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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% W9 u! {1 f4 ^: o
* N9 J9 o- r9 C( sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 T. N7 v8 S7 R w' e$ r& Z; b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. r% r9 X0 l6 ?
, M1 J) u6 R% l3 R- k6 X/ c$ j. F3 @Let me just rewrite yours:& Q6 O6 T, Z3 k7 j( L/ G. V7 V$ Q! d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 ?2 i3 l5 E: A+ b/ }$ q, p Z! m
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. s. W J; q! l8 J3 ]' F
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# E/ e" K# g# y q+ J5 K. o
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* u$ |3 ]! m" r C
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