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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 ]: Z! y2 i Z# Q! g2 D6 W8 p
. j/ H2 O' Q, U" T5 _3 X' ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - `4 a. \% H% g+ Z" J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! ~' D9 W, m2 n" [; T1 e* y" F
# L4 W( X- @) q5 e7 H: z; [Let me just rewrite yours:
9 Y- Q/ t# J5 n. [. B3 {/ P" rIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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2 L6 E% y1 T. F2 I6 _4 k% f+ o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; d5 K2 A1 @1 U( x. z' ~. I. k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ n2 F4 y) S# T4 u! Z8 d9 |2 k- I
7 T2 T! T0 F% Y3 CThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* }9 J& S: Q0 w8 d! o2 ~/ D
c/ o7 o# Y7 k* i' J& sThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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