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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: {( m7 M7 r- b8 B
- P5 t% b( o, W) Z- U5 B# r, Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 n0 Y/ U6 E6 P: j7 F3 jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! B. s1 B; w' e- u9 ~' j$ |
9 u7 W$ B6 z" ~5 U# C6 DLet me just rewrite yours:- v6 \3 v! _4 A1 u
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. r& O) v4 i: q. s4 F
" \0 s6 Q, j) _9 \9 S3 a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, w$ \/ p( O1 p4 q$ m+ I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 m- ~" K7 [+ J" V+ i5 Y
: A; e' S, V4 i. d) UThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 V) A) G3 i% b1 M, `: e- ]
% Z) O- K9 d6 ?Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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