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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* E2 V& N8 I% `, y% A. {- i$ {it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
" h; c/ y& T# F8 E3 D" ieveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. - i" L8 P, b( k$ b% |- x9 J
; ^/ j- o( q, @# F' Y* h$ T6 k$ VLet me just rewrite yours:
$ T- b, B4 O7 p8 s' K- |; XIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me% a v( ^# V5 G; u" r' ?' u
% Q1 m% l9 m! G d0 r1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" y( ]2 B7 g5 ]6 h
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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4 c3 t8 \* N8 P. i# k$ O# q, oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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