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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:% \$ x% r0 P0 D9 C" x
5 w- X9 C) g Y, J) Hit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
) s6 D" A) f- v2 deveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 1 t! D) D. J( |" ~. D+ y9 j9 A, X
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Let me just rewrite yours:, ^- F& ^% T! q8 Y6 K) y$ Y
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me5 }1 o: ?) {( S, J: _, y
- \* W, H" v) _1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
! g! k2 z, Q. _5 }& C) u2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.. S! g8 ?- a; R
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.% }# K4 W/ s2 N" ?* L. H
- R; u/ P, [+ sThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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