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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:! ~: r+ W, f' d6 o+ h8 u( M! m9 t i
. a! ^2 A$ [4 ]0 V! M5 F" hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
$ B6 a* p- c1 z/ B$ O# u% Qeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. , i# o' v1 }! s3 Y% O; U i8 |* {. T% A2 I
Let me just rewrite yours:
5 Y* o- Q/ n K/ k- gIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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: N& N9 ]2 z/ F+ \1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
6 Y. b. o* S; D7 i2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: E! D* ]+ _9 h
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.# ^& g& ~- N- p3 W
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