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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, G, o& s$ f2 d' D8 z- a/ H& xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' D7 T, ^4 D0 D
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : I8 }, n! [. P3 p' [2 r9 S/ I
( `/ g4 i- u* xLet me just rewrite yours:& v$ E7 V$ i+ T1 q0 E' E
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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! }$ d& T& O' Q3 R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! w1 F! a6 w7 N; M5 z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.0 r# B0 o- B9 l: \/ d
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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) N. P! S0 a# dThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 Q# W$ w1 G, X0 Y! g: d9 h
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