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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 z# Z( x4 c9 x$ P! X1 y+ v- ^
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 \' B/ S1 U# C$ j' }8 B, {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' ?& Q' l, E" r5 U' A
& ]( V/ p+ o+ L) r6 w- c3 ALet me just rewrite yours:! ]- J8 ]% \# |, {; ` f6 z; P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) v2 p& X4 P6 W7 g$ x
2 n7 h- ^, L. A! e1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- K5 `! s: C- k$ A" o8 k/ H2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ n2 _/ q" H) }) c
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 E4 \$ E9 i6 ~# R) H$ LThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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