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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 c. @( q) A: x
" [4 i0 Z3 n! A1 _it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
' ?; M$ F8 B7 D& u4 Aeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % O* @/ _ B! }5 V/ d' ]
. n0 J, K( K& L0 D3 \# O7 L4 @Let me just rewrite yours:1 I0 U7 J" Y. P X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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% @6 d5 d& a+ o) J; _$ v4 h8 a# Z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" s: C8 D4 c$ t! @+ Q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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) D4 f1 q( ?* e* H. m% z0 rThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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