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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
/ E# s! g4 ^4 [% F" }everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 b: K) `6 s; r
3 r& S1 k: e# c- b" q2 yLet me just rewrite yours:
3 D6 M. q) j6 n! {3 M, z oIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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: x/ q& S$ v& i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!& u) d p, d! R: V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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3 G% s) b% c' a' g$ AThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% q& C1 n# ?. _: g5 n6 k1 q
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.8 P9 m4 ?* V/ I1 L, e4 R3 j
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