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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:' [! c& c) H, f
8 ]4 e9 B+ t Xit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 p" o, W5 S; _2 Z) \8 ~# Beveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. % c( T0 X" X7 ^, ^
2 D) H5 C" s5 W7 X' SLet me just rewrite yours:
+ _- \7 P, o' c% e0 u. z0 O- iIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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* V2 C3 N# S5 A# C7 C* j1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
$ f c) x0 E3 p* Z7 K' Z2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.2 p3 k' x2 i7 r0 V
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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