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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( P8 z9 y, p, U+ ?0 ]
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. / i- n( F: O# d* T9 _) D$ G
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Let me just rewrite yours:' x/ W; i! g) J$ w0 K6 v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 w8 K* V( n8 v& q+ e8 t$ Z
5 M" ^! c. ]5 ]! y1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) R4 Z- n, P( d& s7 [! w9 _! x7 I
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# a1 J6 ~& g6 G; ~( A( u3 PThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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