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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ Y% L* ^$ Y0 V
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( A/ n' Q8 ]/ A
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 w6 k, Z t- `
7 L" A2 u2 Z: i! s5 }. w% B6 yLet me just rewrite yours:2 ^ w3 ?+ z Y2 _$ L# H
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 c6 Y* A6 C X: e' K" a' A
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( c! y* c) y/ R; G
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 q: V0 l, L A2 h& ~4 y
* N3 G4 P8 I$ o0 Z4 a# U3 LThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.* I" m3 M- {9 J4 C* A0 j$ I" e
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