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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 [' R* v( ^4 J% i
" r, n% }2 |# u) _* ^+ {# `it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
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Let me just rewrite yours:
, ?4 q- g0 ~" G. Y c# wIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; b6 @- n& [% T+ C& e
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!; f) h& G4 {8 s7 K8 K$ t
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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+ r, c3 {/ y t$ \' X5 z4 lThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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