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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & Q, H' c! U: V) P) B. `, a c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 L) @4 V. y9 Z) \" r
8 K) [+ Y/ \- o2 g8 k5 \+ mLet me just rewrite yours:4 T; Q) t: y! a& V; c
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 \1 d& t$ k+ ]. M/ O7 |6 C# {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; P) m8 y7 r8 E# j7 iThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 [; D5 R0 d+ L* _
% x# N" `+ @4 x R' h9 g/ jThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ R) d% x* r S* W
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