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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:& y& o! z: c6 e3 ]+ T: V- ]
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( L+ h4 I: D, b) d: A7 Q; I5 P; Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) O5 R! ]* v2 T7 a1 ?3 j0 s! K |3 {7 U' o" ^
Let me just rewrite yours:
9 T* H1 E2 N# f2 [" m) HIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- m+ n) v/ J! M$ g" c
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! h( A3 ^6 @: x- C
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 e8 W; q. f/ J( j5 o! F" y# o; u2 C
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 N* m4 i* o T) Y
5 D2 y1 x" D `/ e0 ^; qThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% j* X+ B" j# `7 O1 i i
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