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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : J2 T& Y4 P N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 N- l0 T7 @; j. G) |; J+ y
y3 b _7 Y3 n0 k, xLet me just rewrite yours:; F7 Z/ z/ g ~* i8 {, t) |) `
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ q$ T- Z7 F: P7 c( h' ~
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- R s% w( D6 I' M2 c. J1 w
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; D* N' E& i0 W0 V. V
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