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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 q3 t4 D* d7 m+ yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 U6 V9 r) o. ~everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 o) x6 s! s9 h) \2 j8 G+ c3 W/ F" s
I8 `3 V, O+ O F2 @7 CLet me just rewrite yours:
. f8 X- w$ d* L0 Y9 z" A5 z. jIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 I" M. K* ^) H
, E5 x2 Z8 H6 F q7 Q. O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!% t7 Q1 L/ S- t4 l# J$ f) J
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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7 f0 u% \- ?8 W n: W( DThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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