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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- G7 n: S5 c6 L6 N/ c
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and " Q6 Z+ I& Y z7 a. |
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) @* \& N* j) H; ?
+ u0 v5 X6 m1 d O- j7 j$ zLet me just rewrite yours:) w" e1 Z* B# F4 p3 P6 Q7 y4 A6 z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) ~6 y0 {8 d' [/ l, a5 o, I2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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+ O. f: R4 ^/ p/ ~8 o2 |* C& TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 R( F4 T: f; O; o7 ?1 w
! S) k% c; X) n( L! GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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