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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM: _7 `+ ?! d2 h# O, ]# z* U8 A5 G* \) `
. a) }0 [+ F' yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 h9 b6 }# F( x* R6 V
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 6 G0 g& M) y! S5 Z
. T) S8 L& A. } q k1 hLet me just rewrite yours:' x0 s: L! a& S" @ w, l2 L
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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: e: R: p5 T+ _' u5 V' J1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!- N3 K, p& V f" d& S# ?& u
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& t3 ?) ]6 j# r3 h8 H
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.- X) J8 L4 s. |1 K
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it." E9 \7 ~& S9 v: Z4 }8 p0 S+ b/ U
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