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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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( V, y1 Z( z% j+ c* a- Eit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 Q$ Q6 k. I qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % t; k2 j. O0 f9 J
W @" k* d3 u; d2 qLet me just rewrite yours:; q9 L1 u- N. ]/ u" ?0 w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, S* ^9 `. M7 }! f3 h% h# j
9 u: W* G, M6 F- h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 H8 Q8 i1 v7 B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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& k% @0 w& g: A3 T y& kThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- e: t0 n- u6 U$ r+ }
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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