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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ }' }" d+ i7 B, V
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 ?/ d" a* T j! x& leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 r* C8 a/ D, P
( P' S. Z6 B3 G# o' d# K+ r7 r( \Let me just rewrite yours:
}1 J3 Q, w- \+ \5 K7 `8 [It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' w( h; O1 a0 ^* y
! G6 ?( J5 z9 {/ {; f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: v- o" s$ b2 r( F; |" Q- J2 J9 a: N2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% N- x0 N/ r3 V5 Y
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ F. r/ Y; u4 t6 u% d) p- ^
; I; C* U9 a' ]' w5 E% w/ T( rThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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