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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 }. z/ E0 w- e; tit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
9 F7 g$ L' \' a3 d2 veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. & e0 e( g2 x: ?1 p
/ [2 }/ B: R% \; {Let me just rewrite yours:" ~* M$ {* X" J" p
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. E6 T/ ^- ^" n4 l3 k
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!6 H, D- Y4 ?4 X3 P: s- j6 z
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la." r a6 y6 p, G: i1 R% F3 L
7 a Q) Z! \7 ?There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 y6 G/ n9 o& h
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it. R8 J% s9 `. b8 l- {
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