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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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W, t5 c' c+ w$ ^it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
0 T; l Q- ?: x- H+ D# Keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) x" h: `( K: r- T8 i
1 B7 [6 _% W, @ T0 NLet me just rewrite yours:
7 L% I' q" S. x, ]0 ^) { F, iIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me- `( t: ` C- X0 F8 l6 t
9 ~ q; \8 L- W% g0 I1 W# p1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 ^8 O* X7 B' i. O/ d2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) v3 C# q$ {$ ^2 u5 r6 r4 X/ ?
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow. K5 d" z a% X& U8 A. ~: M
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; h) g/ @) V0 ~! a
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