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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # `/ Q y* f( f$ p p
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - d( @* f0 h% y! J; n
( }. ?$ n+ A7 y+ kLet me just rewrite yours:, p( z( D0 q( \; q, c0 Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% z+ i, Q, U1 p: A$ @
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! Q. M# e0 L: C. U" ]' w2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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" ~- w e w% j4 F6 k' ]' H) FThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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- n8 N8 j, @# O. f Z3 kThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( w+ p3 d+ n: ]" }* F; `$ }! F
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