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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) K8 j/ {4 y: q9 O: S8 w/ j
% S( t2 K, l8 }it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. |/ k0 `$ c! n' Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % ]) p/ ]0 G5 u/ f3 ]
+ b. d5 c. q2 j) h% BLet me just rewrite yours:. e" t9 J0 ^+ _9 N3 L6 s; N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 B# e+ R1 V8 M5 q2 ?6 Z0 d" `1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 Y1 `: e4 o* }8 b q% l. G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( x/ x4 k& a1 K. p; R3 _+ f3 U [There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 f$ j4 F6 u1 y4 |( N1 t/ \
' U- D0 [* t: MThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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