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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:1 |# w; Q/ N2 H* M; i! L1 _; U
- ~3 S$ T# A' Iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and / J/ ? g' `( E m' k I8 F
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 t% P( q- l) [. Z! }, D# o" u
6 }/ L8 W+ B7 u$ k2 \Let me just rewrite yours:
9 \) V+ ~1 s0 C! z# V) x% TIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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; a; S( Y O6 b4 L* N- Q5 Z( M( C1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) Y# ]$ A+ @6 N8 W* s2 _2 L+ R
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. }/ w2 } N* @0 p! t" u2 q
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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+ S: ^4 v. T+ T! s2 SThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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