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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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$ U4 z9 s7 U8 K; @8 Q1 cit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 6 f0 w3 _5 W/ p% X
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 3 b- ]: p9 g) `$ j, m+ p- [
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Let me just rewrite yours:) w% `1 C2 V; P" u( m7 v
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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N3 _$ Y5 c+ B7 y/ o1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!! j# T2 M/ y4 h0 n) [
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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There are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.5 B- c1 ]; Y# U2 n* H
! O* T4 |: u, I8 h/ N6 hThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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