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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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* o8 D0 p: E/ G- \it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; h) S1 W8 _% reveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. ! p# o2 I2 z1 n
- M2 m2 m& c5 @Let me just rewrite yours:9 p: c, w- m% H% Q2 I. C6 X/ k7 x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ V0 q$ ~2 M. l, ^/ d
2 N7 X2 X5 z2 T u1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!3 A; d9 J0 v; f$ J5 V' V7 w% o
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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9 @$ B9 N5 j( o( E B/ @2 }There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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& V0 Z+ P( J4 `Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.+ Q; K0 W4 M" I' m7 k( s& |7 S
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