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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
8 g3 K W4 w7 G, u3 Jeveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! G m6 [ X) }2 A0 C: I% H
1 V+ d4 h: k& l( x2 T1 g' M9 U9 F5 mLet me just rewrite yours:
0 }/ g# b I% `3 H+ Q& W# s$ QIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 U2 L( s- K' c2 _# K9 _/ @2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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% L5 T G" r; e' N% k7 z" OThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.& j4 ]5 l$ |6 u
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