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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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; P2 C2 `9 [& }0 V# _ s, F4 Kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * i3 W- |6 Y" Q* y' G. ], p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % ~% Q7 k- F# H
4 c8 C- K& t$ {Let me just rewrite yours:
4 u3 b' e, F0 n( O2 {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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3 b x/ U/ R8 s' _6 T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ _; n6 z) y* _' |2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. b. q$ I' Q( S9 N$ f
0 k& T& s9 Z3 h$ bThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 F+ G/ n4 e" e1 G0 P; U
! O) T5 C: A3 i6 UThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 |8 B. R1 g2 T
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