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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% _: h/ I+ S% L0 o0 [
; P/ W5 g# b7 fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' V- Y2 x6 H: v" Z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ' }+ I4 }$ n$ ^' q# J
7 w" M( x; M6 j0 E/ @Let me just rewrite yours:
; V; q3 f/ K4 b* ?- A$ C* zIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 q1 M3 _% j+ J F
3 R2 x) f" W7 y" {4 c1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
9 R( A8 n5 u, x) e$ K7 y2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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