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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: d, Q$ J2 T; Z" X0 \0 l, C0 H
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
' c" W) h( Q0 M' G" \$ Q+ ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . M$ X B E% i9 h6 w! K
/ k" ?7 `" v9 c: g4 d+ VLet me just rewrite yours:
* X4 u: [, o& {" o) \8 {; g3 XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; x! `( C7 l2 x& x0 K, ~$ }3 B
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 k* ]( o; X& r( c& Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 A7 o, X( X1 }. c$ i5 N" i
# H5 I* m: n V6 d( {; TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: n3 G# l' _6 p+ A5 [5 c4 ?8 N
+ s1 J# C9 Y- O7 KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., } ]* P+ x- ~/ [
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