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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:8 h( {; ^, ^. @9 w
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and ' n( j/ r7 w0 }) z
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + l/ a) O# }. j) n7 ~8 p. W+ L' ?( q
Let me just rewrite yours:4 Q% d# S8 K) g S1 X# s
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me. { Y$ g; h" {( _, Y
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
5 g) W' i. ^! X! d0 M2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.: X5 N1 k: K/ n0 r! m# ]0 s$ x! C
! i+ p0 |3 X) M; Y/ I" q- bThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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