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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! A1 \/ h4 D2 y m# R' X
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; M( Z8 @& ~) i) ^% I
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + Y8 O' P0 ~+ |8 n w
% [0 M; f3 M/ U9 Y% v& f* r) LLet me just rewrite yours:& P K) K- a* b$ L+ @, e; {
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ p1 k2 t }! d( B
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 m: G% J! P& m: N9 A4 y; i+ J
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.8 {8 y4 y/ @/ |) G4 H* R
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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