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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ [4 }; o6 t) U" V# k' M8 qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me.
Let me just rewrite yours:7 }4 L+ B. U5 K v0 o: u8 ]2 U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* y& f8 M; S) m2 B! R6 S
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" E$ c, i8 M a/ W9 \+ f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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" \9 T$ n" g0 T- ^* }3 }: wThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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: A( e D- G, O* \Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; c1 A; F5 v! @
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