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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and J/ I3 {% w# S9 }. }4 H) Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 y8 s2 D0 w# }6 i& H
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Let me just rewrite yours:: P6 s0 M1 H% f9 d, t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 o+ C% V. Q& O/ ^. r& E- q5 v+ ?; C; A
3 q0 f) W3 s! @" ]1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! @% n3 M% v/ [ w8 a, e( H
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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5 `$ Z7 R$ d! d$ e' kThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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7 x" E/ x! ?7 q6 [5 L/ ?, n) PThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 d( t/ J2 J( v7 F
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