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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ B, C& q5 ~' h; X) a5 [. {3 `everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 |# d+ I5 R# t
* S# k0 H p: N( y/ A nLet me just rewrite yours:* c3 s: |- I% C6 ^% m1 P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 R2 ]+ u. b: ]! L7 n/ ?
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; T, ?" V7 H2 f/ i0 v& n7 g% K7 z- c2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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0 q% s/ |+ i% JThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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