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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 t: ]( m* }" K v- l, i0 }it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ p# ~* o' Q; P K
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , r6 V; D7 } i1 K0 X3 \* ?5 b* b7 `4 T) v3 C
Let me just rewrite yours:$ ?: [8 O/ K5 h. t1 s" v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 m! @4 B6 v2 M! Z+ m; n( b: |! V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.6 F$ j& R* U/ t& K% h7 V
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' g9 ?# A$ b' h. g! B X3 i
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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