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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* [/ d( U; G3 x0 [ K, B( vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 P* r* ]9 i x$ u! L4 J
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ y0 G [4 ?8 A7 [
8 Y8 `/ t0 ]+ s+ D, |Let me just rewrite yours:) m4 F5 f* O1 t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 q6 ]* ~8 ?9 R1 f/ w$ O
! q) C7 V- w1 b+ e- a% ~5 T1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 W3 h# N1 l6 Y( s C4 J1 a
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 g8 @" B) |) i/ C
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ I1 _6 f& a0 F; }7 h
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