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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& |% h. Z% m4 V3 V3 t$ q3 c
* k: X" u" A# e" bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # B& r4 d- [+ h. Z% \* V
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 y+ d# G: H8 `' u* L2 I
( M' Q4 j6 G3 T1 g$ SLet me just rewrite yours:
n! s% A i, w. k- d# [It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; D8 c6 v5 E+ x- P/ J
/ i& V& P9 g: b& F$ F1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
' H8 y9 O/ D" U6 H2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ |( t4 V, P' v9 D- K
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: P8 f" t; X5 u" W" b `) S6 X: W U
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." r0 k' e6 T+ _( ?. ] N- ~
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