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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ U% e2 t# ]" B) s4 Q
# k; a t) X' q% e- }4 Zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; S. l: T1 i2 E2 Beveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 8 P$ c& ~% m8 w5 K7 g2 A5 V
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Let me just rewrite yours:, Y2 G1 U8 |2 C. M
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 o X4 u0 o. R/ L$ }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% E$ _9 S2 j: q, m$ u. M3 t2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., r! J' s, B! e& C
( L& g8 V- r# LThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( O i# P- B. t+ |( h/ L$ E
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