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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # x$ s$ L2 |- L6 {2 ~" b
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 B' C$ A; a4 {8 ]6 t
7 Q+ y5 G, X3 @; pLet me just rewrite yours:/ _# [8 r3 l% S7 K# d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 r' K3 C( X# O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) u1 o, e W' _! P
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 K) {) X5 G2 h9 M+ K) y7 w0 j
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. \9 t/ O; X. @ {/ r
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