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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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$ G0 T! x- W+ ]+ K1 S ?it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and E1 F. F3 O& N' n- M+ }
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : Z' M# T$ A7 V& v5 s& H% S
R% }. N) K$ _) g9 W: uLet me just rewrite yours:% Q+ Q% y! r. r) v* {7 L' u
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 \, o3 p2 g* r. A! [+ w4 D& Q
^4 R( I$ p; A; k1 O8 P7 t; o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 ]' F; v, _" R0 I# [% i/ [
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: T5 z% `; \4 L& ?) [) U8 u2 _
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 C/ X0 v4 x- t
3 H9 c9 D- B F! W: ^7 bThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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