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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% I3 E; q1 ?8 G2 E: s) ]* p. H M; Q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 g& P( C7 Y5 Q* R4 Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - y( q8 e. p' N
% V3 l7 @: x0 ]3 Z! WLet me just rewrite yours:! K6 y0 I/ ?0 V+ P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 P U' i# [' t/ h* O
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, N' _+ T# o! I+ Y5 G( X% ?: Q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( D- s- i% Y# YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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