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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and - R0 l3 R2 |3 m3 Q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 X0 L N7 I( @" M% ^2 J( ?. v5 K4 t: i. A
Let me just rewrite yours:8 p2 l G$ c# d7 L; V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me ~) {: r# s8 c
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 N9 s) o( M s; f- c
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." N1 V( @$ J" c/ W4 y4 P6 S
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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