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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, @1 b8 P) Z+ G3 @
0 z# ^3 A. d- zit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & @$ R8 U. Y' Q* H, A7 B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 t6 N: a; v9 }9 L. R7 T
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Let me just rewrite yours:5 s) u" q% z, D6 G& v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, h1 r7 F' _6 E% u
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing! n$ O% A W, v' {! x/ H
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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