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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ; D1 y& y( Q- h3 }
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ( {3 r! [6 x' P# f) ~$ x5 N
! B8 B3 B8 q( y5 D$ P0 [0 zLet me just rewrite yours:3 T- W5 O# v3 q" G" a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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# X4 M4 S! p+ A$ e, r! `: O1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!5 `1 I) e0 G( z1 ~/ V' M2 l2 R* s
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.+ x% c' @* z- C! I' P
5 j) V! B {, u; ~. KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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