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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' I, L* `4 m* {' o1 f. n Z1 ^
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % T) X( k2 R" v) d v
% |* m- |3 i5 DLet me just rewrite yours:: T. v+ D8 n" \' e, W: ^) m4 m. g V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 T t* b9 u+ U3 F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! E9 y L0 g% ~5 A/ f. H* B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) z3 Y- n1 ?, R' O: ~
9 Q+ s. G2 j( M% O5 {- D M1 |2 r) vThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.! w& n9 {& [+ a% x- {
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