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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% S* |* n9 F7 r. n, I
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 c) v& w! h6 K. |everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( _- V0 V+ i$ u9 B, I1 Y# u% ^, F; w9 x6 v. H8 ?
Let me just rewrite yours:8 j3 F$ H" e' | |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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9 |" t) c. m0 I/ \$ T& d1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 W6 L- J" W& n- a
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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