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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ y) q9 ^$ Y# m$ j* A! ^1 u6 A
& d- |. _, M7 \" j6 z9 Dit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 A" q6 V% @" c6 c: w, z) t( o/ |everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 7 c' H8 R) x- f6 |: m m
) f) L1 m( d3 L- JLet me just rewrite yours:2 q* s+ ?; m+ I( x; b* W6 ?
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me4 ?9 U# O5 s7 D" s8 k
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 \1 y2 ?- u; A9 ?: V/ W+ D$ U5 E$ c
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." {" B. G% } p
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 N& A$ L! R' B' \
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* F5 f. R7 q$ j" i0 w# [& d
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