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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 T4 G% U4 ^3 c5 e. o7 D ^5 C6 o0 n( b! H
6 \# N' t3 ^: _. s2 ?7 Cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and d) D5 w4 H; y* j, R
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % W/ k" |( ]: }; W% v3 f3 m
( C+ \' e% @( u& P. E, E/ oLet me just rewrite yours:% V9 h7 X+ g+ w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# r) j3 D! h% h6 w k# m0 z# ~1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; s" D" i7 X B4 z: }! @% M, ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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6 g4 n6 o/ L# q, uThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ j0 D" Q; P" T2 v
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