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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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! C4 W9 M' }1 J# j8 Ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- R) Y C) x/ p: R8 Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 G. K! {" I7 M! W. b* s! S
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Let me just rewrite yours:. }- H7 o o, F3 E% Y8 G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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+ f" U4 L; h; u1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 Y0 G2 r: k' Y3 W% n' J2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' a9 |/ f0 G9 _" [
. j; W6 l5 i. u" tThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. X% g k% A0 x! J b" H1 j, HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: o( s! \* F8 `( e4 }* _
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