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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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2 [/ s2 B- \1 s% m8 k7 p) m' Nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" h0 J4 P1 D: z s9 v: Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. " p0 |# }, p' U# b+ c3 }
/ m% p1 n& I4 w0 mLet me just rewrite yours:4 ^8 V0 l' s9 Q' Z, Q
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; C5 ]' S' f; [5 I4 n+ A! a% h% b6 K1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( M1 @8 A) D8 C) s2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.; M9 y9 i- [. ?( k9 ]# C
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; j) x/ C0 ^1 _5 f+ P# mThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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