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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 q; N3 z$ N, Y$ [2 y* f. y$ C/ git doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / T2 |: W; [$ s: }- L
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . I* F# u- ^' d- i. y
q* ?5 z2 F8 F1 b7 L$ C; BLet me just rewrite yours:
3 i6 K- r o! E- u/ _7 t9 @: hIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 y' G. q3 t0 v& q( X: H x
" u' a) \2 K K4 l1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ C: r0 ^3 e* Q6 V; p6 j7 b2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% K/ i: Q; f; P$ P& H1 j
9 J1 H4 I& ~1 C) L I1 ]5 cThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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