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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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# o- ?) v0 |2 W/ Z7 Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- d+ a/ _3 z3 _& V4 P4 weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( n( t0 d h$ B/ Z3 E( l! ~; p2 A$ a; S. o: G
Let me just rewrite yours:, \1 k$ |( g% `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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- G4 d4 |8 x, l" I4 G+ P1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 a1 O- Z+ x7 Y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 T& t5 w8 t2 u5 k3 s& p YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# ?4 Q3 ^- {/ |- K' b2 K- }
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