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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 W, N2 g5 o+ P; @7 g, J* m+ k/ cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 d- m) b; d6 Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : b" F5 E; E9 d$ U6 T8 G
% ~/ ?2 O$ A- ^$ QLet me just rewrite yours:
x4 e& e: k% d& zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 B. @8 I" d3 X
3 X ~& L9 r8 K( V/ }1 g1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) C& C, t! Z4 N2 b
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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( U( Z. k: H+ |& mThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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