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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% n3 m( S) h) X" Qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 w3 ]3 f$ M( e* `* C0 Z2 Peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 a$ ]$ }4 J3 N }2 e
( @; U. \* q. c dLet me just rewrite yours:
0 G. V" P, Q- W2 M- IIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, P8 q" c, i7 p9 p
6 f ^& j8 q& X! A* T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& y" N4 S4 C& h8 M: g$ m, \2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; l1 x' e# d% q' fThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.' S# Y* c7 R& Y2 Y# x2 T: \) J
W1 v2 g' D: }; O# o1 S+ tGretz. |
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