wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:20 PM:
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個篇戰魂我睇完啦8 H' D4 O# d, J: q% C! |

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twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:24 PM:" ]- L, H. u7 o- _  `  M6 Z
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hi~tt
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我果度冇咗大結局~~0 Y% b) n! S& e# }' }
你可以俾我ma??

wanmankit

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呢度有

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:28 PM:
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thx~~
" K- {0 Q' {9 e7 {, Y3 o9 [篇野係咪真係尚楠楠寫ga??

wanmankit

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twh1110

Originally posted by roykenroy at 2005-7-22 05:31 PM:
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我又閃.......
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5 ?8 L& K* w1 {[ Last edited by roykenroy on 2005-7-22 at 05:36 PM ]

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又話等我番黎既...............

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:36 PM:( \! H) `* S) [9 v+ B  B. T$ L+ L. b
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原著係呢度

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你做緊咩??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:45 PM:
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e排唔見你既~
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我?
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

twh1110

Originally posted by wanmankit at 2005-7-22 07:47 PM:
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近排咪日睇夜睇呢部小說囉^^
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tt我想問下點描寫d人物先可以神似d

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好似戰魂咁??

wanmankit

Originally posted by twh1110 at 2005-7-22 07:50 PM:) f( a# H- S5 i
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睇下你想描寫咩人???
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