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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 9 e" D3 q' g6 A1 z$ v N# D c6 `
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 k( o/ H, P u. |. H" U5 p- V
8 q0 W' e+ q/ ~9 O, B6 m: G3 pLet me just rewrite yours:/ R$ `: u. R! v0 p. L2 K, e7 |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me* E( E" ?1 i: r$ @) }1 ]
" |0 k8 I& y* p0 o! Y1 s1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!) T& w; R8 Y2 d$ g! v/ e3 ?, q, r
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( S+ B. i2 J1 x% h) s1 w% K) I
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.$ U6 Q; p. |, f/ x0 h' S
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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