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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ M6 K' {! a9 e: h
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 D" {& w3 U- _, @- ]1 m6 J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % L1 T. E j" F$ @/ f: A7 F: [: o. U; {9 A( k) _/ e( u
Let me just rewrite yours:) X0 s; G+ l* _: k, B+ z: x; W
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* F$ ^& I1 n5 t' P$ w0 h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 p; N9 s' C+ [* @- N! Q8 i4 _7 B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 M+ o; ]# e Z8 F' ^
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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