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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! k/ \: z: c& k9 p( H% S
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 G3 m7 }6 n" F& Weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 }* }9 x$ L1 x* S" A& K
1 W: H) V( E7 s5 d, G8 j" JLet me just rewrite yours:
5 ]" \3 Q7 H _( X& [It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 N3 p3 ]! x! Z' e: N. q
2 I3 k) ~- }- p1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 J& e$ }3 q) K/ T: c B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 K# X2 h9 u) R' P+ o6 A
, t% m8 { [. v! l" t0 ?There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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