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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. Z9 i% E' o4 Z- V; B* w5 |! H
% ~9 I5 D$ |2 wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ L K( d0 p4 v9 P
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . |7 S! m. k" E" i/ P* V t" h6 T4 ~/ m" H7 I6 M* j, f/ s
Let me just rewrite yours:, O' d8 V5 d$ L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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9 K9 W# I% H. M# l) I1 B0 ]1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 V% r. |* A' D, x( t
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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7 p$ u: V# O! N9 U* K( nThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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c* i6 Z. L3 R& e/ PThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 s% b$ O/ n7 f5 ?. l
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