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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 N( \: X( @* q3 r! P# G
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 J; r- c- @) q: V3 M$ Q E
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 c' {$ i9 a+ N" e1 w
) V; d4 O% Y, X3 T" d s3 JLet me just rewrite yours:, z4 i! [' K+ i& A0 z \) d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 z5 P+ M, ^# T+ ~" ?8 M
8 W# \8 T/ n; a& ]1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 N( A9 ]" U X% D8 x6 H, y8 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 ~% ~+ P5 F( q- x
( ]0 h X6 [3 Z- iThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 m- I0 Q8 d' l
+ A. V: \$ [ W2 i5 lThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., x' |3 b, N) O1 ` U
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