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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
7 j7 W8 G1 Y) X$ R+ b+ \everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 x4 e0 x0 i8 P! `" \% z1 y) i( H
! S: y: N/ n7 bLet me just rewrite yours:, y7 M7 m2 ~/ `% N- m" {9 k& r4 X" T
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
/ X- {* K8 |1 e: q2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: l% Q- @2 C, M! d' C
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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1 F) f, P C7 }; V- j# KThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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