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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" N8 o% H" F& T* X# Z! A
. W5 v, c: }+ o: [' f1 Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and z7 w/ o: k" U# D
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 O/ C7 @6 @) C: U/ Q2 U) q
* A% \, z# k4 o" h( F. [1 G' OLet me just rewrite yours:4 O( Q# T: L( L/ E- x( m
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ a/ X+ S+ o4 L2 |7 p, w, t" Z
, w% r5 C' n# [* ?! n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: _7 \8 q7 N6 ~' N! S5 l; r1 O: c2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* N8 N% h9 z2 y( T/ W6 L2 M. K/ s
) Q9 X: n! O3 p, c# R9 ZThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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