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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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5 Z: r4 ~% s+ `1 W0 b1 {& z+ Y7 Hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
: t3 N- m" F1 S: `& I0 Q) j& keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + p$ X* w/ `5 u; Q: T( m' n; n
3 q* [+ u) Y! z9 {Let me just rewrite yours:, b; [3 w M) g/ i- P2 |' w
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me6 q9 b4 y) o% C
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!/ W# R( j7 j: S" N
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.3 e$ U7 R1 J* Z: u
( d* u& r9 Q8 c/ vThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.6 ^% @" x, L* y; `, ~0 T( }
' w/ e, J; G# l9 [Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.5 h2 l# ]! A1 Z5 Q4 ]
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