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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 Y2 q+ v$ n F* z) a1 B) _
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& O* l" y, h4 X% G% K2 keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % N* H3 k$ b! u$ ]
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Let me just rewrite yours:" U, X6 d9 j7 R5 a. X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ ?, k- Q" ?- \4 w0 u- K
! j# o$ i2 U: f% B+ m' T: b1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 g) c) @6 E l n% R) a. _ h" P
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. T; B% w/ i0 m G6 f, ?# J) A
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 M7 E9 b& ~1 y& E
9 `+ z4 @+ G$ x! t1 ?. s# t v0 c/ l, x; zThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 ~8 \0 }9 Z3 b* U0 C
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