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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 n9 ]# s( D0 s! r
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % P3 h5 }+ j9 p: T/ w! f6 Z. `( {5 f5 b
Let me just rewrite yours:
. ^; y, X* G, I( XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! |- Z5 J7 i9 `% c+ ?+ U
3 U/ L# e. P8 w7 V, a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" y/ g: `) k: ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 c T. Z3 a7 k( ]) f, D9 x$ n! J
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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