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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:7 q8 [" B$ F! d; f% M
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) s4 p, a6 L1 T, z& g1 ?
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. r$ l: P/ s4 {+ u6 r1 @
, d) U, i% N) E% `& BLet me just rewrite yours:9 Y* R3 @* p6 C' p$ |5 [) O
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! R( `. u7 l) e. z$ }5 K) u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la. b( j8 Z$ _9 J" ~" {2 {
3 Q& _# l6 C6 v1 B% j+ yThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ f; u7 v& [% V9 ~& F; B
* M2 z6 ]1 h* ~, F( ~Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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