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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; P6 B6 `, Q5 [8 U
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
- {6 ]+ C0 m- i$ ^2 `0 Neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 x3 g8 Y0 Q; Y, T9 S) P0 q
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Let me just rewrite yours:: d2 G( K* \( x, { B8 G# ?+ c3 g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( W+ c' E( [9 I2 u3 O* U; v6 ~
7 [0 X& F7 z5 F( {1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!( K: k/ O I0 O3 D: I
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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