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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 u3 W3 v" l8 D0 ?it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! ]: e0 X' @) t b* T9 d( Geveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) p8 I) }; ^1 C) ?" X; d: l- h; Q, I4 r a6 Z1 n
Let me just rewrite yours:5 L1 Q' J/ A( m h* ^/ c& D
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 v& R- H; s& A4 d3 C% k
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ j4 T" A5 e. _8 l+ ^ ?
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: ^8 _# ]* z: b5 W
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. P1 E; Z2 ]' M2 K% TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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