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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* P# T3 r Q d: ?+ Z$ a6 {4 r
3 l+ Q1 E7 I+ k7 N, i: Uit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' @( K. b. |* R. _
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 K7 B% K, B+ n! L. T* t
) F$ w! q S" r9 N TLet me just rewrite yours:
) u" q; H# A5 z3 tIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 N' _/ `. d! i' \$ D1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!2 }6 V0 u8 c9 N/ v; [
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.: L6 s* k$ J/ ]( U
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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