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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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$ j% j2 z7 |4 K/ k; Pit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( d+ h3 y' w1 ~/ h+ @1 [6 n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 I) y, M" q7 E, e# d' @0 Q
' r- D) P. s a! pLet me just rewrite yours:9 J+ ^1 i3 q' I0 T$ q% X% u9 ]9 k
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 |) O& t# S% {7 m9 n
. F1 B8 l0 Y4 w8 h! J% w; r' l M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 C3 \2 j: B! U) I j* i8 H
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 V' C4 \( I% _8 V) b
3 B& d* R% ~/ F* A/ tThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 }0 c# i1 M* n% V1 T( B
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