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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. {" ~5 I, f% g) s4 B
. L# |8 v8 q8 Z! Bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 [6 }3 M6 a7 X0 t$ D/ }( P. o# Ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 p! y `+ c# c9 h& v) C/ {& v
$ H; |; B# X6 n3 |5 WLet me just rewrite yours:
8 m! r4 j2 Y/ h, kIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 B, X9 P- E; B! k
; a% w* C7 r7 [, z1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ E2 b3 ?+ h/ F% m( d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( J W. o) z& b: s6 D; v4 y' @
/ m0 T; c0 h: uThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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$ G- q; m" K9 EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: M" f. L+ k) t1 L
' v4 R( \& e5 E# g" Y/ u3 l9 r1 CGretz. |
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