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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 z( R1 h% x" Z, A
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everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . q* |: E9 ^3 b, Q
: _ v& @$ B6 a, r9 D' \5 ?: kLet me just rewrite yours:/ H6 l: u$ s5 q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, P% d S6 A7 q
) I; w% t: ?/ Y3 @- S/ E# v1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
3 \2 J. J0 I8 l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- r5 [+ e: F! h
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." P- l* I9 O" V) v5 ~2 b
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