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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( o5 I. l$ F* u6 ]5 heveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 G% _9 [( `: ~* w# B# `
6 m2 }. `9 l/ q% T. @Let me just rewrite yours:$ p& I* I% F8 U( V! `7 k
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me& b4 T; t0 G. |9 i* s
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!$ i. l, ^. d- f- m
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: b* A& ?4 a0 }1 F& p7 o! F+ g w
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 ?; T/ K0 S' |( z
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.- t% d4 s1 F: h" T+ u# J9 J, `
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