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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* z" u& N6 |. S+ Y) R( a" s
9 e! f( E% x# @/ d. m* L8 V; g8 jit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) Y' U/ B( D: b" u& eeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * G( y1 s$ G6 G6 r
8 a* P+ ^$ x0 S* F4 y9 GLet me just rewrite yours:6 N/ O" C" G0 @2 F9 B. a- V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ {6 @, i% a# g5 l4 ] D E7 V" R, ?
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
7 s% e0 m6 |: `2 B) R- [$ g" j( h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. ~: L+ S$ T0 I6 j8 C3 ?
% \* O: g0 p: X& r7 ]There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., V; m- H3 P0 Y/ {
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