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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* m- W8 d8 U) t# w2 g l
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( |) [! k X0 w( R
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 X2 j4 s8 M$ V- X. C+ U
! H, k; G, M/ s$ z2 h* U9 ?% iLet me just rewrite yours:* }- ?: g6 s2 e6 R# L8 q6 J) s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; l3 k0 L% g1 o9 W8 a
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& s; g8 @ ~# \" S
9 c2 u) _2 O5 IThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& Y3 r: K7 {- m2 a
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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