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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 k1 _% h% B" O$ _' h
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) Q# q4 n! F. t1 z$ o( k9 e
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . ~1 t# n. h) b$ A5 ^, K# X
( Y D/ `* F8 X% H: wLet me just rewrite yours:! u& x- J$ A8 i& m! l1 m; R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ {. u7 f ^" z
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" d, S: h2 U4 {$ {; m0 F# p2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.5 A- s/ L9 T1 j% S0 i5 Z$ o) I2 Z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* J7 l/ Q7 x1 ?) a) h
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 Z1 B: T( w9 Q4 l3 Y8 x: J
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