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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; g* \3 q# H+ N3 U8 I% F
+ y. h- O4 L: }+ ]$ z5 nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ! g U. w9 q! H1 ~
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 s" z9 a h$ ~* G4 K7 ^$ c3 b
# L* t6 _" a7 vLet me just rewrite yours:; K1 R+ S \+ N# d2 L% m$ n4 |+ f8 Z( v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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& R& P: [ ?: a, k3 i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 F. g. _- g9 h" W' H5 _% i
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. ]( U9 f. p. w2 ?6 b2 n
7 ^: e8 \7 N. o* V8 h+ n0 pThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ M; {# I4 W" ~+ Y' D7 u
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