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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 f. \, x* ]/ I( X6 S# q
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - S$ Z. W* P3 O' R
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * P) }; E( I6 {5 ^4 `4 m1 m
- e4 i1 k6 H" |. PLet me just rewrite yours: U5 P9 n$ ]$ [0 Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ Z8 _6 `6 r$ D5 `' M
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 h: H0 @$ J" a" s. ?& ]6 Y: [0 c2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) ?+ [% j, c7 |/ v8 J6 _2 K
' K1 U, S: X$ c8 s0 `There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., S- _" i( |! @2 ]+ y. h4 D
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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