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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
+ C7 }( X4 v/ n$ f9 k1 o r |everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. l, z2 H6 `& Q- A2 f: P
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Let me just rewrite yours:1 @: R" G& D M9 V( u$ t7 `; L/ p3 e
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 [4 G; ?, h+ h/ ~1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& @& @4 E% l; Y. p9 ]( I. a2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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+ T# A' H2 g; ^There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# I4 J, F4 c5 `
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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