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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 @3 {& P6 b, A- ` L" g$ Git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 ~' t! j, i/ h2 }
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : t6 D3 A3 U, v% c& L) g* Z. ~" i I- y
Let me just rewrite yours:, }4 q" Q, m0 p1 n( R3 H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 ]4 Z5 e5 p% t8 x; b& |
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& x7 f' T% |! y0 Y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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/ e+ ^) i; B' r1 u/ m) t0 gThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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" [/ f) a/ b1 r' Z! KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 L7 E, Q) y6 M7 o: M- }
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