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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:+ z/ S# L# k* _& I; }
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
' t; R: q8 a3 @; g P$ w2 x( ueveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ g) }! ?! f3 b( @3 ?! x
( m& y9 e0 q I. g& o. r. uLet me just rewrite yours:. ~! B9 Z6 {# R# P0 V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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4 l. ]* @# P4 V! g, ?1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( L9 w8 w3 u3 Y2 j+ |4 K
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 k1 y9 D0 e5 l1 ~7 U. o5 @9 D$ J
$ G$ k! D2 X& C7 TThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. b) a$ Y) {. S0 B4 k/ r
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