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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:3 d/ x. @2 K+ p6 @: ?- N. J
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 1 n! f4 G# E8 o% T
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & m: H0 Z Y) T6 b7 ]' u |
: o y( `7 U6 O. w% U0 NLet me just rewrite yours: o/ U' D0 \6 O+ l9 }; A4 X
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1 l+ }6 x6 \; ~ }& p* u' x5 R1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 ` l4 ]7 ?: o$ U0 ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 h* ?1 {! m5 C1 Q- X9 C- p+ O: C
9 R, o5 x+ G1 `& w# I# C% F- WThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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