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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 e0 X+ x# }( S$ s9 h
& A W/ p$ a; R& qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) N8 r: `5 B' neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % s" L+ y: P6 h$ C- |$ k, r/ Q0 P. ]; t& U. D5 \6 w; p
Let me just rewrite yours:7 X4 K3 O) v; O4 p# v( R' I6 B
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ A1 q @7 O- O8 e
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ z, g" i9 {% Y& ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. j2 z2 r' B, S2 M1 `% F# X
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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