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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ R2 e( ^% b2 ~0 W" ?; c
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 L9 M, G3 X A! K7 N9 Weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' i7 b$ S( Z- k: M/ b/ u! T4 n
9 _3 N8 ~4 {; [9 f3 c! p5 n8 H2 qLet me just rewrite yours:
2 T6 X) x" L) A/ z& RIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* V; _$ \1 m0 I8 r5 d
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 e2 v7 e/ b8 y9 d% x1 {2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ T! x* ~; W, R: O, R
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