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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:, q# {& A; S( `% l
. G- w/ N* {# Z7 w: Q6 y3 x A8 bit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
, Y; Q3 R6 N1 P; k( o5 Meveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 q+ O7 z, M1 c$ u; q
8 T. D/ @- G$ uLet me just rewrite yours: ]" g& k) `( `+ z3 Q/ n: u5 Z
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me" r- z: D3 D M: U8 i7 d
0 Y: m, b/ F6 i* d1 p# w4 W3 h1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 x( P U7 V4 J* w8 k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.# O9 a3 P1 q: _; k7 |# h
$ z, N0 C3 d; B7 UThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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