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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:$ S& P0 p: q0 M: l# i' k( g
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and # X( O. X+ G0 i/ Z/ H
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & A3 ]3 }! c) q% {7 H4 u9 {1 T# [( Y4 K+ L/ i
Let me just rewrite yours:2 ?& ^, L: \8 D
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 n% x d) q3 C/ }1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
" y- X( D1 F" a V( k9 H% B2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la., D& {+ c- ?" X5 O" ^; g& z
- }' @* v! G' FThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 b5 n) h; `* M' Q2 r/ X& C) y
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