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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
3 z( o3 Q; P0 w4 o" @2 Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , G5 ?1 }; L1 C- a
, e z% T- u+ O0 ^0 I# k+ p! b) nLet me just rewrite yours:( Q& w1 v, I7 `* c7 j5 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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$ F0 e, v" ~7 T) ^- t4 g1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
1 Y9 [2 P A" L2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.9 H$ `" D; w% F, f/ `1 i- v
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.2 }' E+ E- j/ Y. Z. C4 E/ y
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