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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ P( O9 `5 ]6 A4 Z7 U: q- g1 r+ r
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 t" `* s: R/ P7 O; }6 E+ t' U
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 |+ `3 O7 `, l$ | [6 d0 g7 U7 g# G& d% A
Let me just rewrite yours:3 b, `5 P% V ~- @& W- l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me2 \. T2 I; ~# X% [
! w) U: ^% ?0 `1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 U! \: W H/ {+ w5 ]9 h, E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* S0 A( O7 D2 w+ j6 `* w* i4 m# T
5 d' X6 n1 F5 |Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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Gretz. |
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