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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ g; P% @* ]7 C. t/ Q" f
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and % n6 J3 F, x( _' n9 _8 ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 z3 I+ |; Y% p( v- y
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Let me just rewrite yours:
7 q/ e, D: L* |0 t$ g% Z1 }' u5 j' yIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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" J' t! v: B3 b1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 E, j/ a- w& w% a; J" J% y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- \# C- f( x3 k I" z- l
$ X' c- k1 @+ E, {There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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