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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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( L( U, G- z B; o% r( [& hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 B. H' a( V$ I; Eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 s, k8 Q, L3 o2 N
8 g/ a' `* V8 \ ]! d) lLet me just rewrite yours:0 o8 f0 ]9 C7 c, ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 s4 o' s9 b k, F+ O
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' o9 T. Q2 r( v* Z5 F( w* I' I
( ?, L; D* b* [' e; H* TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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2 Q$ C; t' m6 L7 x1 O( GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: g& F8 Z* A7 c% }% C
& ^: ]+ d; R! C9 e9 }1 s& cGretz. |
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