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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 H+ N1 Y( P( @
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 j4 B3 B+ e' r: K2 q. q1 d0 w! geveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 F/ ~$ ]/ q1 \* L& G; q1 G
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Let me just rewrite yours:# U7 M# W. Z1 z! o+ m. w' L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* u* c& s* c1 v3 }8 j
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 R1 \: |' M2 E4 A9 f& m( n2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.2 K- |/ x* l) j" L p1 `7 x
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. e( |% T3 a" w t3 i- d1 ^, a
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