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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, m( ?0 [) k( r7 P. @
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 ^6 }* c/ {1 A- a. L6 W
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) d3 J& D) x# ?
" g1 a( M8 D- [! t3 ?Let me just rewrite yours:
! l: H/ U$ L9 ?1 S& f% AIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: }1 ]/ Z, P$ z& b2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! y: v8 S& X: q$ w
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 \) o: A) _7 o% D6 H* Y0 ]/ t
- U0 D. G* o _3 ?5 H- G EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 [ n" D& s% j
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