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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 T+ {+ C8 V6 nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 F, v7 p% e* W5 n: {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * ?& Z6 s) S" g6 X5 a
" V" ~5 @- _8 F0 @! `* U7 \Let me just rewrite yours:4 g: ?6 T2 ?9 e7 h; M( B
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me X Y; m0 |4 S' P7 ]' r I# F6 t
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& K2 ]0 R9 M" _0 P; R" M- p6 V3 J9 |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' V3 G) b9 L# H7 i$ h/ z# d: }
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 V6 z' j3 V8 X+ o
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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