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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . i* S6 _" x/ }2 Z* b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # P6 {& t, i3 K, L# t) Y A+ _
" k$ a7 k# s. K, b7 i( DLet me just rewrite yours:
; \+ g( ~5 p: x7 D: LIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 h$ `$ i _5 G8 u; F, C4 ~5 E
5 ~! Q0 W. R- E( s" T3 F# X" u1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* K1 i6 Q0 h) |2 e7 j& y7 @/ h7 V2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 D! {! [/ j2 C8 ~
, d* }3 L" {1 N0 i, mThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 k0 T1 _5 i& Z) Y& H
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