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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
# I; t3 `' W {- J' [( Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. $ `, n2 w( M+ U4 C/ M
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Let me just rewrite yours:! L5 L/ ^/ y2 x/ N
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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6 P8 K f( ~9 B& F/ p1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 T, V6 k2 w, w2 ~1 S5 E# e3 V
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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1 z _2 m2 e& G6 A1 J! c) \5 N) {There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 z6 z4 R$ `" [: N- _" U. [$ Q' U
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.0 P. K2 B' I% h9 u: i
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