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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 A+ Q5 u6 T5 n4 b/ U5 g
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* x0 f, I) I& F( v4 F, J/ _3 \& ]everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , V8 V" q/ \4 F
: L# C9 @ p S+ x$ R# y1 XLet me just rewrite yours:
6 t- Z" T2 x" |/ uIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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- _* V5 q" v/ t: T; `0 v A9 Y$ K+ f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 s, \6 U, F; g6 W( v: U3 G& c
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# \1 g( r+ U& h( S `! E6 yThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% G- N+ e* w% O7 ]! F% e K
% @% U( V6 k+ D$ nThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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