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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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, _+ O( G# ]: R; Wit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
h' O, @5 ^4 J2 m7 @1 X: `4 k4 Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 L# I# a0 W+ ]% p5 D ?9 H. I* ^/ n# I8 b# L" u8 P
Let me just rewrite yours:0 T$ [7 Y( t) G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) l9 _+ P' F/ |% T
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* Q, q* X2 p# g+ j9 ^# H1 Z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow." d$ C/ G5 D) }) S
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: s( M4 S6 |0 S; a% v- f
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