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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:2 d _4 v" }7 ?0 S$ ~
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * B e' |2 X0 M0 g4 `5 L* A
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / l9 X& {2 z% R0 h' O$ y! U6 x, N
$ f2 E* m1 F$ Y0 a3 CLet me just rewrite yours:
. @ ^9 o% `, C9 E" mIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me) S- o9 B, Q( C4 x" f
* c- S2 R7 M$ }0 j6 H. f. g+ S1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!# j3 I" J. }3 n" [" k9 H6 O) R
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., l% P& _6 h/ _0 L# V, A
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ O, \7 p4 E$ ~; {
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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