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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + P& }6 T1 s4 x0 l L( d0 q) B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( O: `, K( y: N' b$ ~4 x
( |$ g2 V8 a s# G+ \+ ?Let me just rewrite yours:4 {: w9 x- ], g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 F1 o6 f" t8 J J5 Q1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! `" ^; Z" I7 r3 e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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b$ V6 }4 w" z8 ^9 w% s# P* X$ vThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( k% D" v* F- g$ v3 @
4 I. ]( F7 i$ GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." i6 D+ Q" j' d$ Y. J/ Q3 l; } d" B
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