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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 O- Y! J/ r/ |: qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . m m9 N7 i. {9 g# {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) w4 M2 H! ~9 n) _* j
, P R+ x5 {5 Q. Y" dLet me just rewrite yours:
- e3 \" t" J; t9 y% Y1 C4 a w7 m" \It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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' Z- _6 V a2 p4 N3 a% F* H8 r) O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" B7 t8 D+ D- l! F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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0 T! ~$ k4 e k* {There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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