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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) J6 G7 y p7 W- w0 ]" B
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' I6 C6 D0 f4 g) e5 z& P( `/ N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + W/ p/ y$ C( K$ k7 ]( e
5 `3 E9 t9 U7 @6 F0 P9 yLet me just rewrite yours:
4 y% u0 G5 m3 c b2 X' J! i; zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( T; j, U% y3 S1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 t: P( A; X; t" b1 U& q
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., }6 t% R! o0 R2 ~0 G% \' a. s. M8 k
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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