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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:) m, W: T0 k( I: F, E' X% r1 i
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
2 E M4 @8 i/ \, F( r& r6 d2 {everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , \4 T% }* ~9 G9 u
; I9 l6 u7 H4 E: o& W ]- aLet me just rewrite yours:) p4 H$ v v5 \, Z4 s' z! r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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7 x- G1 _. W$ a' ]: q% z9 F$ r; k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& A: N0 n; O+ O
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' {5 W0 Z% Q- O1 {1 Z* c
( O% J7 k1 i) B* a) @: [/ c" pThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.7 s6 D5 w) z; E- }9 `$ A/ J! b
- X/ [/ _ i/ s, ^Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 R7 b. d2 o# K( S
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