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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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9 j! s2 F+ C3 J2 P( T7 {: cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 k& Q/ u2 s1 q; n- k L4 H. l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ; E3 x- Q, l4 k# ?+ D
9 }- l1 z4 J, a8 ?+ q7 XLet me just rewrite yours:
5 q3 T) r/ t8 @/ e9 O/ UIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# [* U1 W- ?) ~9 q, R2 ]4 v1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
) o1 Q U, W( I1 w+ L2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ @& A* O4 N8 F
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 L4 a* g) c9 Z
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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