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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and $ W0 t$ f; s9 K4 B: b: Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 {" w* p8 |3 v7 h4 B+ Q9 T. Y3 h3 Y! O4 k+ r
Let me just rewrite yours:
& e, X9 z. t; c+ ~It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) @; T! h. ~+ l3 b% \9 X
3 o [2 l p6 `+ d! \* F" d( @3 B. l9 |4 o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 r* N3 i( [. J3 @9 H2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. o( \ k3 R2 e1 N
6 ?7 B! l4 N6 SThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.( C( _% c* O, e6 Z* D8 o2 L7 i
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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