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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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+ w, s- A; [# H# z9 vit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 d8 w' S) w9 f8 L! v3 geveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + R2 R \) P. f9 d; A w
6 w8 J. i# D: g3 L; x8 F5 h: f# q; C% K9 mLet me just rewrite yours:
! e5 L |% ?* O0 r2 |It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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8 |, [4 P! Y; H2 \" d1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!" O# L1 K5 H z& n' L: T7 P y
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.' B; D5 [7 R% [3 ]
G) Z7 h! `4 oThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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6 W# y! L- t; j6 HThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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5 ]5 J; y4 c/ z' j4 B# AGretz. |
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