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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 Y7 w1 I+ w& O/ _& I# `! `8 r
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! M- f/ B) Y `, [- d$ M* H
: L; X0 D$ [! Y9 i) iLet me just rewrite yours:9 r" H% j$ ^0 {/ j0 E$ e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( [% k$ D" @7 V4 a; @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: L' |' k, N! Z
! j8 P" n0 f: x! AThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 l6 o% p z1 H& n, \% }( ]
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 z- i, o) N1 b! K# E+ r/ H) b
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