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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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" l- q5 M3 u, d/ T6 W# u* F' Oit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 n5 Y- _5 m! ]4 u
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 `1 v, w2 {0 b( {8 H7 [
* t ?! m9 j' ZLet me just rewrite yours:' l! D* y; M% j( J' e7 \7 q. I/ D" ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, |& G4 U, U9 I0 E9 k, w/ H1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ r& T0 {5 N A- n% H- S" S2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 f. g- g! P4 l1 n- H
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