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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, v. D7 c5 s; T4 u" l$ \# Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . T% Q8 H! M5 `1 a. \
# X& E. _- R7 G8 v$ S* c$ Q. E! [( qLet me just rewrite yours:* u$ J1 D: b, q. H1 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! n2 B2 j+ M" u) ]
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 I2 _; R4 u; L5 N: {- D Q* i0 Y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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0 G m5 j# a7 L/ }$ kThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 ^9 G- b0 K+ y1 S- ]. A/ ~ }
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