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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* Z( j8 o" w h- G$ _it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: x+ x |" }0 ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % W: h3 `& Y/ o. W3 c( {2 K& w% v5 d" W
Let me just rewrite yours:
8 C' X& s3 J7 ^# dIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 o" r' c( H8 c1 [. @
) n9 S; X# P2 A) {) n# Z5 A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 m3 l3 J% B; W
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) @7 \0 [2 \# {% U" u" `' J
+ s4 Z9 h. a, ?! aThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. @) [, u+ O0 a6 d" T* [
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