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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:; Z6 X6 d& S& @% i
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 S6 ~/ |" B% x5 A8 }' J4 Q+ oeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 9 _- G2 i: m, y9 h: ]
; r% H7 d3 K; d s" Z" q5 o, SLet me just rewrite yours:! W1 i" N8 Y* G B( B# @6 h
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!7 i4 N4 j8 M, L( `1 ]
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. j$ k3 N. u$ e" R5 o
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& Q2 g' P$ a7 A* r- Q: J, Z
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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