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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 w8 d3 M q4 G2 J! O
O- R8 w+ W0 D. S K. I! j2 F* f3 T7 ^: xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 a: x) R$ _( a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 u: i$ [) z D. v$ h# K
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Let me just rewrite yours:8 r; ?+ w; ^* z8 i P* ?7 b
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ Q+ i" Z$ {8 @1 s% W
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; x8 [2 z' l1 ~5 J5 D$ M! j2 K+ i+ H$ l
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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+ C+ e6 p z) O5 e! h0 S/ F2 w0 PThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 _3 j- D H. \* M
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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