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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 I# m2 n9 r$ _; t- q
' |! M& X3 w$ w. Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; ]: d3 V. A; F1 [5 @% a. i9 neveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % m0 C% s3 K! E: }# E# Q% a2 k
* E- A" o: D0 s, X$ TLet me just rewrite yours:; `$ A! K" |1 Q: @; m# X7 F+ l
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me; C8 @9 n& E# N2 v
# |: M+ E0 K L# o( k5 {7 j7 n1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!' q0 }% R, I1 N: Q$ T, |, E
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 _1 W C, A6 f5 z0 u
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