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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 Z9 h" G+ Z4 Y, ^3 B: pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
% B& W! E6 x& N6 P( ^everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) S$ s; ^) V) K5 X
3 j# d" s, V! a% {7 YLet me just rewrite yours:
2 k. }4 c! T1 O2 }0 u9 ^It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me f6 g m) Y0 [; e2 n
2 b0 C& |9 e" I9 L+ t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 R2 _0 R S: w0 T% H; n0 ~
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: {* D& N$ w" z, a, k5 V% D
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 d6 Y% V' D( C
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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