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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 \- |2 n4 s* Z. h
: H; E z( R R, H8 H+ b/ Qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and : ^, \: E" {, B6 P7 t
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! Q J, i$ U& ~) `( S: K9 d( N- @
+ z2 G7 b, H) y0 X1 N% VLet me just rewrite yours:6 i( Q1 f4 I9 a8 S/ ]' s! n
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( F6 G& D, V! u
5 L, ~! S0 w N1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 t& A0 r1 s v j! s
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& e) c! D9 x/ m* I0 N
* f0 \( x" ? a) {# v# pThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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8 j- t! b: n* S& [Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 L2 }; U- ^! ?2 b. J
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