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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; W$ M/ C: p( [4 `! C; M
" j/ F' C% v! n/ i, x" n3 i Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 k* |" D9 D" x: A6 q" k! X" F# l
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( k R* n7 J) b/ x# m9 X j' ^. o: U
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Let me just rewrite yours:
1 I, } ~# q7 E5 V' gIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, ~7 ]/ K$ X& X7 Z! S$ c' T5 x
8 Q4 J( Q8 ~3 X; r1 _% ^9 ~9 l2 _1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 l4 y5 D d# F8 A* W! y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.1 X9 \9 {; }* o, v# d) `% y
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.. \ V. {$ n, V8 m( g2 ^" N; @. ^ o2 M
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