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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. J# g" n. y( d+ W, d# h
+ y( ]8 U# F, Y J/ fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' p: @# [3 f2 ^ ^1 K4 {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - b9 C& g0 N0 T, |; i
' M5 K9 B' X) b: V% Q) l7 @Let me just rewrite yours:! h; M5 Q0 w! r% ^ y! ~
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 Y% J4 p1 K g
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) V3 u: r- J( m2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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/ C w( l4 `6 A$ n% P: r, h, E/ `There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( b' g5 e$ G8 H/ w
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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