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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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8 A; F! V! x. ]0 m/ Q" x/ b1 Fit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and & W. H6 T9 p ?0 B
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 5 C+ x. o5 N' o3 l1 ]% A3 k. V! g$ I3 v2 u) R7 @; @% o/ @0 V
Let me just rewrite yours:7 @# ?2 w k0 M( l9 ^' b$ c) h* d
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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+ x/ p+ ^* @; r( M, w' t1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
# R& E, `7 f9 c% L4 [, m0 ? ^2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.& e6 T7 G& |- N) |8 ~% l( u
! a9 ~1 O, T) _/ V( C* a5 hThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.0 d- {3 N3 o: p1 p+ E7 Y. j M
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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