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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:4 v8 `/ S! c/ p: {, E/ A
0 o2 N0 D7 R$ ]7 a" sit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ) `/ n/ l6 B# @1 C+ ~& c: a
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ `0 b* z0 u+ H- E. t; Z
5 E* ^2 n, ]7 _. hLet me just rewrite yours:
3 m' K3 S, a3 i7 qIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 c5 x! v2 ?$ y* l
! K- E* @! o* [% v6 P+ @1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!* P( [4 l: ]! ]5 c8 H
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 E; L/ X/ u7 D
& v/ y, \8 y5 x* ], [, A+ ?Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.3 E* f( {7 j( R1 I, z3 @2 ?
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