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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 w1 a \: `2 e
" f+ c6 D/ t% u/ Y5 t9 ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 z0 H+ ^$ n3 d# P, m6 e, m( D
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. k* y- V2 z' u
0 j4 }0 c, Y4 B- h9 }Let me just rewrite yours:- W* Y; X, W% o
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 Y7 d8 S0 ]% W) X
' E, x, V3 \# I& F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 L) R% ^) m9 \" P7 M# N0 ]2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., d4 ?& V' K. _ M! k9 J2 L
! Y1 ^- {( W" v9 s6 kThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% Z4 @% I6 g: f+ V& I8 G
8 r* ~& P& p6 p4 J# W1 HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! @0 N1 C3 V* l7 Q" \
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