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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* U" b8 C0 d' @: e# pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 }1 H- J1 ?+ b; u. E
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 o# F; E" L8 S4 |& n9 r8 B
) T4 N( d8 v, xLet me just rewrite yours:/ w& K3 p0 R" p3 ]0 \' U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( x, b) D S9 k, R3 W$ Q3 N
2 |: R: g' X; M, _+ l2 M4 n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!% ?/ t+ E' N- w2 T; Y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ A. }- c: r; Q! M5 u* u# _: {
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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9 X* P0 p) z$ x1 i) U: F$ ZThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.) [/ b/ _# m6 l7 S6 f9 W
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