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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 c L5 s: l0 e7 n
" k; q# j; J8 |4 Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# v# m5 e( x9 x1 i1 z9 leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + ^( n8 Q, u# s- b0 l a1 r
6 \; {/ F/ x/ i3 s; G5 V2 cLet me just rewrite yours:- N6 a7 Y+ P' E. H& s! c) i
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- r% {. M$ c: h' m( I& ~8 q% t
! O6 P2 H% b% }8 C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 n% B: Q w1 ?- h! H9 d. @% S7 f2 P. c
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. ^/ t$ |3 h% g8 v2 K& w
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' w, S& e! I$ n5 } N" f4 H- i
7 {5 F- u7 |6 k7 z0 n' `Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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