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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 v+ k! _: _; C0 b; P& G8 B5 K7 ~& n
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and @& Z$ q" p/ l3 P0 Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 n; j5 f& E, G- o+ r r
+ U: l; ~& B; ?& E2 BLet me just rewrite yours:% D6 B C' w; ^$ x% l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 A8 F7 M- C, M/ t! M( g+ ]4 c7 v1 X
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 T+ e% m; t: C v$ j; {. d) X
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% L, B& \2 }2 S1 u6 Y( y1 P
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., a" ~# M, j& H( `, K* l" o
+ g7 x0 Y( M# ?# f1 l3 sThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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