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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 d* T7 N% c c( Z) g
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + k9 x4 J) v# U4 c
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * _* W0 Y' r q- Q# q7 Q9 H
1 \5 J) f/ g3 c) rLet me just rewrite yours:
! j {$ g! C( P' @9 y' {It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" i _; X/ }' W
7 p4 I! @" ?% L1 \5 ?. \( c( u& N i4 z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
]$ G' ]. I" O6 }2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.4 v5 Z7 l) h. O6 ~' S' z! j) j6 |) w
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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i/ o g6 h( x% G# H( u, hThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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