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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 _1 B% G6 Y0 h5 m7 M$ P1 Oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % u; V0 V2 h" {/ Z) @* h8 a' @2 ]
* n/ {, M) @6 l1 |Let me just rewrite yours:
# ~) c, S3 w# N1 d2 X) U# KIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me0 I* L% y+ s. `: K& p7 r6 }3 S
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 M0 a. p& P3 a9 [1 D
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. V# E5 k$ G- ^ }" j( a
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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