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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, O3 r& t9 V: Z1 L: O7 t+ Kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, R' W+ w9 K0 h3 k* Peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 G0 l/ s( y0 t0 e0 G: a
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& b) B& v5 Q5 a, F# a2 _
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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2 ]& N5 b8 J0 x" i" a( Z) sThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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