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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: d% \* e& K/ Z. ?3 v
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# o" m' _: {+ u! z! u- D- G- Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( C+ b: W( J# k' u1 f4 O: T" Y
5 t. `' E, I4 J5 ~5 x: ]! f& a4 P4 fLet me just rewrite yours:
6 t ?; h0 x, B5 g( k% yIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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" b3 m; t9 q0 e; R9 o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ w, R8 `! v, H, P2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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