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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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" i( h- _, E6 | ?it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 V9 R) o' N5 G( ]- {) n
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. h4 V; _; T0 I) F2 F0 T$ h
7 {# X2 i: {, K- X6 MLet me just rewrite yours:# N3 {4 Q5 f! ]5 o! e: ]
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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3 S8 z# T1 b3 W* q( _" x! P1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
2 Q' p, F5 s+ c2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.- W, Z5 V2 d5 t; w7 D1 b% ]0 v. V
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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. V$ |4 ?# _& j2 u0 n/ L8 oThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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