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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 y& I3 x) ^. r8 B+ [% C
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! X% ~3 x0 ^8 [. w J" f$ c; d" u0 z7 ?/ C0 j
Let me just rewrite yours:; i. H, C* h! y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 R0 z- `4 I8 J0 ]. Y- M8 U t
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 `! ^- M8 A# N( v% E
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( U! D3 I, P# J6 M; L0 X& c
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 {2 k1 |7 h& q/ Z/ ~/ b
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