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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:" ^$ @: e0 E4 t {' r
& n, G7 G$ I1 Nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & m4 @* C9 O! Z4 J' X) I7 q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! B2 E! g) t6 h5 u w% b% ~ Z C( `: X& ?/ |0 Q
Let me just rewrite yours:# Z" q. R8 _5 H* h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
: U7 w3 Y0 ]" |4 X, d( J2 o2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.) C; w* J% r/ a8 j+ e8 N
7 r+ a! [. v& Z2 p% Q# QThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.( R% Y5 v/ h% K* c5 \$ q( N
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