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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 ?2 c! v; [; j+ K" Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / T2 I3 s5 U9 S5 }" S) O( @
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Let me just rewrite yours:. k' B5 i( |! C. Y% \* L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* r8 _5 ~, }$ E. u3 B7 z, G' @
/ s% q- }, x, d. G# }# O! O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 c* S e& _) |/ U/ w2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., K8 z+ g4 _# V# h* N- D! S! C2 |
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 H) i9 S+ w8 [/ c8 l5 y" V
0 ^0 b% g6 a5 {Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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