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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 d4 V8 i. l. A. Y% O6 J* C Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ |% W4 J6 S) Neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " u3 O& m7 _, n6 s g2 o: S4 f8 u
: @! `3 m! O' ^, e ?6 N6 xLet me just rewrite yours:
$ y7 R* E+ _# |1 F! ^It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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8 [, z4 ?3 J9 h0 j. t% o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 v) o0 @, `7 m2 [6 R- b2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: L! z! @3 j0 K& v# s& m9 G" Y" S: a# C
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; G2 m( c0 r- o( p
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. w( t' j3 I/ o; `1 i
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