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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 Z+ w+ e e' s8 k) V0 n6 ^0 Neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' l8 Y9 e* P# `5 ~( l
) j$ M* x6 | m' @( P: oLet me just rewrite yours:; c9 t R6 Y x1 l0 \; k1 \
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me+ ^( a: m1 a9 j
: O0 V0 P1 A! U8 b% D1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! l' y# O) i% \3 c% i' I# t6 r
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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; O. l- ?" D* e( |. z) W. y1 L4 e2 |There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.) ] V: a5 O$ I0 z/ @/ `1 h# [2 U+ k
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# @; N; ]( o9 R# z
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