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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:5 K- t) H* k% c1 y4 R- i3 N) e
% [7 ^8 s5 A J8 A- B: Tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 4 a# q) d% d2 y6 f4 N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : ^4 L; M' Z( X3 K' c
' D7 y2 y$ W$ ]6 j; ]: LLet me just rewrite yours:
0 i7 R, D% Y7 U! aIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* S! k& L" L% D7 [' r2 O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) g u& }5 ^2 m2 X3 q7 ]7 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.! e; n# R+ G/ F! @4 s5 W0 E! @# `
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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