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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ R2 R. D- s0 Y# y. b( D& ~
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 [' _+ e4 v% d2 ]; ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 h% H; Z" O# h ~, M+ o! x1 P( f; p* P$ m- N
Let me just rewrite yours:) v, [) @- {7 \9 \4 ^
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me' r3 d0 h" f' ]( P8 t) ]
6 q/ ?5 a+ k2 _3 f& ^- L5 I1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 z4 g+ ~6 O) }9 z- J+ v
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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$ w& i! v% \: ]. [: A. lThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ C1 F) B1 A) d. C
; Q3 ]& z2 H" }0 Q' PThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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