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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. g" P8 v% T) c, e( ]7 x' p
) N) s. K7 \- Yit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 a# i& W& G6 T$ P; W
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. E4 x1 ], B# X; I8 @' i6 ^
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Let me just rewrite yours:, y1 [* M& A ?) ]( |7 g x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 B) Z& G0 U; |/ {; [% K8 @
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.1 c- B/ @0 h) p* H6 X d
; l. e# y% ]) q+ h) hThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; X. D/ [6 G+ c4 I
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Gretz. |
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