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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 _5 D1 j# C8 C j/ o& l& Y# p! L
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 V/ ^4 g* t$ @$ y# }' N" T
( o9 y" _5 e. Z8 z+ ELet me just rewrite yours:' ~0 k* [# M% t# S* y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!9 ]$ l: T- V l
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.7 l# V2 g1 u9 _; Z+ e, j
& T' O8 F! E7 ~1 q: vThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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9 ^# F5 A1 O6 \2 JThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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