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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! N0 m: ^0 R$ B8 r `
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
6 ~ `% ^, ^4 r R( x6 L0 f2 m5 Yeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. * n+ h7 H8 F- b+ C- e; V& a# B6 Z
- A1 P( v* S& s, B9 ~Let me just rewrite yours:
& p7 ]' E+ q4 E- rIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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+ K& `& W+ {. k9 ~! @- ~. B' M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!% u. _3 V- f6 Y R2 d" a
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 m w' H0 M" R; V+ G; Q
& k* A; ^8 ^; e$ G0 EThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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# R, A/ }7 G. J3 n, IThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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