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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. L! X1 V" _+ \8 ^everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 h0 h% t' W& R7 ?
' v1 K \; |) C4 kLet me just rewrite yours:0 s' p# t! _4 @6 K x0 ^
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# C1 A' w( Q) h& F
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) X; |6 s5 y3 d
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' U: E; g5 v5 x+ |8 R" I
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ T' q2 Z9 I( c4 ^0 q0 @Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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