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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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! |! j8 f- f( _5 Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' t, D; N8 r4 o8 n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , \/ {- l5 u" t6 G
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Let me just rewrite yours:. F1 Y8 {. _5 ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& [* U$ j8 \# [ v1 e- [ s
l8 k3 ]6 T! w" \" C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!% _; T O1 w$ ` g. h' G& {
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) X4 Z$ }' [% k2 c( h, EThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- }- `5 W& g% W# o6 y M0 D8 z
9 g( [. ~4 g8 G# [ w& KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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