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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: Z+ l# V$ E3 G9 _9 v
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 F c+ f& x+ G/ U7 _2 O* f
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 j, O1 T( A: {$ `* V
; y. N1 [- S, R1 ?) Q8 ?/ X# p6 ?3 vLet me just rewrite yours:
) p" E9 y2 f) lIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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5 f$ ]" D( F5 c! s$ ^$ |+ H, b( f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ j1 x1 h7 h# f0 R. k; b1 l2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.$ l; L7 Z- z, |4 `! {" h
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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, {( E; m `& ~* S% `( GThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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