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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 a; d- O8 r2 Q1 K
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- i+ p4 g5 K! j1 ]- w8 q+ N1 ceveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 y% m2 j6 s E9 C' [- t2 I+ r- Q8 m1 O
Let me just rewrite yours:" e, K$ e1 C! C# H2 \- v4 A% S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 `* g8 ?! v9 U4 r J4 m& _
& _, V! c& K O, d; T& L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, E7 I; |0 p) ]7 z. }9 I# v
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 q2 K g. } z o- Q( H
. {. q. k) |6 d5 T. \* C4 [There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 {7 F, b7 L y) d+ T; T( o. F( B9 r
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 [8 }: R9 C& ?: L0 c% F
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