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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% z. D# X" `( a% D7 o! a4 ?
$ f1 W& U& z9 ]7 \8 S, r ^, g7 C( Vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ t1 M$ R7 `: v) teveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 N! E4 q8 Q2 V( k0 H) w
( M5 O; C. G& ~/ ~- v" Q* PLet me just rewrite yours:3 J: K- K0 K, g" v4 V( I9 G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" M6 q9 W2 A6 E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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7 Y, E0 p; A# z0 x7 AThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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( ?0 M$ A' v5 `5 q4 G3 c& iThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.$ C4 S5 z6 s8 t. i1 L9 V
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