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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 3 r, b. a, F( ^& O7 z1 k$ u: z5 n1 o
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 L+ E1 _2 @7 o* s2 I) W
$ I& d. M* _& wLet me just rewrite yours:) X2 |/ ~' q& @- l* F
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* n! u9 R+ B- {+ ~1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!1 |' [% F2 ^3 x* o
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* N; _( ]* U" A1 a8 \5 u
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; K" _: t. Q7 @
; \9 L, U, x- j G q1 ?Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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