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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 W) r4 \% H- K2 e
, D4 h+ h1 u+ p4 Y( git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" v1 l! @- q* {6 B4 ?everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + B V ^% E1 l7 }' t4 N5 b% J) i
) Q$ y( G9 n$ q4 s5 RLet me just rewrite yours:/ N1 V& z) p0 C% x5 P7 V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 s" G2 { `( |" G" d3 \
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& R- x8 D; n* B' ~" M3 e) A0 X' U( x2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ K% D3 j, H+ t3 R
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 x6 H! j9 J$ R! s, \
+ W6 C7 W' c( c oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ \$ ?$ T7 t+ A% S$ y) o/ u
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