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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 B; ^2 _) Q) m4 |# R% s sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ d8 C( I; {2 G+ ^* r
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / T: v3 x. H. p4 B
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Let me just rewrite yours:7 p. y) ?- [, ?( @; x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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" I! h! O9 I0 ]/ k' D) z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 ?* T+ U7 F0 U& w2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* Y7 y7 e: a D5 M! m2 ]: M' o) |9 d
: T; V/ u+ D R; r4 R& y% oThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 `, k) V9 U' U0 d
2 ?3 \6 F3 R2 l. O8 ]Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 x5 @: q' c, z
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