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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% r- Q6 s( M3 k+ x( O) Y( C
- V& K4 M3 Y! c1 \1 c' w% rit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 a h9 @ H) R& ^: A
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! e0 Q! p0 r; O# v/ P' {5 v, z5 a: I' d4 K$ d
Let me just rewrite yours:* ^/ U( n; f5 m% T. o1 ~6 V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 ]% b+ x4 b( Y( ?* q& R7 J
0 k& A/ ]( \8 T5 _1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ b; W8 ?0 r- G0 E0 _, R' h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. {2 |$ O0 G# {$ j& M
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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