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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, C4 x/ H+ ^8 K: s7 J* X4 _, M
: x' E% R6 s3 _! W1 I4 ]+ x5 Z3 |' v+ lit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ m5 [$ D: k5 N. N! C6 deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! _2 C& H7 {7 c$ W1 H+ P
: K) R+ P( r7 G% f8 ~ jLet me just rewrite yours:% ]: k! D7 [$ U. D2 [
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ u( |8 z" z3 y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! H0 v* O8 @) R e$ p
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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