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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# C, S& x6 X, r& ^* q7 G1 I
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 O9 o8 T) K( Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , \9 N$ N* D+ g& J
9 ^, o! M* N6 r1 ?8 hLet me just rewrite yours:# {$ \/ p+ b- N ^( a! b7 r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# B3 }7 x( W ]% I; q: z. Q. y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ r5 z. Z9 {* ]5 R7 _+ D, Z& s
. b8 T, \* Z4 Q, R( X4 U, N$ eThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 {, U3 a7 m( |% h$ a- t$ z: i3 R
& k) l) h3 n3 T) q) m# u+ VThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.6 }! k; m$ \) X8 O% Y: I2 M: U
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