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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - p! c2 g- e$ g) K; A( ^# e! i
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - E4 B% V: Q, z3 f% g2 f! b. s
q/ X" u, e) h+ a& V' ?) l& ^2 @Let me just rewrite yours:! f0 [9 d9 M& K1 N8 M1 ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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3 u$ Y% ]# x. R9 j" n1 p P. s0 V) R* L1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& W, p0 }( s, @4 h2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* f8 Z* N6 [; {/ [, b8 \& b9 N
% L9 y" g' ^8 l! XThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 b7 c+ U" N& a$ _" _) @6 m
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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