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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:6 A% l7 t$ a0 O: ]6 K) {% q
/ S3 V3 x' b! c6 m3 j. \it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 8 e1 B' w6 K; p2 X% S: N
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # r& R' v& L @5 _9 i
" Z& @! u0 O0 D& W9 u$ }2 l: \: FLet me just rewrite yours:* J I. J5 h% j; x; t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# P2 s8 B( _/ C, |3 m" o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* j# ]2 {& {$ e% O1 f+ Z3 n+ D2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! g% u$ G, {7 L5 u
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 S, o+ I# j: \
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., {' c# R& |; e* w/ j( `# M
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