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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, v; d7 `5 o3 U/ Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 |( J& o0 V0 v7 w4 z3 s
' X$ T/ J1 p8 G* f5 M) V/ @+ fLet me just rewrite yours:; M& @9 j( W( H/ x: L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 b) `) \2 g6 z5 }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- n; K# f1 M5 I+ t2 d) P
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 H, F; G; O* A7 jThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., I- ?$ u/ v6 C% z: p7 C; J$ O
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