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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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R3 l% f) v: W5 _) U; r7 ?it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + O: D* W3 ?4 a5 o% {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 _+ G/ C) Y* t$ h1 i& c2 l& ^4 K6 X& s5 _* l, l
Let me just rewrite yours:0 n7 j, `8 q; Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 Y1 N5 b' R# q
- ?, b8 ~ Y: ?6 @5 T1 X0 w1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ Y' Q7 J! f5 o( Q; r( ~ x9 ]5 w) ]2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." t. Y, w6 B" e- b7 Q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ \) A" |% l' f9 p- n$ d
) d E ~5 L" G$ r" zThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.4 U; m- F5 Q7 h
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