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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ o, P! y* q- ^1 e: N/ F+ e$ M
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 w) h1 _9 S# e% |- K" e1 Q4 Q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % S& g! U. o/ s$ T% l# }( O
8 h8 v$ e9 [9 e$ d& q. bLet me just rewrite yours:- w7 F( g) r. ?4 b, ]5 A) S
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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& e3 E7 l0 X y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! W1 Z3 ?$ |& q3 n; [" x8 G" @
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." R; _3 R4 V; A& q9 I
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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3 V0 E: a( o6 e+ r0 \) vThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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