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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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- f, {6 `, K8 a1 o Y2 j. Tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
. y# [' J, j3 q: S3 Deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. y0 T/ T8 E2 x+ g* b" K
8 X9 N! A* g" X; LLet me just rewrite yours:! d# H' e/ h4 N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me! h i( |+ L' } p5 E, L
6 o& N4 C2 E. @/ y( A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( \; V8 e7 `8 u/ ~) z' l, ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 \ [+ O, {* @+ e: o- F3 e* g
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) N% e% I& C' s: V3 F
4 d0 o+ L; I- G8 _& X. s ~Gretz. |
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