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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! \' e$ q- e) d6 N0 ]; N( V+ S
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 c$ S2 y3 a. a Y
" u* B, a' m/ E" oLet me just rewrite yours:
& v3 b( ], _, _) Q( YIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 w# l7 t& z* @$ p5 D7 H! E
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 d b+ ~$ H ^& |- W9 c: \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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l( X! @* U* P* v1 h8 Z9 X: dThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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! t. D2 w7 H5 [0 QThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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