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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 R( m& c7 U/ L6 j9 g [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , k# M4 v }9 G) e2 X0 V, J
" G3 c/ ~4 a, ^9 n8 p1 sLet me just rewrite yours:
. X' a) \$ H7 T9 z+ gIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. k% d# e y$ `( v: ^
: f! e) e" N) m8 [# S: ?) i, |2 n2 o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, Z M5 N) k$ ?. D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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% S0 |6 T% h) ^' `/ cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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" i+ l3 ?; O7 w8 ~% \+ U" nThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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