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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, r% q7 [; G K( j
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and + D2 p1 Z7 ^3 i% [8 c+ {! F
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( a2 X% Q7 t- @- Z6 a$ ~$ h% ^" a5 }0 d
Let me just rewrite yours:) E3 H; w* F% _/ O, g8 q, ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me9 Y! N% |9 p3 P3 |
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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