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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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& M; ~1 ?+ t: ^- g. hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ R% X# j* I% q E
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 R/ H8 o! w' a# Y4 _" [
5 ?9 q, L1 I G( `4 vLet me just rewrite yours:
- ?, |- J" Q4 P2 XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 M& M) U: @. c; i# i+ O* d- q6 T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 n% I4 `& ^6 i/ H! V4 ^( g& d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ X3 w. M& _) y- E/ E
3 h0 W) `0 `: SThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( d3 Q' x! u/ E7 S' n; n# L' X' p i
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 Z# y( O1 ]0 ~3 g# {1 v' L
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