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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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) j; {, N$ _7 ^4 n8 w6 [it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; H M% [$ z# m$ L/ a5 q7 Reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) g9 z% I/ O3 j! i0 y
- k# Q! N& p! x9 ~4 @/ ]/ A8 o! f4 `Let me just rewrite yours:% F9 v. m+ E! B+ G7 t$ \3 O
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 z5 g5 \5 k% b) R7 D$ |4 @ R
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 Q* ?" @7 Z3 O) y" Z5 D
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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