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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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7 c" v+ ?+ g0 W6 U1 ait doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 D. R" R+ r3 Y4 Q. B1 e. i: L# l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 L Z/ q4 O; b! L3 V
& H& C. D3 _9 U: ^9 c' q& ULet me just rewrite yours:+ p* Y& o5 ]4 E/ u, e/ v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. t; T0 R# ^+ s+ X: z/ ]" F3 y0 ?
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) }' a7 Q. h, P2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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$ h2 R$ F5 O- M% qThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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/ t+ ^8 @1 }5 B9 B) r/ a9 u1 YThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 M0 l2 a! O, H+ A0 L
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