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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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0 A6 K" I% ?$ nit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 7 ~+ V4 J% y, h. N. i' Q9 q
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 0 O% d. d2 `9 l3 F
# o3 B- I+ C8 `- m. _: ZLet me just rewrite yours:1 x' @ ]& F2 _* D7 G
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me c% q* F/ l/ D6 @" ?
" K8 i6 r8 ~7 N1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 D6 T! t ^* @. V+ \
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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! y3 d# Q7 D) lThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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$ X& `0 ~# d, j5 JThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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