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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; \. ^/ c+ P9 L) ?8 y: c2 T
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and . A, E# r5 P( g0 C" l# [/ |
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! u6 I M' Z3 l' u: ~* D) {) T$ X8 ~* C
Let me just rewrite yours:& o7 {* M8 u0 L8 N3 k# H% g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me( T K$ [6 _& Y0 D% O( ?
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
% Y5 o1 y2 G0 \7 i' x: H; W2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la./ \! b* P! G2 |+ a0 M4 L
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., g8 o3 T+ P. k7 B
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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