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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:. S% n0 }+ ^) g/ b! f
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
; j, K! y: _9 i* @" M9 Leveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 @) I* n6 h& t( ?; e
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Let me just rewrite yours:* c8 x' c6 D* ~* [0 o% g
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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) c! z3 I' C* ] B" f" M1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 [( r8 P( p _# O
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.% v% K: u! g" X6 g$ K0 b
0 c5 [/ c" k0 I9 y8 KThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.3 H$ d* O) \# X0 W4 Y, @7 a
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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