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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:* [$ z" d( k; c5 b" l
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ( P( x9 n4 i% A0 r" O
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. . F. f5 G4 H x
e( D: Z$ T$ KLet me just rewrite yours:6 p1 V _* ?; w+ |
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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. a0 w3 Y+ Z! w/ N" ^2 j- b( k) [1 N1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
* B2 j1 Q- k7 U2 f" O2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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5 V: N. p6 _+ C" ^There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.+ c. e! ^% n! H, Q
) R; W$ y- ]' K$ K. ]Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it., Y; N: Y& n/ u1 W, a
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