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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 5 E) j2 S$ ^/ q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : m% e. F- q: e' p
9 x3 ?+ `3 B# E5 @; CLet me just rewrite yours:5 d" ~& j4 j8 A0 q2 Z! {
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 q) ]* \ r* ~2 h2 Z1 {* A1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
( U0 Q5 x0 B( X9 \! \2 A0 A$ Y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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% Y7 a1 Q x8 ?$ d& R1 [( MThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.. A- q. |: u( V B
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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