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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:0 R+ a: t, ` Z9 b
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
* Y& e. [0 S( ?+ R/ _everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ) x1 S2 v3 `7 X
' f" d1 N& L* R aLet me just rewrite yours:# T! O" @! v. [$ ~) {2 O* M t+ U
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. m g {) {0 a8 ^* i2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.( g1 O# R& V- Y2 J7 L
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.; }8 e% u F+ V8 ~- s
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.9 B6 v; d% j [- E" K, o# g$ {$ [7 k
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