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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! W) Q$ F2 x" x
1 Z/ Z8 ?$ R8 P2 @, S# q( S# l4 Qit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
1 o2 J0 X1 L! Z8 h0 H/ l2 weveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 Y0 a7 ^) I- y- f2 x
/ u2 x7 @# v1 V9 ELet me just rewrite yours:7 Z6 Q$ ~. `6 K8 y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me, l: l* `2 F( b6 b
1 e) x. H* @; u' u1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
- b% w3 x, W0 K* I' ?! ~+ g" e2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 I. X/ ]# u9 v) p
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.7 K2 L+ }: c) U# s
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