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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) S3 [: e, b" L: {- Y z9 g; m. Z
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% ~# m# w6 X& ^. F9 Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + o M6 d( _8 X3 V
% F" ~6 B1 Y* r2 e( X3 B8 w" n5 ?Let me just rewrite yours:/ j/ O- I0 B$ e, [+ q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 K" B3 @1 p2 A% l6 a
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* }& @* D' f5 b* T, Z, M' l/ w, N
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- ^4 B# X5 `; U" D8 s A* v
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! D \: f. q) S
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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