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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' }" x! H/ A" p9 N( Y6 ^
! e$ }- u5 m0 v. w; Hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! ?: x! w- {4 Z+ c& S9 n$ U
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 W9 W2 o' W, V- i
" |4 p' D% }& d# s7 TLet me just rewrite yours:
. f8 y' S2 `5 Z1 qIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* i4 l+ u* [/ L) k
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: O5 ^7 t: n6 t3 n2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.8 F, J! O; s$ g- ]5 B* M
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: D- @8 E7 |/ _ ~8 C5 L8 k9 l
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