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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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- o/ |' }- Y, m+ n1 D2 b/ B+ s! h' Eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 j2 p4 w, o: d8 Y6 X1 O3 M5 Y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me.
! d' [" W% P, V3 X+ H" ~! |$ wLet me just rewrite yours:
8 p% P* f: \" m% p4 gIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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) O3 }3 C+ n, ?1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!. w, K$ p' v/ N5 x
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." S* B' E% ]" T$ ]& V
* }( A+ ~2 ~0 ?; qThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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