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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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. Q2 ~7 ?, e& ^* Z+ xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* y; y/ k f1 p- M0 M0 a1 Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 i6 [# v& |6 {; h+ T6 V
" }- [" L* k4 c. ]/ PLet me just rewrite yours:
: P$ _' l" R4 O u5 XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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p% J9 {$ B5 u! _" _: t. I1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ V9 \& g7 `: A, g* e, l; }0 `2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 {$ ]( t, J! W: \
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