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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 G! E- H2 X' u- a5 O
% Q% t$ i' S& {% Wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & Z; X5 o- T* P
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " k K/ S) E" s4 r. t/ c9 P c% K
$ u/ ?7 o& @7 k1 e4 c* |Let me just rewrite yours:' n9 P4 g, j; v# R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
G+ t% v0 C# p% A7 f2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' Y2 s8 d* M1 B
3 M* P9 A, T5 i* d6 u! NThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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