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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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4 ^ D# X6 }' ]: |, Iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 ~/ u) G* [' g5 o% a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 C+ ?' Y: I/ U' z
/ p* ~ f, R( s, GLet me just rewrite yours:& N2 H5 ^- a' w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!4 {1 @' r5 b! y. e
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. k" ?$ I, V6 m1 W! g
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% B1 q4 A: I; z
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& L4 X- k4 ~, H
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