wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:3 a, e( k: O8 T6 e: |6 O
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦! T9 Q' d4 y5 L  h9 ?
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結局我覺得唔係咁好

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:
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hi~tt
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦6 I1 N& L8 @1 l9 B& m- n

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你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:
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呢度有

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篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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我又閃.......
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[ Last edited by roykenroy on 2005-7-22 at 05:36 PM ]

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:
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原著係呢度

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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~
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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^9 b5 k# z) {  t$ G8 h

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:9 i# @& c* ~" h  y7 W+ y+ q
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我?
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:$ u- l- C+ J/ n  \( n' J
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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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