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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , L/ l3 G* t! k: P, g
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 t$ a8 z I) a2 f, M( K3 \/ ^0 V5 j; w, @# S2 C
Let me just rewrite yours:3 P" |0 { K5 j- x; w {
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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! X( F6 f: y4 o7 a' \ f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- g- q8 s4 E- ]5 R+ Q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: L7 }. i+ b8 ?* {
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- j4 L+ x0 D7 {9 y) _6 w! F0 Z
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