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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 v$ K7 G! m, C4 X& D, R2 ?* i
8 Q- d; }8 U0 f: k" t, ^1 w" Cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 W0 ^5 R& g* R0 ~7 h8 Z; d1 _
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ F$ d1 r8 r( x! ~' _
* ^; N/ [1 n# I8 \' h* OLet me just rewrite yours:
: R7 \" W! s( {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 \* }7 `) p! L* d1 z' X7 `
! } z3 G$ v$ H5 E6 T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) `, ?4 n$ x- l8 l6 u z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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" I! N8 v& z2 d0 }2 o& l& ZThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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