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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* x9 D6 ?7 ]& \2 fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 Y! f; q, ^+ Q2 p7 o! `4 V2 aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 D& W+ L |+ Y1 q
`7 V& o/ y4 f% N, u% ^# \. aLet me just rewrite yours:: @6 o7 @# W- Y. L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# H) J: ~5 C* i L0 b2 F2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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S& k, y& L6 l0 _9 hThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; t& ~" P" M+ z
# Y# ^4 G" Z' @0 [& RThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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