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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 J: x5 h& |6 e( L8 }it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# u) |8 _& ?# c( R4 P9 i, meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * M. U; n# _' Y$ h' I+ N
) ~' \( h5 p" q" z0 c5 ELet me just rewrite yours:2 L* Y/ |: c+ L( A5 _
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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, m+ F& } W) a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 _/ m v& `, t2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: K- x7 r) V) W8 I: @. k
2 g/ P7 q2 a7 {7 l0 IThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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; M9 x# r2 p( V# \; U) o7 r( CThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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