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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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+ ? p; Z4 X* `# jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ g& u0 m7 I1 V2 y7 C1 b9 ?
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 a7 K; s6 j8 I" V6 n& l, }6 W) o
Let me just rewrite yours:1 C( z% h X; B+ K% N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 ^% F; z1 x$ k; f
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' x2 s2 _ \, Z6 X
* |) p; M6 t3 i# x+ ]There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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: O- b/ I; `8 g& ^: UThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 c4 @7 k: a8 H5 z1 R$ T) {0 F
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