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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: ?7 S4 D/ X1 e ]
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and * y- O# }4 q L F. _
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. # e- w8 W2 j7 Q5 b
5 ? h/ _9 R- n0 Q) yLet me just rewrite yours:
# }3 N! s8 n0 [& _/ H! fIt doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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0 @1 q6 k* K( ]# {1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!0 k4 g8 L: ^; e) z4 G' `
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! ]' T+ w( {, ^! T) @1 E1 A
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow., K4 o8 _+ Q: e/ [
. S; Z, A4 P$ h. Y6 ^5 x4 t1 MThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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