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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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; g# [2 h# ], Q3 {9 c3 o" Qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 \/ P1 t! Q$ `, S% |' A teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 o* X& O- v. w' I& o: J$ Q/ Z8 w% ~+ j
Let me just rewrite yours:4 x: a7 }" ?2 {" z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
, R/ R$ O$ i- ]0 ^( S: v' m. ] K2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& N q' l6 a, j
6 `) E! F2 m+ m/ c$ u0 BThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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