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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
! l6 t3 b# y! W( C5 ~, |; x9 L* keveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. + W1 P* {% i0 c0 d- |1 E' K
9 T4 H% J( G Y& N- GLet me just rewrite yours:, ?, {0 e. c; G/ n. E$ m: q1 a
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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( |/ h$ o5 ~# o( k1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
. b' J9 }5 g! ^4 A2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.9 |0 H. E0 i; q& n
) Y- r& A. }% {7 iThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.: ~' g/ B, i3 a3 F
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