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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, i4 u/ T; g- }) n! |) Veveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. x. {# N+ C/ E g& ^1 N
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Let me just rewrite yours: d, p; F' ~5 V% `) [3 ^! r
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me# I& B$ P, V1 W
; F% z, X4 d0 Z0 V! ~. v+ |1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!: q. A- H5 z p$ d' ]$ \7 M
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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4 i9 s9 C0 r7 PThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.; W! T9 t: l, J4 M, V. T! G
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