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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
& E2 J" Z3 ~- Z& u9 h4 ^( {/ a X$ ?everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. M0 G3 t0 U# D4 U
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Let me just rewrite yours:3 i% T! o: {8 `+ t1 V; }+ N( L! n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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/ |: D5 d1 G$ ^! U6 c" b! y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 p4 j8 h2 r3 b6 L2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 `6 R' M/ x- p; g! r3 W K7 {
" `! G$ b& Y3 Y8 V% cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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