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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; m4 p; m$ M! L, l' F
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 G0 G0 [/ i5 s. k, i" [7 S
, {' X% p) `, d1 t D7 iLet me just rewrite yours:3 r; S. l3 C- y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# x/ ?3 @7 t1 q1 D8 x2 K3 ~
- A, _# [* Z8 [! }5 q0 k' `, v1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) N6 s9 r6 G9 m0 m/ O0 S. A
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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7 ]4 c) D+ N* i* XThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.4 w' w; @1 h! k! t: y6 \5 G
- D4 f3 A1 m8 _- j3 c% s7 n, c( w* bThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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