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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. |3 Q$ ?7 H, y: j
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
4 V8 M: U$ H0 @; B+ Xeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' C! |( d" `, d; o8 V3 u# ]
3 ~$ `3 M2 d3 }% o# z! PLet me just rewrite yours:2 A5 Y( }2 E6 q4 {
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me: A) J' I+ w7 o- h0 ^
* @& }* L. n1 ?4 {4 @( i1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
4 Z, _& N$ E2 N2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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# b- y9 U/ |, Y$ {. [- R2 QThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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2 f" U+ ?, V$ u7 N. O& ZThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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