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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* c/ p* L* O- J& e+ e, j1 ?
2 @) n0 w' `$ L" {! ]it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 I2 z' y% _9 ?everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . e4 n: u: O! ]+ {8 P
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Let me just rewrite yours:; h3 n; I) X* P: L) t7 E
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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8 P w: D; s U) U1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 ~" B: o }" X& _7 j ]! h* q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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8 T- F) Z- q+ f, @1 z! ?$ H) YThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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+ p0 S) w9 [: F3 GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 ]- b- v& [' D% Y' f
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