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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, k1 u5 k) m; C' D( x t B3 Aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - R( I: A8 O# O
9 `, c6 E q1 a0 uLet me just rewrite yours:
" B& ~6 D5 X1 H ~; FIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me8 M+ @0 [6 Y% c5 V& n0 |+ {, F" Q
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ n9 C2 c1 o8 e, D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ f) o: R7 j0 R( J0 e
! l. I& ~% c3 qThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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