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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
5 I$ x4 E# l3 r5 q' S/ }! w$ Z5 peveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! ?. ^6 B1 e3 Q( n
+ X+ |3 |+ C' ]8 H5 T( ^Let me just rewrite yours:6 [( L2 \7 ]6 a8 `/ Y3 @
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
+ B6 Z+ b" o* v% {% u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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|& ?# F9 C* l8 \$ KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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2 N8 S8 C- Z% a9 C# O3 LThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.1 n& V5 r- L& t1 A% h
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