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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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% N5 u! _6 E/ kit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" b3 ~8 N' x; w9 [) ?" l. M% Teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 G6 A F( m- j) N' `2 W$ W: h* J: a6 ~6 ^ i% w9 C
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It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( G8 O* P% w" Y5 p7 A6 [1 C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
0 u4 N+ I- ^/ X2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) S) w5 _1 V, i( v0 |
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 Y) |* K. D: f4 U, e, c w8 B
# N3 l- |+ N4 q1 T! b+ C( uThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 }- J/ M0 J' V! e
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