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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 F# m0 `' e3 {1 p9 a: c3 g
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ T Y, @$ }$ ^everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 V! j& |8 _' y: V4 f% Y4 P1 X q$ j% h6 j' ^
Let me just rewrite yours:
) s8 @- |# b* D- oIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ {3 n! E/ a0 R4 o9 k
- \$ r' J w# m+ g2 A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" x' j- m8 |6 h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& B( ?* Q9 D5 f6 u% H
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