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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* e* X; ^8 H7 l+ F9 R7 K5 Dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: x9 i/ F/ K! x8 Q, s* C6 _2 [everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / k; e( z+ |% E* T$ {
4 M# g3 r' }2 ALet me just rewrite yours:3 |4 E9 R" s* ] H) {. ]/ h, |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 R" b( D' N7 D( [/ K M" z `# F
& A& e. V% J, l1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# k1 _, G5 W" ~/ S" s
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 z' M$ F ?8 ]
" c: u5 W2 y5 u( }* @5 M h2 MThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 T/ Y8 D' T Y; `, M* r; I
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