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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 q& z+ ~- R1 w! ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * F0 [4 {7 f7 Z8 f8 c) x" s
& J0 M% X' C9 G2 Y3 @/ ?5 U+ `2 _8 lLet me just rewrite yours:2 x# ]3 `. k% |, R
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" r4 G- ~4 Y7 r. S6 c6 H
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 l6 M% b# Q! h8 g2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, p- [" e ^0 e1 FThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. }" A# `8 f5 N9 l7 Z
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