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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" n6 u! `: W" e# ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 x0 F [5 M4 t6 {$ A! Z
8 v6 f( k v, T7 Y4 d+ Q0 T2 ILet me just rewrite yours: d- N2 A9 ~7 h. h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ I+ G0 K; n7 X: l w; C% v0 c
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!+ a/ i' j0 }0 R' s/ b
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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2 ?/ @% O9 p5 e. x, `6 G' o% ?: bThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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( E- S" A- N, W% T- a1 lThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; S1 g$ a/ n# Y
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