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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:( ?' B* g% j' S2 `
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& e6 o/ x, F0 q2 a3 u3 K2 Deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ P1 t: B2 u/ v; d
3 z# P( J" _' m+ }# fLet me just rewrite yours:( ]9 U$ U; R3 A; r( |$ P8 y; j
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( o4 P. ]# g v% i5 n& F5 f
3 L& F& e) {( K$ D! c' q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 u$ v. N$ T$ `! q( q6 ]: b2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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* S& F& q( B; T, Q9 p3 Q0 lThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 a& Y. v4 Z: E4 r/ Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ s+ q; V/ f' s7 L
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