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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ r l1 e! D0 x! f8 W! H- b
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! }; W, T8 K7 v8 J: ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 ?0 N+ ?) u! L% T7 w( t
& I: ~( F0 U* n- }/ iLet me just rewrite yours:+ P; ^9 c* S$ S7 z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" F) F9 a. J( i) @
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 ^! ?$ y4 ~0 b) d6 [, O" _5 {5 h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- s3 _" X' v3 g# O# x4 z
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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0 \ F0 D$ l6 S0 @6 h9 b. tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 Y/ O# R: O# |3 e+ U- n
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