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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:# b. c% \2 w- h2 E' z+ X3 ?/ b; p
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ e6 u8 |' ?# Q4 [0 H5 {everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; k1 L ~$ Z& C9 z& b6 j
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Let me just rewrite yours:
8 U6 p9 g9 H. W. ^3 lIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 u; ]3 d, z5 u1 k4 R9 w
4 m$ ~0 | p, X$ b e; a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) k! \ O8 s9 @! p9 U8 ]; N2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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1 H4 b* ~1 ]+ F B" l- I; O% dThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# i" W1 P# ?- ^! B; K, j; ?
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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