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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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' t0 Z' C( q" hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : J. R6 z9 i: n3 B, P0 ^1 u2 \
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) S$ [8 U4 r0 r# r
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Let me just rewrite yours:$ b A8 ^ o0 A5 m1 Q: S) H6 t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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8 Q. k, }% v( O, _& n6 r1 `- h5 u+ J1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: }) I' p. t; `/ j* \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 S" o: z8 t, o( n8 z
1 K# V) n" b. P2 d2 c# ?Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ D- m0 X1 e6 G
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