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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 k4 l; w K7 B, F; w V
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - w- _- q* g, C# c k6 k; j& j1 c Z
0 u0 _! P) V/ ?% y7 G7 aLet me just rewrite yours:% `4 y' R2 T$ d3 l5 W; ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" H$ r2 u, H0 |4 S7 y* c; x
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 J: ^* v1 m( R( A2 ~
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., V% c. Q% a0 D' ]# ?
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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- u& w8 d8 G' Y |% G4 d9 xThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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