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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:- G& n4 Y. L+ H$ u* W* K
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 B! K/ _9 N5 l# a% Zeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 c' A' u4 I: I
1 w3 {9 `, j& X e" J8 \, E# ?Let me just rewrite yours:, i+ q; c8 e0 _, a# V
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* B. g7 ]( }8 n+ z/ f2 p
1 g. {; Y, t% C) c7 s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!, t! J, V: p% v- n: O" O- m
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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) |: F8 u6 U3 UThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: g }. \8 z! ~; s# V& _0 c' C m
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