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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:9 m# C6 w0 t2 w/ s& Q, s
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; I6 b5 L: v* {
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 a0 o5 C4 @/ \' S- `5 r9 Y
7 h' V# S( d6 [3 y/ qLet me just rewrite yours:
7 Y4 L. b& l4 YIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me/ m! Q6 `! N; ?" o. f1 Y# M- e
6 x6 E- ]4 \. j% s9 U+ @& Y9 y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& k B* s6 D |7 R8 x; ]( Y5 M, w
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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' t! U0 A7 ^- oThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: R* Z: t. N/ q
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it./ c. z, P' W+ m+ q" k/ J
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