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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 0 o4 D% j: e3 e7 m( K
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 2 k. y6 O" f B8 D: N
% i9 t- h W5 l DLet me just rewrite yours:2 [3 e( r- L, t
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me3 o% N- E& S' d( C9 \5 b4 x! K& n) [8 h
. T$ T$ P' O+ [3 U% x1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ _: ~, F, P. q2 p. l% {8 D
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.' t2 y/ h4 k8 F: r6 w
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.% N7 R8 b$ `$ H. [5 P: O- T' o' x
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