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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 `8 y$ ~6 Q0 x. L+ s0 [. u( Bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; d# [# g) l1 j& @- L; L8 L8 x, e! J/ M: [
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 m( J( y6 ~( _+ w* }
5 Y% S+ [! f/ Z, P3 c$ z& m. T: K' aLet me just rewrite yours:, G& C7 j3 P) G5 q7 b" v$ J
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: J8 F8 ~" A1 p; U# q, q8 v: p& t
. H, c+ Z$ M2 U# q6 P1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% V, g' x4 L5 C# X' t s6 A% _' d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ R9 c Y. V s% Z/ x/ b
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 W. r1 G# H7 w9 E# i" Y
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