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| % H; ~8 S' y2 W  N5 G% k6 n) I& n, q- h1 G" l& n4 f2 }" h" iOriginally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; o% q2 s$ S6 _- j- a. [6 {. k$ W/ @/ n; h5 Z9 g) R
 it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 c1 v, D* p$ {4 U* r" m1 B# d* Q
 everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me.
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 It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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 ) [$ L5 v! v; L4 \$ x1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
 9 V% z7 }# ?6 g! N" x; {3 n/ s2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ I$ {  }; S  A1 N+ Y9 u
 
 $ h8 R( G! n6 c( Z5 R% n" YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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 ' n2 {% q" s; D8 [2 E" VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* {2 }: _1 l* Z- d8 n
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