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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 o# C ]& I; g$ ~) u
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 I5 |+ ?5 a9 J" F& Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * Q1 k) B0 K3 v1 ?+ u
0 F& X- ^! {* R# ~9 U- s+ uLet me just rewrite yours:. l1 V# m* J. `" Q+ F
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me1 R$ x% K4 w V7 ~% G |
: \7 _7 N3 N. i' S V$ H! t7 U/ \1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 k; l2 F% l: X, U% S8 X+ H. B
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ L' s; U/ L: Q7 Z8 B, Y
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 ?. ]5 N$ r, x0 ~/ k$ |/ c
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