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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% _7 n' _1 D/ `. i# uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and , D* \' m( Q0 s8 K
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( l" X- [* r! T. b1 s9 ]* v9 q
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Let me just rewrite yours:. `# K9 m+ w* o. M* X5 g2 y$ l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 C' G2 M) k/ B, u) R
4 ]% d2 t$ L( j7 V, g7 j1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 h( h, }9 C% W
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; e! G3 Y6 m/ ?0 {There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ D2 K2 u2 l2 I( g
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