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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ U# L" O+ R# R: d
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 j2 a: @# h/ Y% T* {) v1 Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; K) |+ R m8 B3 h
. `% _" H" e: L- E1 T7 \Let me just rewrite yours:! F9 b/ L$ I1 X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ X3 C# ?6 Q$ I
0 E' K+ P+ V2 {& |1 z2 P9 i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 W3 M1 V' t, ?% @6 [9 X) Q1 B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 F w& l5 Q, C
4 A7 Z2 x3 J0 w/ ^8 `" MThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# V( n9 _1 Y. d/ b
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 j' K# p5 B; R# _' n# e
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