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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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) ?! R5 X3 ]' R" y1 ^0 Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
B* B1 @. Y' D. F7 t' e0 ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / P- w& d, B) f! g1 S- m
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Let me just rewrite yours:. [6 c4 g. z9 i5 T
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ n5 W a2 T! i5 U0 i/ c
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ ~7 [: O9 E3 ^9 T3 D
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 p& i* [# I% j3 S; [0 P
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ [* O. s, i- u7 e0 Y1 r. s5 ?
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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