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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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- B O, \6 c7 Qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) A& |% n/ x9 w6 m) j
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 z3 s( E8 s1 t1 ~% ^! I2 A
) s$ c( H% y2 h1 K0 I4 N& KLet me just rewrite yours:' Q: |! I5 @5 n3 u4 R. }0 W
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
& W* f1 s+ m9 s" j4 S! j9 A$ ?2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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, m& S7 [6 P. r" T5 A: u. W' O& V; TThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: p/ ^2 X: l0 o
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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