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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& N' k& k! Y4 n2 ~everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! i0 z6 r* X8 O0 ^' z
7 H' e; U% I1 ` D! @" {5 mLet me just rewrite yours:
# l6 O+ \+ c- Z& JIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 k0 A5 m0 Y, A2 F5 u% F
; |0 f! s% Y* n8 t; j1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ U( a) j+ U( O( o* f* z+ F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! J5 A& `2 J* j& f7 g
" y o4 ~" n! C) R: Y3 v5 ]5 g$ h/ m$ }Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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