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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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4 N, p$ _- C/ X% g- v% j7 hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 k/ c6 F# V& [# J- T
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! i1 ?7 D/ ~5 b3 [8 l9 f3 I
8 p- A Y3 V7 k5 `- ]Let me just rewrite yours:3 T+ a5 l( O3 `. H5 b( D! e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% G% j9 z( o7 r0 z% h
, D R' N8 |: J6 ~4 G1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 O* z' W6 ^: R0 A$ W) r" v/ K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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