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. t4 h9 _3 H0 a/ f
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ a; I$ X3 f) B9 ` {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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