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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# _+ n' r' q# K9 M
$ O, Q( M: P" X4 O6 Xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & I' ?" I4 N4 ?" W- B7 y
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + L- b2 V6 t" H0 n I9 c, r& Z
, c: E1 u4 K( J! L) i9 |2 w% a$ bLet me just rewrite yours:
' V7 P$ q0 i; I, z" M/ u0 BIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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' Z4 \; Q' R; I9 H T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# s* J1 h, y9 I8 u( R2 B" Q, y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." T5 m; d, y7 Q# L& ?0 F
. U. E- s% M8 ]3 D) w) JThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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